Mischief, my dear, you have written yet another awesome chapter! :)

OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD! OH MY GOD!
Naughty, naughty Hermione, making up those lies to get Draco mad and jealous. But it's so funny too.

I do, though, completely agree with Ron's speech. Draco needs to grow some balls, and either tell Giiny and his father to fuck off, or leave Hermione alone.

Speaking of Ginny, what the bloody hell was 'As many kids as Draco's fther tells me to have'? WTF!! If I was Draco I'd be saying stufff I'm not so sure I'd regret.

And lastly Blaise. I have no idea what to think of him. It was sweet of him to be nice to kids, but ten he completely killed off whatever good side to him he had by saying that comment. I mean he like threw his good side off of the Effile Tower head first! :

Now could you please please update Fallin'? I'm still havig nightmare where Scorpius is falling (Omg, is that why you called it Fallin'?) They are so scary! So please? *gives puppy eyes*

S2,

Gin-gin

Author's Response: Gin-gin!! :D Gahh thank you so much dear! :)

Hahaha right?! Oh gosh I love her... so much. I think it's the Gryffindor in her, slight hint of Slytherin ;P

I agree with Ron as well... Draco is being a prick about the whole thing. If he loved her as he said than he should have no problem leaving Ginny... His mind just isn't in the right place, especially with his father returning..

I hate Ginny. With a passion. At least in this story... There's just something about her that absolutely pisses me off. To no end... Had I been Draco I would have most definitely said something incredibly rude...

haha right you want to love him then he makes some comment and you have absolutely no idea what to think anymore... it's one of those "now what" moments..

Hmm my dear, you may want to check my page tomorrow. :P

You know, it kind of ended up being a double meaning. Them falling for each other, a seeming "forbidden" though not so forbidden romance, and Scorp's fall just added to it. :P

You are incredible and I absolutely love you. :)

S2 S2 S2

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OMG! i love it! i love the way you took the caracter and kind of made them your own but they are the same person at the same time. that doesnt make any sense. well anyway, hermione call herself a bitch and malfoy is being nice. what is going to happen next?

Author's Response: Why thank you!! :D I didn't want to keep them completely like their characters. I wanted to put a little spin on them. I guess you'll have to wait and see. :P I'm glad that it's good enough for you to keep reading. That makes me quite happy. I hope you continue to read. Thanks for the review. :)
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so i was waiting of you to upload on "The Beginning" and it was talking a while but then i realised that you have 5 other stories that i can read. i chose this one first and let me say that i love it! i think it is so cool how you summarized all that has happened in harry potter in just a few short words. if i had to summaries, it would have taken 30 whole chapters. i like how harry dies and i am eager to know what happens to hermione after she returns to hogwarts. DRAMIONIE ALL THE WAY! yay! keep uploading! i love realing ur work.

Author's Response: Aww familiar user names never fail to make me happy. I can't thank you enough for going to read some of my other works. I apologize in advance for the lack of updates wtih The begining, but I assure you they are coming.
I'm so glad that you're enjoing this story so far.. I actually really enjoy writing IT so I always hope people enjoy reading it. Your reviews never fail to make me happy, so thank you. :)
Until next time,
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The story is really coming along well!! This chapter was really good not much to say, buy here are my notes: Ummm the only thing I have is that I need to see the character of Draco's parents more, but that's it! I'll edit ur last chapter so yeah!! Good luck with the rest!! See ya Bella!

Author's Response: Why thank you miss Luna!! :) Hmm alright, I shall do more of that!! :D Yay, why thank you dear!!
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I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! ^_^

The scene when they play in the rain and hen start to have a sexaay scene and then they're kissing at the tent, it kind of reminded me of the Notebook. And kissing in the rain is so romantic!! :) Please excuse me. Remeber I'm a sucker for romantic moments between my favorite couple!

But then, I HATE this chapter. What Lucius says, I have a feeling Draco will obey, and that is something I really DON'T want him to do, but I... oh why did Lucy (Lucius.. You'd have to read Above the Clouds by cathyyy to understand) have to ruin everything!???

