278 Reviews Found

Review #26, by choking anon The Championship

5th May 2014:
I think i nearly choked on the spaghetti i was easting when i saw that you updated. It was a wonderfully run story and i enjoyed it. The ending seems a bit rushed but it's cleaned well. Im a sap so hoping for an epilouge haha. I did actually have a choking fit when I realized it's the end hahaha good job :) *applause* 🙌💋

Author's Response: Thats when you know its a good story... you choke on spaghetti. I do feel like I put the end in a little soon, but it just all pulled together a little too well not to end it now. DON'T WORRY THERE WILL BE A SEQUEL! You don't have to ask for an epilogue ;D

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Review #27, by Spyci The Championship

3rd May 2014:
N'aw I love it. I really really do. I'm grinning like an idiot.

Author's Response: I'm glad you are! That's how every story is supposed to end ;)

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Review #28, by macpp The Championship

3rd May 2014:
Fabby story!! Loved it! can't wait for the sequel now!

Author's Response: :D I'm glad you liked it! Sequel is in the making and I cannot wait to put it up!

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Review #29, by Lilli_patronus The Championship

3rd May 2014:
dfsjhbdglhjf keyboard spaz. this is so great, you have no idea how long I have spent obsessing over this story and when this chapter would come. just great. thanks so much, and please update soon!

Author's Response: Well, that was the last chapter, so there won't be updating on this story. However, there will be a sequel, but I want to get more involved in my other stories first before I throw the sequel into the ring.

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Review #30, by Potter.Jacobs.Forever The Championship

2nd May 2014:
Yay! I Love sequels!

Author's Response: Me too!! :D

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Review #31, by AlexFan More Than One Shock

13th March 2014:
When I started reading this chapter the very last thing that I had expected was to have the insane urge to put my fist through a wall and rip off Tyler Gates' head. Go all French Revolution on him.

I can't believe that piece of slime would actually bribe someone to lie to his exgirlfriend just so that she wouldn't play because he felt that she didn't deserve it. If Tyler was a real person, I can tell you that I would probably be coming up with some attack plan if I ever ran into him. Lucky for him that he's not real.

I thought I was going to be torn apart after this chapter because I thought this entire baby business would be solved throughout the story and such so I was quite surprised to find out that Healer Wellins confessed so quickly. I don't even want to know what Rose said to him to get him to fess up so quickly.

I felt a little bit confused at times because I didn't know whose point of view I was reading from until I got some information from the surroundings but once I caught on I was sucked into the chapter again.

I did not see this angle coming in terms of the baby, that's for sure. I felt so accomplished when I thought that I had guessed right last chapter but that feeling changed to shock when you dropped the bomb on us readers.

I am so excited to see what happens the next chapter and everyone's reactions!

Author's Response: Tyler Gate is a slimy, no-good man. I wasn't too surprised when the idea came to my head. Rose is scary... I wouldn't really want to know what exactly she said to Healer Wellins. I didn't intend to confuse you so much, I do apologize for that. The idea was to put a little bit of confusion in until you got a little bit more into that section of the story.

Everyone was so upset with the baby scare that I was glad I didn't decide to keep that in the picture. :)

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Review #32, by KATE More Than One Shock

4th March 2014:

Author's Response: Ahhh Kate I think Imay just have you listen to you

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Review #33, by newgenerationlover Gigi Jacobs-- NOT Genevieve

24th February 2014:
Hi, so this isn't really a review about your story (despite the fact that I really do love it). I just wanted to tell you that I have this story written about a member of HPFF who meets James Potter and so on. One of the parts of the story is that my character, G, reads and obsesses over the website and I occasionally pop in a title or two to my story of other stories that I really love on this site. One of them is your story. And I usually don't do this to all authors since I just mention the titles and such, but for yours I added a couple paragraphs so then my character could comment about her feelings as to what was happening. I gave full credit to you in my story and, despite the fact that I don't have many readers yet, it still may send some readers your way. However, if you want me to take either just the excerpt or even the mention of your story down I can. Either reply here or write a review there. The excerpt is in the third chapter of my story A Not So Normal Life (After All).

Just let me know whether or not it is ok :)


Author's Response: So I was so flattered by this that I went and read what you wrote and nearly cried when I saw it. To see your work liked so much by others that it makes it into their own work is something that you can only dream of. It may be the child in my belly, but I don't even know how ecstatic I was upon reading that. That being said, it is PERFECTLY fine that it is in your story :)

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Review #34, by JT4HP More Than One Shock

23rd February 2014:
WOW. Just WOW.

This was a really crazy chapter. And yeah, that makes a lot more sense. I'm so glad she is not actually preggers.


You've definitely left it for an I-can't-freakin'-wait-for-the-next-chapter kind of ending. Not saying I hate it. Definitely just can't freakin' wait for the next chapter. I hope she makes it in ime for the game. PLEASE LET HER MAKE IT IN TIME.

Anyway, It was really great. So glad she is not preggers. I know I've already said that, but I feel like it should be stated again.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!! Will she or won't she make it ?? BAH BAH BAHHH. :) I'm glad she's not preggers too. Would ruin everything!

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Review #35, by livelaughlovetoread More Than One Shock

22nd February 2014:
I love this story! I read the last chapter and was wondering what was going to happen, and now I know! That was really clever. One thing I would suggest is to tell us what prov it is from. I could not tell at points who it was until I got down further. Great work, I can not wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you love the story! It took a lot of thinking to come up with a good final BAM. I'm glad I achieved it :).

