I love Rose/Scorpius. I don't care if it's angst, drama, fluff, whatever - as long as there's romance and it's a ScoRose, I am in love.
Hermione was in-canon, with her study plan obsession. Your version of Rose is a lot like Hermione, but less inhibited. She's got enough Ron in her to make her think a little outside the box. I can see that she's desperate to impress her parents, but not so much that she'll forget herself. And I like that. I've read a few ScoRose's where she spends years refusing to even consider Scorpius just because of her parents.
Overall, cute one-shot! :)Author's Response: Hey - just about to do your review now!
Thanks so much for this! Rose/Scorpius IS amazing!
I'm glad you think I got the characterisation right - I didn't want to be too hard on Hermione here, yet I wanted people to get that Rose is a teenage girl, a lot of whom have fights with their mothers! She does have a bit of a complicated relationship with them, but most people too!
Thanks a million, I'm glad you thought it was cute!!! :D Report Review
Awesomeness!!! This was so simple yet a delightful account of human nature- if you know what I mean. I loved how keeping their relationship a secret was such a epic, epiphany to them. It kind of shows an innocence that not a lot of rose/scorpius fics display, its more realistic. The story flowed well and there was some awesome descriptions and sentences that I just read over twice to get the full impact of them.
one of my favorite parts:
The 'Scorpius-Malfoy-has-been-admitted-to-St.-Mungo’s-with-third-degree-burns' way.
and I need a sque moment here.YAY! that was a great incorporation and characterization of watermelon, it made me smile for the rest of the fic. and thanks for the mention in the beginning, I'm still grinning as I write this. Your the best B!Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Haha thank you! I love how it only just occured to them too, and they're like... woah! They're young, I think its more interesting to actually accept that! And I really am delighted that you like.
Heehee i liked that, I normally dont write so playfully but I thought that fit well there!
Heeheee glad you liked watermelon! Didnt want to bring him in too much, he's yours! But yeah, I dont think I'll be able to resist bringing him in to annoy everyone!!!
Thanks a million pet, it was lovely to honour you there! :D
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This was really good, I really enjoyed this! A true wonderful one shot. It gave you a good snapshot into their relationship thingy. I liked the ending, I love the song and I thought that this story fitted it very well. I like your take on Rose and Scorpius, it was realistic. I mean, why shouldn't have their fun? Not everyone meets their forever person in school anyway ;) I love this! You are really good! I love your style, you can bring characters to life in just a one shot, which I personally think is hard.
So excellent one shot :)
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Thanks so much for the review, I'm so glad you liked it! Wow! Glad you knew the song too - it really did influence my writing, even though I didn't include lyrics. Thanks, I did try to be realistic! Haha exactly, who finds love at 15! Though for me the two will end up together, though obviously thats the last thing on their minds now!!
Your comments really mean a lot to me, thank you!!! :D
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