LOVED IT, LOVED IT! GURL YOU'RE AMAZING!

post soon, S2,

Gin-gin

Author's Response: Why thank you my dear!! :D

Haha yeah it kind of does actually. I love that movie. xD Gahh. Right?! I always love romantic rainy scenes. *sigh* there's just something about the rain... It's okay, I am as well. :D

Urgh... Stupid Lucius. Why must he be so stupid?! Bloody git. Because he's controlling, and he doesn't care what his son wants, he only cares about purity of blood and blah blah blah..

THANK YOU!!! YOU'RE AMAZING-ER! :P

I shall. S2
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Well. I'm definitely excited to see where your story goes, missy. :) I'm sorry to say that it's not one of the absolute best Dramiones out there, but there's definitely an originality to it that keeps me reading. :D

I'm keeping tabs on this story! And my advice? I guess...more sophisticated language, more detailed descriptions, less dialogue in some situations? And I guess the story should be a bit less carefree, and they shouldn't be accepting Draco's adultery so easily, even if they do love each other.

I do love Ron in this story though, he's so sweet and silly, just like in the books. :) Can't wait to see more of everyone.

Author's Response: Why thank you dear! I'm glad that you're excited. Oh believe me, I know that haha and I'm glad you think it's original enough to keep reading. :)

Aww I'm so glad to hear that! Yeah reading back through it I realize it's rather dull and dry in some parts. Definitely need to work on expanding my vocabulary when writing. Point taken. :P Haha I shall work on that.

Why thank you! He's definitely one of my favorite characters to write. He's such a caring, goofy, and laid back character. I absolutely love him.

Thank you, again, for reviewing these chapters and being completely honest with me. It really is appreciated and it's reviews like yours that allow me to improve. I hope you continue to read and review, it would mean a lot.

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The tension of this story is definitely getting to my head. XD Their relationship is clearly a complete mess right now, and it won't be long before Ginny's suspicious.

But one thing. I don't think Draco cries that easily, he's always the one to remain calm and cover up his emotions. I don't think even a mindset change could change that aspect of his personality. If he cried, it would have to be a REALLY major moment in their relationship...

I can understand that he really wants to chase her, after what happened when they were Heads...my heart breaks for them. :'(

As always, I'm completely ready for the next chapter, can't wait to read it!

Author's Response: Haha uh oh. Hopefully no permanent damage. xD I know right?! Poor kids... Mwuahaha oh how I can't wait to get further into this story...

Gah. I know... I know... and I've had people tell me that previously. I definitely need to go back and revise some things because the more I read back the more I realize how right you guys are..

*sigh* I know... but stupid Ginny comes along and ruins everything. I love her to death, but not in this story...

Why thank you dear! You are quite wonderful, I can't thank you enough for your reviews. :)

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Wow...well I think you could have slowed down the sex part a bit, I know it's uncomfortable to write, but speeding it makes it lose its significance as a turning point in the story...

The flashbacks are killing me. Ginny just went and ruined everything for them...sigh. Now it's going to be so hard for them to get together again...

I can't...time for the next chapter. By the way, I absolutely love Draco's POV. It completes me. ;)

Author's Response: I'm sorry. :P haha it's the first time I've written something like that, so I apologize. Haha definitely something I need to work on..

Grr I know... Stupid Ginny. She angers me sometimes, especially this Ginny. xD

Yay! I love his POV as well. There's just something about it.. I love him. :P

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Oh my. :')

I though you were going to spend more time on the relationship, but apparently not. It's okay with me though. This chapter completely made up for it. No doubt.

When she let that slip...I can imagine his panicked reaction. I can't even...talk correctly. No words. THE EMOTION. I need more. Now. D:

Author's Response: I know. :P I didn't wanna get too sappy and too into little details, the whole story kind of skips around but I already know exactly where it's headed and where this is going. xD

Goodness I know. This is why drinking is bad. ;P *sigh* I love these 2 together.. It's one of those stories you wish you could just go back in time and fix so they were happy.

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Here I am!

