oo i really like this story!!! i just started reading it a couple hours ago and i have been hooked. i love the way you right, and you are so creative! This story is so insanely good! during the whole "fun encounter" between rose and scorp i literally couldn't stop smiling. i looked like a total loon giggling at my computer screen as two fictional characters had a "great time" with each other. well no, i guess it never got to great, it was just a good time. Im glad scorpius doesnt want to do it with rose, it shows his respect for her :) amazing story! keep writing!Author's Response: Haha yeah, hopefully they can sort their stuff out and get to that great time soon. And respect was what I was aiming for (: Report Review
YAY!!! Finally! This was awesome (and just the right amount of graphic, hehe) but they HAVE to get together properly!! Scorpius needs to have some sense knocked into him, this terrible wild idea is completely necessary. Thanks for writing! This is my favourite story at the moment. xxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! Even if it's been like two months, this review is much apreciated (: Sorry I didn't answer sooner xx Report Review
They say, go big or go home. You did Great! Just enough to get the curiosity up. Satisfy the readers thirst for a real first move, and you chose the right person to make it. I don't think Rose could have let her gaurd down enough to make the first move in a million years.
Wonderful chapter :)Author's Response: That is very true about Rose. Thanks for the review (: I'm trying to be more regular now xx Report Review
Finally! I was cheering for them to come to their senses. Not that they have, entirely, but it's a huge step. I think Scorpius is holding back because he knows he loves her, and having her lust in return just isn't enough. Or maybe he's just hella confused.
It would be hilarious if the innkeeper kicked them out, somehow.
Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: Your speculations on Scorpius are very on the dot (:
Yeah, wouldn't be surprised to see the innkeeper do that! Sorry I've taken so long to responde xx Report Review
This chapter was soo good! Finally something happened! But i am sad about the end :( next chapter!!Author's Response: Next chapter is being written! Finally! I'm so sorry for the impossible wait xx Report Review
Whoa that was intense. Good though :) I love them both and I'm happy they're finally getting somewhere!!
One thing that did bother me, though -they most definitely, very obviously could've used magic to dry their clothes. There weren't any muggles in the room and there really aren't restrictions on wizards like that. I mean...aren't they still attracted to each other when their clothes are on? I didn't really see the point in that. But I enjoyed the chapter overall nonetheless.
Update soon!Author's Response: I know, I know... It had just taken them so long, I thought they might need some kind of trigger to make it believable. Even if it was an unbelievable one (:
Sorry for the long absence... But thanks for the review! xx Report Review
I LOVE IT!!! that was so awesome!!! Scorpius is so completely adorable in this chapter. you are suchhh a good writer its crazy! PLEASE PUT THE NEXT CHAPTER UP NOW!! Ik this one just came up but omg i cant imagine waiting for the next chapter of amazingness for ten minutes let alone a couple days!! GAHH i love it so much!! im like..so pumped right now. :) :) :)
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!
-raye :) :) :) Author's Response: THANK YOU! Sorry, that just really needed capitals because this review is awesome and I can't believe I haven't responded sooner.
A couple of days... it's been a couple of months now. I'm so sorry!
Thanks again xx Report Review
Awww they are so cute - and frustrating and annoying when they tiptoe around one another, but other than that...
I want more of your Scorose :) Please? And it was not too sudden, not at all. In my opinion, this could definitely have happened sooner!
So. Another great chapter? Check. Made me smile and laugh and want to cry? Check. More coming soon? I don't know, you tell me.
And also, favourite quote:
But I felt like that would be an inappropriate thing to say, so I just marched on ahead in silence.
Teehee, this made me laugh.
:)Author's Response: Thank you!! This thank you is about three months too late, but thanks nonetheless! Every review is muchly appreciated (:
And I don't know how much longer Rose can stay strong for... Report Review
I think that was one of the flirtiest, most heated chapters yet. And you did it justice. Brilliantly written, really. Also, the awkwardness, confusion, Blackthorn, his wizarding-ness and crazy Flora. I enjoyed reading this loads. And Rose is being strong! ...Scorpius, oh Scorpius, please... When will he realize it's not just attraction? Or does he know that already?
I've still got shivers running down my spine.Author's Response: Your reviews always make me smile (: I should have responded earlier, I know, but I took a long and sudden break from hpff and are just getting back to it now. Thanks! xx Report Review
Eep!! So freakin good! I have been waiting for a long time for something like this. It was good! Not too graphiv, no need to worry. Keep updating!
-GraceAuthor's Response: Thank you!! Sorry for taking so long to respond and update, I hope you havn't given up on this (: Report Review
I'm really enjoying this story :) Scorpius and Rose grew on me quickly and I love all the tension between them and the drama!! I really can't wait to see how these next 3 days go and I hope there's more Scorose action and banter. I love their teasing and their cute, close moments.
