I can't ait to read the next chapter so i will continue an i'll wirght a longer reviwe when i finished them all ;)Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, even though it's the same review lots of times times, so I'll post the same response. But I appreciate all the support. Report Review
hey :) i love this story and i really feel like i can relate to it because i my self is a dancer, and yes i'm revinwing this and the chapter in one ;) anywho, i love the story, and i love tha cheesynes in this chapter, because it really shows the relationship between them. and i really love the little romance thing you have going on between lily and lysander:) keep on the good work and i'll read the rest of the chapters as well !Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, even though it's the same review lots of times times, so I'll post the same response. But I appreciate all the support. Report Review
This is really adorable. Please update soon :)Author's Response: Thanks! I'm trying to update. I'm having a bit of writers block Report Review
Yet another excellent chapter. I love the way you write their little romantic moments. Makes a person feel all ":3" inside.Author's Response: Aww thanks. I'm a sucker for romance, and since I'm boyfriendless at the moment, I let it all out here xD Report Review
Since you mentioned it: it's spelled Voila! (Pronounced. V-wah-lah!)Author's Response: Thankyouthankyouthankyou
Chu is awesome. It was killing me. Report Review
love it please upload another soonAuthor's Response: I'll upload a new chapter as soon as possible. Hopefully on the 20th Report Review
Thank you so much! They're finally together! I LOVE YOU! I'm hyper! I'm happy! I need to celebrate! I was right! I am using to many exlamation points!Author's Response: Exclamation points are the chiz. Glad you love me. xD Report Review
You're evil. I don't know who saw Lily dancing. I'm betting it's Ly though. That would be awesome. He'd finally know her biggest secret. So you better update soon or else I'm sending my pack of flying monkeys on you.Author's Response: Oooh, flying monkeys. I mean...ahh! Flying monkeys! Report Review
That was amazing. CLIFFHANGER! 10/10Author's Response: Thanks!
Ah cliffhangers. Beautiful, aren't they? Report Review
update, update, update!
Oh and great job 10/10Author's Response: Updating, updating, updating now! Report Review
What's in THE chapter? Do Lily and Lyscander kiss again in THE chapter? I need to know!Author's Response: I wish I could tell you. Luckily though, I found the notebook. So THE chapter will go on! Report Review
Yet another glorious chapter that diserves a gold medal and a round of applause.
Update soon please.Author's Response: Thank you *bows*
Putting in the new chapter any minutes Report Review
6 days since you last updated. tomorrow it will be 7 days, don't make it 8!
Love the chapter by the way!Author's Response: Liffe got in my way. I'll work my hardest to get a chapter up today! Report Review
That was so cool!
Please update fast, this is a really nice fanfiction, I dance ballet and I love it.
Update! Update! Update!
10/10Author's Response: I'm getting it out there as fast as I can. Thanks for commenting and I'm glad you're like it so much Report Review
Yet another well written chapter. I really enjoy how you balance Lily's various relationships without making it all seem muddled and confusing. Looking forward to see where you take Lily from here (:Author's Response: You're such a dork Anthony. Thanks for commenting :p Report Review
Great chapter, but please update soon! I cannot wait to see what is coming up next!
Imperio I command you to update
Pretty please?Author's Response: The next chapter is in the quere. I'm writing as fast as I can I swear! Report Review
I love this chapter so much. I think you are doing a great job with it. I thought i might give you a suggestion on her dancing. When I dance (yes i am a dancer), I use what is happening in my life to make it seem more believable. Weather it is lyrical where the dance style is depressing and sad, i use sad moments in my life, or if it is a happy song, you dance for the people that make you happy. I think if you make Lilly relate her real life to her dance then it might be more believable on why she loves it so much and why she is good at it.
This is my favorite story so farAuthor's Response: This is such a huge compliment. Thank you so much. Thanks for the dance advice, it's really helpful since I'm not actually a dancer.
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Great job! I think Lily and Harry's relationship is adorable and I'm glad that Harry is such a supportive father :) I kind of wish that Ginny would be more understanding of Lily, and that she doesn't want to be some fancy smancy auror..
~SAuthor's Response: I always pictured Harry as the best father ever. He's based off my dad mostly.
I needed a bad guy, and Ginny was pretty much perfect. She really does want what's best for Lily, and she doesnt think she can make a career out of dancing.
She'll come to her senses...I hope :) Report Review
I am glad that Harry found out about Julliard, but I still can't wait until Ginny finds out! Great job with the chapter by the way.Author's Response: I can't wait till Ginny finds out either; that's going to be fun to write.
Thanks for the review Report Review
Yes! I've been waiting for a kiss since chapter seven! Not to romantic, but hey,it works. I'm so happy!Author's Response: So have I lol. No romantic kisses...yet. Hang in there :) Report Review
Once again,totally awesome.Author's Response: I REALLY hope that was an AVPM reference :) I love writing this story, so totally awesome is what I was going for. Thanks! Report Review
great chapter, but she has to dance somewhere... *cough cough* room of requirement *cough*Author's Response: That was my original plan, but it's a little obvious don't you think? Thanks for the review, I'm glad your liking it. Report Review
Great job! I love how far Lysander and Lily's relationship is coming along. I think Lily is adorable :)
~SAuthor's Response: There aren't enough words to describe how much I love Lily. She's so much fun to write. I'm glad you liked the chapter; it's my favorite so far. Report Review
this is such a good story. Actually I myself am a dancer and it is also my passion. I love how you have put my two favorite things in one. PLEASE update soon. Can't wait!Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you're liking it so much. The next chapter is in the quere! Report Review
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