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Review #26, by orderofthephoenix The Letter That Never Came

24th December 2010:
Hey, I'm here for the Snowball Fight! :D

Such a beautiful story. I never, like so many people, thought about how devastating it would be for a squib to realise they wouldn't be getting their letter. You portrayed it wonderfully with emotion.
I also liked how the last paragraph was very similar to the first, showing the start and end of that very important day.

Happy Holidays!
Sophia x

Author's Response: Yay for the Snowball Fight! :D
Thank you. A lot of people have said they've never thought about that aspect of being a squib, so I'm glad to have written it and done it justice. Happy holidays to you too! :)

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Review #27, by maskedmuggle The Letter That Never Came

17th December 2010:
Wow. A truly sad story :(
Poor Arabella… a character not very much written… but you characterised her perfectly… and you portrayed her feelings and emotions very well, so that I felt very sympathetic to her.
Well written!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Portraying the emotions was really important, so I'm glad I did it well. Thanks again for the review! :)

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Review #28, by Mrs_Lovegood The Letter That Never Came

14th December 2010:
I had honestly never thought thoroughly about how devastating it would be for a squib! It's really a brilliantly original idea, and you did write it wonderfully. I love how short it is and still transmits such emotion, and you manage to describe everything in a way that allow us to detail the emotion. It is simply beautiful, and I just love how simply you managed to write it!

Great work! (:

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I imagine it would be terrible for a Squib, but that's not really reflected much in the books. I'm so glad it works despite being short and simple :) Once again, thanks for the review!

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Review #29, by angeless7fallenstarsong The Letter That Never Came

3rd December 2010:
Oh my God. How heartbreaking. I've literally never read or even *seen* anything about Arabella before. This is so original and clever and sad.

The poor little thing. :(

My only real suggestion for this - as your grammar and spelling seem perfect and the story doesn't need much work in general - would be to flesh it out a bit. It's quite short. Maybe you could add some more dialogue or something to lengthen it out.

Loved reading this, I'm favoring it for sure! Taaa!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've never read anything on her either, so I just felt drawn to share just a little of her story. I'm so glad the mood and emotions of the story are so strong, it's what I was really going for. I know it's quite short, but personally I feel like I've said all that needs to be said--I'll keep your advice in mind though :) Thanks again!

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Review #30, by ekroman The Letter That Never Came

28th November 2010:
Aww :') so sad but so yet so sweet! I love how you write Arabella :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I got the combination right, and the characterisation of Arabella. She's such a minor character, I had to write some of her story :) Thanks again :D

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Review #31, by mugglemania The Letter That Never Came

28th November 2010:
Aww. What a good story!

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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Review #32, by followthebutterflies16 The Letter That Never Came

28th November 2010:
I loved this story. It was good at showing the anxiousness of a little girl expecting her letter and also the sadness when she realizes her letter isn't coming. Good Job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I depicted it well :)

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Review #33, by CessZ The Letter That Never Came

6th November 2010:
Its SO emotionally touching!! I loved it!! :)
Keep up the good work!!!


Author's Response: Thanks so much! That means a lot :)

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Review #34, by Hermione389 The Letter That Never Came

9th October 2010:
Ah, sad! Nice though. 8 out of 10.

Author's Response: Thanks! It was meant to be sad, glad you thought it was nice though :)

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Review #35, by SeverusLove The Letter That Never Came

16th September 2010:
RC!!! !!!

Hiya hiya hiya!!! !!! !!!Anyway, the story was good. A bit too short, but sweet. It had a good flow and pace. It was simple... ...BUT STILL GOOD! ^^ ^^ ^^

I've never really given much thought to Arabella Fig, who was she again?

Anyway, as I was saying, the characterization was good and so was the spelling and grammar. So overall it was great.

xoxo SeverusLove

Author's Response: Thanks! :D
In response to your question, Arabella Figg is Mrs Figg, the Squib who lived down the street from the Dursleys and kept an eye on Harry.

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Review #36, by Akussa The Letter That Never Came

15th September 2010:
Oh, that was heartbreaking. Very nice little piece but so, so sad...
The way you described the little girl's expectation, anxiety, hope and then despair; it made us feel with her. Especially since, like her parents obviously did, we knew that she would be disapointed.
Very good work on this.

Author's Response: That's what I was trying to do, to really show what it must be like for Squibs who have grown up in wizarding families and to have the finality of not getting the letter, and thank you very much for reviewing :)

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Review #37, by Aidenk77 The Letter That Never Came

14th September 2010:
I really enjoyed this. Short, sweet, but so sad.

Author's Response: That's what I was aiming for. Thanks :)

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Review #38, by permanent_marker The Letter That Never Came

14th September 2010:
I like this better than other stories i have read. good on the ending :) I am glad there isn't explaining needed here.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #39, by Ronsgirl29 The Letter That Never Came

13th September 2010:
Aw, this story broke my heart! Just reading the summary I knew it couldn't be happy, but I always underestimate how sad the life of a squib must be. If I new that magic was real but could never use it myself, well I'd be pretty upset too.

I think you did this very tastefully, and your writing style flows wonderfully. The image of her shakily writing the names of the houses on the window will stick with me forsure, great job!


Author's Response: Thank you! :D

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