Please update soon!!Author's Response: There will definitely be some more action ;) I hope you havn't given up on me!! Thanks for reviewing xx Report Review
Love this story. You have a great writing style for young or new adult fiction! It says there was a new chapter update on 11/25 but I don't see a new one after 24 hours. Does it usually take time to show up?Author's Response: Yeah, I think it can sometimes take some time to show up, but it's been so long I guess you've seen it now! Thanks for leaving a review, sorry I didn't get back to you sooner xx Report Review
Love this story! And this chapter... The tension between Rose and Scorpius is too much fun to read, not to mention very frustrating. GO SCORPIUS, GO ROSE, DO SOMETHING!
I'm so very happy you decided to fall into this and write it. So thank you, for the awesome chapter and awesome story as a whole, I can't wait to see where it goes!
:)Author's Response: They will, they will! Just wait. And your welcome, thank you for the kind words (: xx Report Review
brill! I was freaking out thinking 'maybe she's gone on strike or something and won't write anymore ever!' but then you updated and i was happy : )Author's Response: No strike, don't worry! Glad it made you happy (: Report Review
I LOVE SCORPIUS AND ROSE!! I can tell scorpius is actually starting to really like Rose! You should do a chapter or like a bit of the next chapter in his POV! I really wanna know what is going on inside his head!!! LOVE THIS STORY!!!
-RayeAuthor's Response: I've already written the next chapter, but maybe one of the ones after that I will put in some Scorpius POV.
He is definitely starting to like her though. Thanks for reviewing xx Report Review
Lol!!! Resemling a crack addict!! You crack me up so much and now I'm sad that i wont get to read more till at least jext week :( i cant tell you how much i love thos story, i look forward to it every day, hoping youve updated. And iove the length of this chapter too :) cant wait fot the next one!Author's Response: I really like this review (: I've put the update in, so I hope it's out soon. Thanks!! xx Report Review
Now that was a fun read, though I have to keep it pg 12 so... lets just say, Scorpius seems to have great admiration for Roses sleep-ware lol I think he is deffinately attracted :) and I think Rose, in her heart knows that she has made a friend in Scorpius. Deffinately alot of 10/10 stuff in this chapterAuthor's Response: Great admiration, I agree ;) Yeah, I'm glad they're friends now. Thanks for the review xx Report Review
Really good! Waiting for more!Author's Response: Thank you (: Report Review
hey.. she could be an auror in disguise.. u know, secret mission harry put her on. hiding it frm evryone and pretending she is nt doing anything important. :)Author's Response: I can see her doing that! She would get really into it, make heaps of disguises and stuff... good thinking (: Report Review
i love this story.. i am addicted to it.. i really like all the characters. Anyway, i was thinking rose could be like a researcher or something. inventing new spells, creating new potions, new remedies etc., the wizarding scientist. she could be working on potion that cures werewolves attack if taken within a day of the bite.
a potion to cure imperius curse or new spells for the defense against the dark arts.
keep writing. update soon. 10/10Author's Response: Hey, I like that idea. It's very quirky and interesting (:
Thanks for reviewing xx Report Review
yay! I am so excited to read the trip, will some real action finally happen??? EEK, can't wait! Please update soon, this story is my favourite out of all the ones I'm reading at the moment :D xxAuthor's Response: Yes! Real action! Thank you so much, that means a lot xx Report Review
Omfg I can relate to this so much. Updatee! I can't wait for louth;)Author's Response: Updated! Should be validated soon. Haha, yeah, I relate too, probably because it's drawn out of my mind. Dear lord.
But thanks for the review! Report Review
This was brill again, they very quickly turned from being nice to being mean haha, seeing as you said you had written 2 days, does that mean you will be posting it soon? i really hope so!Author's Response: The next chapter should be out by tomorrow, it's already been posted. It's the train ride! I really enjoyed the train ride (:
Thanks for your review xx Report Review
Omg why did she stop him?!! Loved this chapter, but please dont make me wait this long for another chapter!!! This chapter was very very good, so scorp is interested! Cant wait for the next one to see what else happens, please get them together soon! As for rose, i dont know, i wouldnt give her a normal job like in the ministry or a healer, but something unique...Author's Response: Yeah, I do want to find something unique for Rose... there have been a couple of ideas floating around so far. Thanks for the kind review (: Report Review
Wow and WOW :D I started reading this story today, I wish I found it sooner. It was full of fluff and just up to my taste :) So excited for the rest of the trip. It's so realistic the way you are turning em enemies to friends to lovers (fingers crossed :D), and you've done a great job. Hats off :-)Author's Response: Thank youuu!! This was loveyl (: I hope you like the next chapter xx Report Review
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