Hey...Finally...after such a long wait...How`ve you
been? Ok...about the chapter now...Yes it`s
long.The debate was interesting,Also Ron`s point of
view was really refreshing.The part where Harry
watched while Hermoine spent time in the library
was very cute...And Honestly..I can`t wait for the
two to get together! Please update soon.Author's Response: I know, I'm really sorry. As always, life gets in the way. Not to mention giant writers block :(
To be honest this chapter was a bit of a filler just to get my juices flowing again, but I'm glad you enjoyed it regardless :) Thanks so much for coming back, and thanks for reviewing. More to come! Promise! Report Review
The only reason i'm giving this a 5 is because its Harry/Hermione.
The character interactions are just completely unrealistic to me.Author's Response: Well, to be quite fair, I started this story a few years ago and I wasn't that great of a writer back then. Even I go back and read some of the early chapter and I think to myself, I really wrote this? *cringe* But also, it is a fan fiction. I'm allowed a few ~creative liberties~. Plus, I think, if you continued reading you'd see why they act the way that they do and it would make a bit more sense.
But thank you for your honesty, truly. I'm sorry you didn't enjoy it, but hopefully you find something you like :) Harry/Hermione is a glorious pairing. Report Review
next chapter soon? :)Author's Response: Ahhh, I just put it in the queue! So incredibly sorry, I still love and appreciate you :) Report Review
Oh my gosh, really, Episkey? How can you do this? They are lying to themselves I know it! Both kisses meant something and now they're basically married and they're joking about it? Why? Mr and Mrs Hot and Heavy got that name for a reason. I hate this story because it draws me in so much but I love it! You should literally have about fifty chapters going at this pace becuase this is easily the best story ever. They already know they are in love they're just in denial. I also hope you bring the war into this story and their journey together being on the run with Ron. That would be amazing. I think I love your interpretation of Harry, this side of him more than Harry in the books. Gorgeous! Hermione's a lucky girl.
100/100. A+Author's Response: jkdsnjkbiojs thank you so so so much. Honestly, your words are too kind. I do plan on this story being quite lengthy, so no worries there ;) And if everything goes as planned, we'll get to see a little bit of Deathly Hallows worked in here.
I am so sorry I've been neglecting this but I am back and we're going to continue this journey :) Again, thank you a billion times, I can't even express how hard this made me smile. Report Review
I agree with you. They have an emotional connection even if it's not physical. I write like that sometimes too and it's perfectly normal. It makes for a better story, I think, to focus on the emotions. You can totally be in a romantic relationship with someone without doing anything. That's basically just being in love. Like you said, it's an accentuated friendship.
Loved this chapter and I hope everything will be fine between them now although Cameron may have something to say about it
10/10Author's Response: I've always considered emotional connections to be stronger than physical ones. You have a different sort of craving toward another person when you want their constant attention versus when you just want to kiss them all the time. I think that's so incredibly important in a relationship, just friends or more.
Thank you again and again, it means so much :) Report Review
Ah love it! Magnificent. So real. I can relate. Bravo. 10/10Author's Response: Thank you :D I didn't want to over- or under-do the whole grief situation. Thank you a million times! Report Review
I have a number of things to say about this chapter: First, I am so glad I remembered it. I have been so busy studying that any reading for pleasure has been put out of my mind. Secondly, I love pomegranates! Third, that argument was so well written, I felt like Cameron was saying it to me. I could literally imagine what Harry would feel like hearing that. Lastly, I absolutely love your entire plot. You're going at the perfect pace. Also, this relationship is so wrong but so right; it works! The psychology of it is interesting with the co-dependancy and the obsession. And this is all fiction? You're a genius and you should write your own fiction about a couple with this kind of relationship because I would totally buy it.
10/10Author's Response: 1. I am too :)
2. SAME THEY'RE SO GOOD
3. Yes, I was actually quite upset when writing it. I felt bad for making Harry hear that, but I think he needed to.
4. Thank you :) I always worry that I'm going too slow in some places and too fast in others, so this means a lot.
When writing this I really wanted to explore the whole aspect of two people that really and truly care for one another but it's not entirely for the right reasons, you know? Because that's how real life is; everything isn't super cute and fluffy, but it's not all angst and ultimatums either.
Funnily enough I want to be an author when I grow up. So I might just ;) Report Review
Gah! I still can't get over how much i love this story. I'm stickin' with it to the end. Most stories are poorly written, and just don't sound good; they usually have a lot of randomness, too. But not this one! It's put together greatly and well written :DAuthor's Response: Looks like you had a booboo haha :) Report Review
Gah! I still can't get over how much i love this story. I'm stickin' with it to the end. Most stories are poorly written, and just don't sound good; they usually have a lot of randomness, too. But not this one! It's put together greatly and well written :DAuthor's Response: Well gee, thanks :3 I really do appreciate it. Next chapter coming up soon!! Report Review
Cool!!!I really like it I mean it's really awesome!Author's Response: Thanks so much!! Report Review
I am truly enjoying this story. When I first read the summary I wasn't sure about it. I am happy that I decided to read it. I felt so bad for Hermione when she found out her parents died. I am interested in seeing where this story goes. I hope to read more soon... :)Author's Response: Well I sure am glad you decided to give it a shot! To be honest I just suck at summaries; that's why I use excerpts for the chapter summaries haha.
