Reading Reviews for Don't Forget to Breathe
  
196 Reviews Found

Review #1, by anon Declare Independence

20th April 2013:
Amaazing chapter! I just discovered you fic, too bad you don't have many reviews because you should have lots. I love your style of writinggg and the story, is something new and it's actually my favourite harry potter fic. :33
By the way, it is just my problem or the site has a problem with the distribution of space? because there are huge spaces between the paragraphs o.o.
I hope you wouldn't let this story unfinished like other amazing stories. Till next time I wish for you inspiration and more reviews :3 :3.

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Review #2, by dracos lover Declare Independence

15th April 2013:
Great chapter! Please update soome:)

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Review #3, by AllThePossibilities Hyper Ballad

14th April 2013:
I'm really enjoying this story, it's really very well thought out. But the huge gaps between text are unnecessary and slightly annoying.

Author's Response: Apologies, but this automatically happens every time I upload the file =(

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Review #4, by LongLostLoveDRAMIONE It's in Our Hands

1st April 2013:
i can't understand why you use words in place of others like underwear and puppies and that long "name" for hermione. I can not read the story fluently because I have to figure out what you are saying!! Please write more with coherent language

Author's Response: you have been duped by the site's April fool's day joke. =)

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Review #5, by gracemalfoy718 Crystalline

30th March 2013:
Is there going to be another chapter??

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Review #6, by hawthornheart Crystalline

28th February 2013:
This story is good, even if the timing doesn't seem right. There's plenty of mistakes but nothing a good beta couldn't help you with. Mostly grammar or awkwardness in the wording.

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Review #7, by blackballet It's in Our Hands

25th February 2013:
Lovely! I'm into it!

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Review #8, by Brittany Crystalline

21st February 2013:
Woah woah woah when is your next update

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Review #9, by Mikki Crystalline

19th February 2013:
When will the next chapter be?!?!?!

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Review #10, by MadiMalfoy Crystalline

18th February 2013:
Oooh my god! This is getting intense! :D I'm curious as to see where you go with all of this and whatnot. Your detail and description with things like the box and the pendant and its history. Phenomenal writing so far, keep up the great work! :) xx

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Review #11, by Shelbi Army of Me

18th February 2013:
When is any dramione action gonna happen?*-*

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Review #12, by Shelbi Unravel

18th February 2013:
Wonderful *breaths in and out *

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Review #13, by dracos lover Crystalline

18th February 2013:
Wow drama!! Another great chapter please update soon:)

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Review #14, by Nika Cover Me

2nd February 2013:
I recently discovered your story and have been addicted ever since! It's so good!

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Review #15, by Lovely Jane Cover Me

23rd January 2013:
What's going to happen?!
This has me really addicted right now so please upload soon! (:

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Review #16, by Luna Cover Me

22nd January 2013:
Hii happy new Year,

You are really talented, so please continue writing out
this fanfic, or any thing you are up to.

Cheers

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Review #17, by slytherin_muggleborn Cover Me

16th January 2013:
She will kill him when she finds out about the memory charm. good job (:

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Review #18, by Jamie Human Behavior

15th January 2013:
I love this :) you found the right kind of romance without going over the too cheese fest.

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Review #19, by dracos lover Cover Me

14th January 2013:
I really liked this chapter but i think the next chapter will be the one ill love. So please please please update soon, i need to know what happens next.

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Review #20, by slytherin_muggleborn One Hundred Seven Steps

1st January 2013:
Love your story. I'm curious about areatha and Colin. And I hope hermione and Draco end up together(never thought i'd say those words.)

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Review #21, by Pesel Slidein Hyper Ballad

17th December 2012:
Well done, this is turning into a fabulous novel. I hope to
read more.

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Review #22, by Pesel sliderin Human Behavior

17th December 2012:
Great first chaper! The wording and vocabulary really grabbed my attention. Keep going!

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Review #23, by tara malfoy Alarm Call

14th December 2012:
This was a pretty good chapter

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Review #24, by Broken Butterfly Unravel

13th December 2012:
I am really enjoying this. It is another wonderful chapter, and I am loving how the relationship between Hermione and Draco is blossoming like a rose would, not to fast but not too slow. Great work.

Also reviewed for the Christmas extravagant review on the forums key word... Christmas

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Review #25, by MadiMalfoy One Hundred Seven Steps

13th December 2012:
Ahh what's he going to do with the Sorting Hat?? I've been waiting for you to update this for so long!! Love this story so much! Update again soon, the tension is killing me already! :)

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