I really liked the summary for this story, it's intriguing and I can't wait to see it happen. :)

I love how friendly Draco and Hermione are to each other right now, but I find them to be quite OOC. Draco's not one to give up his pride easily, and Hermione isn't one to admit to falling in love so easily. I think it would actually take longer for them to get to this point, even if Draco wanted to change.

I know that this is the most challenging part of writing a Dramione, so don't feel too bad. Getting the to real relationship is always impossible to get perfect. :) So excited for more!

Author's Response: Why hello there! :)

Why thank you. :D I'm glad that it intrigued you enough to make you want to read my story. I actually don't really fancy my summaries. :P

Yeah, I know they aren't exactly like the characters we know and love, but sadly, I need to do a little tweaking. :/

They can be a challenge, that's for sure and that's why I figured I'd write one and see where that gets me before starting another. :P

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story and for being critical and telling me what you like and dislike, it's exactly what I need and it's highly appreciated. :)

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Wow! Two chapters in this too! I feel so lucky!!

Ron found out! Ooh, and even more intersting is that he wants Hermione to snatch up Draco from his own sister! Something must have happened for him to want that.

Ginny is stuid. No. She is worse than Crabbe and Goyle seperated!

HOW CAN SHE NOT TELL HER BFF IS IN LOVE!

Why can't she just die?

OOH, they get to spend the weekend togther! :D Sounds like fun. Hermions is so lucky.

And in response to your PSS: I would love to. But I've never heard of Formspring before. What is it?

And I think i would be in Slytherin because Quizilla told me. That could have been becae they asedmy what my fav. House was though...
Now i get to read another chapter, yay!

Gin-gin

Author's Response: Hehe right?! I was hoping you would come on after I got a couple of each up so I could hopefully make your day a little bit. xD

Lol I know. I love that kid to death. He is one of my favorite characters to write, that's for sure.. It's just the way Ginny's acted towards everyone since the war. He knows Hermione is more deserving? I suppose.

I know she is... I kind of hate her in this story..

Lol because that would be a little cruel. :P

Copy and paste the link on my page into your browser. Then sign up. (should be towards the top?) You just need an email and password. Then if it takes you away from that page, go back by either recopying it or whatever means you feel like. Then you can type in a question on my page. It just allows for all you guys to be able to communicate with me. :)

Ahh okay. I have a really good quiz for you to take if you want it. :D
Woo!! :)

S2 S2
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I liked it alot! I hate Draco's father though! I love Narsissa! She's so sweet! It was so sweet their little camping trip!:)
Thanks you so mmuch for the fast update!
Update again soon!
-Brooke

Author's Response: Why thank you!!! Haha yeah I hated him as well... He made me so upset!! Gahh. I love Narcissa. I kind of always have. She never wanted to follow Voldemort, it was just expected. Everything she did, she did for her family. You are very welcome! More to come. :) Thank you for reading and reviewing yet again!! It means a lot to me.
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I kinda feel bad for Ginny, but not really. Actually no i don't because Hermione and Draco are meant to be in this story i mean...Haha. I love Ron's Character he is so nice!
Thank you for the update! I'm off to read the next chapter!
-Brooke

Author's Response: Hahah well good. ;) gahhh right?! They need to be together but we shall se!! :D :D Gah I love him as well. So freaking adorable. And just a good friend in general. :)
You are quite welcome! yay!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.It means a lot to me. :)
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I will be restless 'til I know what Draco and Hermione decide to do! It may only be fiction; but I'll always root for true love whatever! I am hoping for the fairytale ending, so it will be fun to find out what you have in store for them. You're already on my Google page so I'll be looking out for your next update. Ciao for now!

Author's Response: Haha I'm glad that you're so into it that you are that into what happens with them. :) I always do as well whenever I read stories. Aww goodness, I can't tell you how amazing and happy that makes me. You're amazing! Thank you for reading and reviewing, yet again. You rock! :)
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I apologize for being too sneaky to review last night; especially as I like your depiction of Ron! I used to be a Ron basher myself; but that's so old now! Anyways I love your story to bits [says she in her best grovel]; so here's hoping I win the race. Seriously your story rocks, which only makes the lack of reviews worse. Think I'll shut up before you drop off the universe due to boredom!

