{reviewid: 2716781, reviewer: 'Rastelle%20Potter'}
7th July 2012:
Dear DahliasQuill,
when reading this chapter, I finnally understood what kind of style you are aiming towards in your book. I was really glad to finnally know exactly who is hermione's husband. I am also really glad that Ron has finally bonded with the baby.
Your story is beginning to fall into place and is really, really terrific! I'm glad that you used my peice of advice that you should use a bit more description. I really love the detail in Titus's room.
I do hope that there are more chapters like this one!!!
Yours sincerally,
-Rastelle Potter
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful piece of advice. It truly did add depth to my story. I'm glad that you are enjoying my story.
Thank you for the wonderful review.
-DahliasQuill
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{reviewid: 2713829, reviewer: 'Bartimus'}
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27th June 2012:
It's nice to see Percy back as part of the family. But what I really want to now is, who is the daddy?
Author's Response: Keep reading to find out:)
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{reviewid: 2713177, reviewer: 'clairevampiress'}
26th June 2012:
Sad but sweet. Hopfuly things will get better for hermione.
Author's Response: Keep reading and find out:)
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{reviewid: 2712751, reviewer: 'Jamie'}
25th June 2012:
I loved the detail you used to describe Titus's room. My suspicions were finally confirmed, Charlie was the only logical Weasley left for Hermione to marry, but with your twists and turns I didn't set my mind completely to that thought process. Cannot wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: New chapters are up. I am so glad you enjoyed my story!
-DahliasQuill
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{reviewid: 2712470, reviewer: 'JennaLee1684'}
24th June 2012:
Love love love it!!! Please continue as I want to see how it ends!!
Author's Response: New chapters are up:)
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{reviewid: 2711607, reviewer: 'Martin'}
22nd June 2012:
This seems like the beginning of a very interesting story.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2711594, reviewer: 'Abigaile'}
22nd June 2012:
I absolutely must must must have more!! Update soon:)
Author's Response: Keep reading:) new chapters are up!
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{reviewid: 2711593, reviewer: 'Abigaile'}
22nd June 2012:
Intense chapter! I absolutely love the intimacy.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2711592, reviewer: 'Abogaile'}
22nd June 2012:
Aww! Poor Luna! That breaks my heart. I love her.
Author's Response: I do too:)
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{reviewid: 2711591, reviewer: 'Abilgaile'}
22nd June 2012:
That's pretty deep. I can't believe fleur woul do that! Okay, so is hermione married to Charlie? Must know!
Author's Response: You just have to keep reading.
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{reviewid: 2711590, reviewer: 'Abigaile'}
22nd June 2012:
This makes me like Ron even less!
Author's Response: I'm sorry :(
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{reviewid: 2711588, reviewer: 'Abigaile'}
22nd June 2012:
This story is so interesting. And I love your chapter images:)
Neville and lavender? How strange
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2711585, reviewer: 'Abigaile'}
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22nd June 2012:
This story is amazing!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 2711582, reviewer: 'Abigaile'}
22nd June 2012:
WOW!:) I have fallen in love already!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like
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{reviewid: 2707606, reviewer: 'KxxDxx'}
12th June 2012:
Oh my, I am litually in tears :'( this is so sad
Well written x post soon x
Author's Response: Aw! I am truly sorry for making you cry seeing as it was not my intention for this chapter. But thank you.
Keep reading!:)
-DahliasQuill
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{reviewid: 2707524, reviewer: 'Melissa'}
12th June 2012:
Keep writing! Love this story!
Author's Response: I definitely will! Already have the next chapter started:)
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{reviewid: 2707355, reviewer: 'Scriptie'}
11th June 2012:
Oh my gosh! This just gets better and better! I hope Ginny doesn't tell anyone unless Ron was there and he said the last statement...Such a fantastic job!!! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
-Scriptie
Author's Response: That is a fabulous idea. When I wrote it I was just thinking of having it be a way to portray Ginny's anger, but that sounds much more appealing. I will make sure to make a shout out to you in the next chapter!
Thanks and love,
DahliasQuill
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{reviewid: 2707295, reviewer: 'Jamie'}
11th June 2012:
Just when I thought the identity of Hermione's husband was revealed you throw another wrench in the plot. I love that your story is not predictable!
Author's Response: Keep reading. It'll all unfold soon enough.:)
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{reviewid: 2702749, reviewer: 'ScorpiusRose17'}
29th May 2012:
Hi there!
I just wanted to leave a review to tell you how much I liked the first chapter of your story. I haven't read a lot of Hermione with either Fred or George, but I found this first chapter really interesting and intriguing. I thought you did a great job describing Ginny's bout with the Lethifold and the entire chapter. I could really get a grasp on what you were talking about and I could imagine everything you described.
I really thought that you did a great job characterizing everyone too. Hermione and her take charge attitude, Ron with his obvious answer question, Harry terrified. You just did a fantastic job!
Keep up the awesome writing! =)
-SR17
Recenseo 2012
Author's Response: Thank you. Make sure to keep reading to see how the story progresses.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
-DhaliasQuill
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{reviewid: 2696423, reviewer: 'Mrs%20Felton'}
12th May 2012:
This was definitely worth the wait!! I really can't wait till the next chapter :)
Author's Response: More is on its way! I promise:)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
-DahliasQuill
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{reviewid: 2696205, reviewer: 'Scriptie'}
12th May 2012:
So that means Fred is the father right? Holy crap! This was such a great chapter! Worth the wait :) Keep up the great work :)
-Scriptie
Author's Response: Keep reading and you will see:)
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~DahliasQuill
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{reviewid: 2695790, reviewer: 'Veronica'}
10th May 2012:
Oh this is good.. I like it! I hope we get some more story soon.
Author's Response: More is on its way! I promise
thank you for reading and reviewing!
~DahliasQuill
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{reviewid: 2695709, reviewer: 'clairevampiress'}
10th May 2012:
Ok getting less confusing now.
Author's Response: it'll all start to unravel in these next few chapters:)
thank you fro reading ad reviewing!
~DahliasQuill
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{reviewid: 2695603, reviewer: 'Luthiencelebrindal'}
10th May 2012:
Oh my gosh! I just read all 7 chapters. I love it, I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: More is on its way!:)
thank you for reading and reviewing!
~DahliasQuill
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{reviewid: 2687475, reviewer: 'jazy108'}
19th April 2012:
Please!! Please!! Please!! post the next chapter! I am soo emotionally invested and curious to find out what happens next! :D Great story so far! :)
Author's Response: I love that my story holds meaning to you. This is what drives me to write each and every chapter!
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
~DahliasQuill
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