I'm so happy you like it, and thanks for reviewing :) I'll update as soon as possible! Report Review
Just to let you know; I will be following this story until the end (Which i hope is way far off). It is still the best harry/Hermione fanfic out there, and the way you write is amazing. I can't wait for the next chapterAuthor's Response: Oh yeah, this will be going for a while ;) But, ah, thank you so much, you're too kind to be real. I'll update as soon as I can, promise! Report Review
A beautiful piece of work, this is the best harry/hermione story I've read.I'm really sorry I've haven't submitted a review in a long time.I am still 100% dedicated to this story. P.S.:There are slight tinges of American grammer.Author's Response: Yeahhh, I know, the American in me just won't subside. I try my best though :) And it's totally fine, I know I don't update as often as I used to so I completely understand. But I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter, honestly, it truly means a lot. Thanks so much!! Report Review
this is very good, honest, it feels nice reading thisAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you decide to continue :) Report Review
Awwh, that was so super cute :)Author's Response: Thank you, thank you :3 I try! Glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
So here we are again at the end of another beautiful chapter waiting for the next installment of beauty! :D I am so glad they finally had a chance to be kids, since they both have been forced to grow up much to quickly. You captured the free spirit of a teenager flawlessly! It was amazing with Beary Potter and how unsure Harry was. Just because he is the chosen one doesn't mean he always knows exactly what to do. The conversation at the end reminds me of one I had with my best friend, I mean we aren't in love like Harry and Hermione obviously are, but we tell eachother everything. And once agian you have a very anxious Jason Potter on the edge of his seat for the next part of this amazing story!! :DAuthor's Response: Ee, thank you :D I'm really happy everyone's enjoying all the little cutesy things, they were fun to write :3 But same here, I had a conversation like that once with a friend, all in good fun of course. Thought it was fitting :)
I will update as soon as I can! Again thank you so so much :) Report Review
Only one word can describe this awesomeness:
Can't wait for more :DAuthor's Response: THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH :D
So so happy you liked it! More is coming as soon as possible! Report Review
one. of. the. best. chapters. YET! i always think the story
couldnt possibly get much better, but then you bring out
EVEN MORE well put together chapters. LITERALLY! where
do you come up with this?! FANTASTIC! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much!! I just sort of let ideas fall into my head, honestly. The story has the control, I'm just the messenger :) But really I'm so so so happy you like this chapter just, ugh thank you so much. I tried so hard. Report Review
That was the most amazing and romantic and lovely chapter I've ever read. I loved it . Expecially beary potter, the ferris wheel tradition, and the little part at the end!Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much! I honestly tried to make it romantic but in the least romantic way possible, if that even makes sense haha. I spent a good deal of time on this so I'm super glad you enjoyed all the little stuff. Report Review
that was lovely. keep writtingAuthor's Response: Thank you so much, I promise I will! Thank you for reviewing :3 Report Review
Don`t they see it that they are a copue already..!!! Being there for each other, having feelings for each other and they still deny it...AARGH.!!But I think that`s what keeps the story going:) By the way excellent writing again...:):)Loved the part about the bear winning thing,especially when he hoped that it was what she wanted.His uncertainity made the scene more real...My favourite part however was the last conversation!!! But please make them a couple soon...!Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much! :D Even though Harry won't tell her he's relatively "open" about how he feels, whereas Hermione is just stupidly blinded by the friendship label.
But yes, thank you about the comment on the writing, I tried really hard to make it good as I know I haven't updated for quite some time!
As for the couple thing... you'll just have to keep reading, won't ya? :) Report Review
i just re-read the whole thing. still my favorite h/hr :) cant wait for the rest!Author's Response: Eee, thank you so much :) I'm hopefully going to post the next chapter tonight! I'm sorry about the wait but thank you for sticking with me. Report Review
Hey.next chapter anytime soon?Author's Response: I'm working on it, I promise! 3619 words in :) I'd like to get it to 5k, though. Maybe longer? I think you guys'll like it! Sort of a break from the heavy stuff.
I'm sorry it's taking so long, but really, thank you so much for remaining interested. It truly, truly means the world to me. Report Review
next chapter soon? still my favorite! :DAuthor's Response: I'm working on it, I promise! Hopefully I'll be getting out of the class that's taking up the majority of my time soon enough. I have about 1000 words done already :) I'm really sorry! Report Review
OMG. WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER UP??? I LOVE THIS STORY! Author's Response: SCHOOL HAS BEEN STEALING ALL OF MY TIME BUT I'LL TRY TO GET ONE UP BEFORE NEXT WEEK IS OVER I AM SO SORRY Report Review
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