Author's Response: Haha it's okay, the fact that you're coming back and reviewing now makes up for it. You rock!! Aww I know I used to be the same way, which is why I made sure he was a good character in this story... I absolutely love him. Aww goodness, you sure know how to flatter a girl. I'm so glad that you enjoy my story, it really does mean a lot. Reviews never bore me, in fact, they make me quite happy and keep me highly amused. Thank you for reviewing. :) It truly means a lot.
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I LOVED IT! PLEASE CONTINUE!!! :D

Author's Response: Why thank you!!! :D I'm glad that you enjoyed it!! I shall most definitely continue, don't worry. :)
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I really really like this story! Even though it's like "Something borrowed", it's still yours and it's amazing! I can't wait to see what happens when they stay together for that weekend!!
PLEASE update SOON!!:)
-Brooke

Author's Response: Aww why thank you!! :D I'm glad that you don't think it's too similar. There are parts that I've twisted to be my own but I like the overall conversations and storyline so some will be quite similar obviously. :P Anyways, thank you for yet another lovely review. They mean a lot to me. :) I shall update soon!! I actually just did. xD
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Amazing! I love it!!! Can't wait till the new chapter comes out, I'll be checking every day :) Well done!

Author's Response: Why thank you!! It shall be fairly soon, I'm going to be working on all my stories now. :) Thank you so much for yet another flattering review. I'm glad that you check up on my stories, it makes me happy. :)
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excited to see where this goes!! It's coming along great! Keep writing love S2 hahaha I adopted your heart

Bella Bug

Author's Response: Yay! Now read the other story! S2!!! GAHH!! I shall definitely continue to write of course. :P
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Draco is a wimp in this story haha ok and Ron's "amazing" idea...not so amazing I almost died laughing!

I wish Ginny wasn't such a buttface in this story it makes me sad she's so demanding and it sucks :P

The story is coming along magnificantly and I love you hahaha

*Heart*
Bella Bug

Author's Response: Haha it was cute. ;P At least he uh attempted? lol love him to death but that boy isn't too smart...
I know I know. But 'tis necessary.. *sigh* All because Harry died..
Woo! I'm glad you think so! Thank you love! S2
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Honey back away from movie stories! I'm not going to lie it's amazing but you need to express your own individuality!

Write your story woman *heart*

Bella Bug

Author's Response: Blahh I told you, this was my first movie story. :P And as I said, it's my way of practicing my writing. I'm more focused on my other stories now anyways. :P Just read! :) S2
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Is this another loosly based movie story??? lol Oh love bug you have an amazing creative head! Lean away from movie covered stories and make them your own because they're awesome! Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

*heart*

Bella Bug

Author's Response: Maybe :P haha this was actually the first movie based story I did.. I know that I can come up with my own but I want to get some experience with the writing part first. Then I'll start working on my original stories. I mean 3 of my stories are original. xD Woo! Thanks for the review love. S2
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This is a much better chapter :D the only thing I have to say is forgiveness is hard to comby escpecially after seven years of hurt and pain on Hermione's part Draco needed to work a little harder but still fantastic :D

*heart*

Bella Bug

Author's Response: Why thank you dear!! :) Yeah I know it's hard to come by. In normal circumstances she would have been a lot tougher to get forgiveness from. After everything that happened though, she wants nothing more than to just put everything behind her. Thank you thank you thank you. :) S2
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Interesting twist I like it although the total change of pace is a little confusing...Try and go just a tad bit more in detail for clarification other than that it's a good build up a little short but only being your second chapter it's really good *heart*

Bella Bug

Author's Response: Why thank you dear. xD Hmm yeah I know, wasn't the greatest chapter, that's for sure. Glad it's alright so far though. :P
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It's good Harry :( why did you kill Harry!? Gah

Ok it was good! and I can't wait to see where you go with this!!!

Bella Bug

Author's Response: I know :( I had to.. Otherwise it just wouldn't work out the right way. Sadly... *sigh*
Thank you!! :) Glad you thought so. :P
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