I love this chapter. With James and Fred and Tiff! I love it! 10/10. Please update soon! You have had some fast updates lately so please continue!

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loved it best chapter so far XD

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wow i love the story its awesome but she has to be with james D: theres so many boys - fred, james,noah and urm whats his name her neighbor.

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I LOVE YOU!!
MARRY ME!!
This is effing fantasitic. No. It's FANFAIRYTASTIC. Thats right, my level of sheer wonder and amusment has risen to be able to quote The Fairys. Fairies? I don't know. But that show is second only to the saddle club. And on occasion The Bananas in Pyjamas.
And my family wonder why I turned out so strange.
Fred? Really? Fred. He's brilliant. I want my friends to be like him, but they're all kind of average and normal.
Maybe I'm their Fred? I don't know, I'm probably a toned-down version because though I am a strange, abnormal wizard (hopefully. When I turned eleven I actually convinced myself that J.K got the age/letter thing wrong and that one day, mine would come) I have never skipped class or been naughty or something.
Though that's because my mother would send me to bording school. We don't all have George Weasley as a father. *sighs wistfully*
Thy level of adoration is admirable, fine sir. I only wish that le muggles could witness such consequences as that of madames both Kate and Steph.
Righteo. I'm off to see if you have any other storys, so pleeeaase make another chapter? This is one of the best storys on the site, in my opinion. Though honestly, that doesn't mean much.

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You're actually considering a Team Noah?
Dude, he's eyecandy. Plus, Jen will get him. Jen must get him; the balance of friendship must be restored!
And Rose will have a little smexy time with Tiffanys boy next door, if you know what I mean ;)
whoa. I am a child. I should not think such things.
But I totally am

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Okay I'm going to say this now before you get upset or something, I LOVE IT.
Now.
I think it kinda reminds me of Twilight, in a good way, the cute guy who's confusing and hard to understand, the girl who is a mess (more like me actually), and the other guy who just wants to be with her but has been friendzoned. No before someone rants on about "oh my gawd! How dare you compare twilight and Harry potter! Blah blah" yours is way better. It's all gooey (your story) which is a good thing (I am a teenage girl, give me some credit)
Anyway, I love it, (fangirling); I love James potter II.
:) keep up the good work :)

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omg
I love you.
How are you this awesome? Because this is awesome.
Fork yeah, I think I might have rhymed or something along those lines.
Do you know how great this is? I freaking love it, because Tiffany is HILARIOUS.
Normally I don't even remember the main characters name. When I'm reviewing I'll just be like, she or her. TIFFANY. Didn't even have to check her name, because I've reread this so many times.
And now I'm gonna go eat pie!

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HA! loved it, tiff seems like a cool bean. like a very cool bean.
UPDATE. I ORDER YOU. (in the nicest way possible)
great job describing the flying scene btw, dw you did a great job :)

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Loved it as much as all of your chapters- which is a lot. Like, a lot a lot. Write more

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NOAH AND TIFF. Even if it's just for a bit.

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Uh oh. Drama! Can't wait to see what happens! :)

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LOVED THE FOOD FIGHT! Tiffany/James for the win.

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fdkasjfdaskj, when is there going to be any relationship developments?!?! o.o

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Poor Tiffany... He broke her heart and now. FEELS

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Okay, I'm not sure if it's just me or if you've changed earlier chapters but the story really seems to have veered off from some of the earlier plot points. First, Tiff didn't trust James because of some event in their earlier years. That seems to have been ignored for the last five chapters. Second, James had some sort of conflict with Lily and they have a poor relationship because of that conflict/event. But we haven't heard anything about that since you introduced it in an earlier chapter. I know that it's been years since you started this story but it seems like the last year of chapters hasn't really carried all of the original plot points. I know it's only been 4 or 5 chapters but since such a long period of time has passed, it really seems like the story is static.

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Loved this chapter! James is so adorable and I love Fred! Can't wait for the next update 10/10 :D

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BAH! Noah...James...Noah...James.Noah.. TIFFANY MAKe UP YoUr MINDDD! :)

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Fairy Dust. Interesting. However, I think that after 10 shots she'd be drunk enough not to remember anything anyways.. :)

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HAHAHAHAHAHAH! yes! But... but... now I have to ships.. and I...just... FEELS. :)

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Yes...Yes!.YES! Win for James and Tiffany! Lets get this ship in the ocean, it's time to sail! :)

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Loved the ending. Noah is adorbale, and I am interested to see how James comes in. :)

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I just found this story and I'm so happy I did, because I'm actually obsessed with it! Tiff is hilarious and James is just UMF! Freddy and Al are literally the funniest people ever. Please update soon, I need to know what happens!!!
Also, question: Isn't Scorpius Al's age? Is he just a Valiant who's a year younger or...?

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I read this story a few days ago and absolutely loved it. So i decided to come back and review it :) Sorry i couldn't review through out the other chapters, i was too busy reading the chapters.

This is such an adorable story and you've written it so well. i wasn't able to stop reading, i got really angry when i was up to the last chapter and my computer froze and shut down. But i came back and read it :)

I love all your characters and how you portayed each one of them. Fred is amazing and really adorable and i want an awesome brother like him
:(
I really like Noah and think he is sweet and deserves Tiffiany, but then there's James who's complete lover boy and such a sweetie pie. I can't wait to read the next chapter:)

~LoVe_Sirius

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lovelovelove this story. seriously, u must update otherwise i might die and then everyone would be sad because i would be dead and it would be all your fault.
OK, slightly melodramatic, but you get the flow.
AMAZING AUTHOR, YOU.

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TEAM JAMES AND FREDDY!

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