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Review #36, by swimmer More Than One Shock

22nd February 2014:
Yes! I was so happy that she wasnt pregnant that I literally fist pumped the air haha. This story is amazing and a sequel would be great! Please update soon!!! And james and Gigi need to be together, Gigi just needs to get over her fears and Tyler

Author's Response: Fist pump!! Yay! I'm glad you think a sequel is in the mix. I have a ton of ideas :).

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Review #37, by Lilli_patronus More Than One Shock

21st February 2014:
wow. great job, I just love this! Im so glad that shes not pregnant!!

Author's Response: Yay thank you darling! I'm glad she's not pregnant too :)

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Review #38, by Ashley Lovegood More Than One Shock

20th February 2014:
Yes sequel please! I love the story! Update quick please!

Author's Response: yay sequel! I completely agree. All ready have a ton of ideas :)

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Review #39, by HPManiacs More Than One Shock

20th February 2014:
Wow didn't see that coming!!! I hate Tyler! He's such a jerk!! But yay Gigi can play!!! And she loves James!!! Great chapter! Pretty please please please update soon!!

Author's Response: That was the whole point! I didn't want anyone to see it coming, lovie. :)

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Review #40, by helpwillalwaysbegiven More Than One Shock

20th February 2014:

Author's Response: Hahahah I'm glad she's not pregnant too! It'll teach her a very good lesson, though ;). Who says life can be perfect though? *hint hint*

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Review #41, by newgenerationlover More Than One Shock

20th February 2014:
A definite yes to the sequel!! I absolutely love this story!! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks darling! I'm glad you liked it!! And the story of course.

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Review #42, by Sam More Than One Shock

20th February 2014:
Love love love this story. Can't wait for more. I definitely vote yes for a sequel!! Update soon!

Author's Response: Yay sequel!! I really think I'm going to. I already have a million ideas. :).

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Review #43, by Spyci More Than One Shock

20th February 2014:

Author's Response: Sorry sorry! Don't hurt mee! I love you!!!

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Review #44, by chocolateteacups More Than One Shock

20th February 2014:
Tyler. Gates.
Don't even get me started.
His behaviour is abhorrent. I want Gigi to sue him for everything he has and for him to lose his career. He could have ruined everything. Gigi should sue Sally too. And the hospital. I hope she ends up rolling in Galleons.
Okay, so true story, this cliffhanger you set up was brilliant. I was complaining to all my friends all week about the fanfiction I read that was perfect but now everything was ruined and it was breaking my heart. I've been checking up every day to see if you updated. You sure know how to keep your readers on the edge of their seats.
The change of perspectives was brilliant - you handled it well and it was surprisingly not disjointed at all, so kudos is in order. I love your writing style and your characters, it's easy to read and engaging at the same time.
I just hope James can forgive her. They really need each other.

Author's Response: We should probably just kill Gates. Or have James kill him during the championship game. That's an idea, right? Sally can die as well.

Sorry, I'm rather violent feeling. Must be PMS.

I'm so glad you stayed with it with the changing of the point of views! I really wanted to do it and finally was able to do it :). James and Gigi need to be lovers!


Oh wait.. thats me. :/

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Review #45, by chocolateteacups A Sick Gigi

10th February 2014:
I genuinely feel sick at the idea of Gigi's dreams going down the toilet, that's how invested I am at the moment. I feel like her having a baby with James wouldn't just take her out for a year, it would affect both of there Quidditch careers for good with touring and everything. Urgh. I'm so sad. I love your story and absolutely cannot wait for you to update, I'm on the edge of my seat. You write wonderfully. (Also a pregnant Gigi would be scary hormonal!) Great work :)

Author's Response: I know, we all get so connected to Gigi and then to watch her not be able to play... ripped my heart out to write that. I'm so glad you enjoy my writing. You're such a sweetie.

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Review #46, by pookielow A Sick Gigi

25th January 2014:
OMG is she pregnant. Please don't make her pregnant. Pregnancy stories are kinda bleh. AHHH update soon please!!

Author's Response: Well jeeze, why do you all doubt me so much?

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Review #47, by M_K A Sick Gigi

22nd January 2014:
She's pregnant, isn't she?? I need another chapter ASAP.
I love your story. I always get so into it. Please update soon!
Love, M.K

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking everything, M.K! Keep reading, doll.

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Review #48, by Daniellle A Sick Gigi

15th January 2014:
Ohmygawd she's PREGNANT! What else can it be? Please don't let her be pregnant!! Her relationship with james shouldn't be centered around a baby. And becoming pregnant in a broom closet. Really!? If you're going to make her pregnant please do it in a classier way.

Author's Response: Her relationship with James is already complicated. Lol. Has Gigi ever been classy? Let's be real.

Read on, my dear ;)

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Review #49, by Evelynn Rose A Sick Gigi

9th January 2014:
Sh*t she's pregnant!?! When will she and James get back together?! This uncertainty is killing me, Update ASAP!

Author's Response: James/Gigi. Always a mystery.

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Review #50, by JT4HP A Sick Gigi

9th January 2014:
You're kidding me. She is not preggers. OH MY GOSH IF SHE IS I'LL LOSE IT.

Her dreams out the window. Everything is already so effed up with her and James. UGH.

But it was a goood chappter. I'm glad James was all "you need to decide" because she does!

Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Ahh people and their pregnant assumptions. I love it, but I also hate it. Well... read on, darling ;)

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