Oh i have such mixed feelings during this chapter and not in a bad way either, im feeling what she is in each different part of the chapter from hope of a relationship to hurt to happy! This chapter is so well done and has now taken the place of my favorite chapter. Theres just so much going on and i feel that this teacher with the strange guys is important and part of the group roses dad is looking for. I loved the characterization in this chapter as i have with each. I really hope that her friend and albus get together soon because my heart broke not only for her but also for him especially when he says who else would i date. I hope that he secretly has feelings for her as well and just cant see her interest in him rather then ignoring her feelings because he doesnt like her. I do hope for happy endings for the four of them. Super excited to keep reading. Great job!

~slytherinchica08~
Recensio 2012

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This chapter was just so cute! I loved all the moments between rose and scorpius and might have even swooned a bit at them together in the owlery. I think this one might be my favorite chapter so far as it has the hints of romance to it and the bits with the girl in school were just all written very well and really sucked me that much more into your story. I cant wait to see what happens in the morning when scorpius wakes up at her house and to see what will happen to them now that the memory of their first kiss has been brought up. Will continue reading! Great job!

~slytherinchica08~
Recensio 2012

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Oh yay! This chapter was everything i wanted and more! Not only did i get to see rose deal with sticky fingered children buti also got scorpius action and more flashbacks and not just one either! Honestly i just loved it! I love that the little girl seems to have an attachment to rose and i cant wait to see how she will come into play throughout the story. Man rose really takes on the big girl load in this chapter and not only has the big girl job but now she might even have her very own home! Talk about exciting. I love how realistic this story is, i mean she is dealing with so much stuff that so many different people on their different walks of life can all understand! I think you are doing a wonderful job with this story and as always ill be continuing on. Great job!

~slytherinchica08~
Recensio 2012

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Poor rose! This chapter was so frightening for her. First she finally meets the kids that she is going to be with for the rest of the school year then in the flashback scorpius actually has a good idea. I liked seeing the bit of them in school and thought it added to the story so the readers can see how rose and scorpius interacted in school. I hope we see more of the love potion a bit so we can better understand what exactly happended and not just what rose thought happened.

Im still really enjoying this story and think that you have an absolutely wonderful thing going in this. I hope to see more of scorpius and rose with the children in the next chapter. I shall continue reading. Great job!

~slytherinchica08~
Recensio 2012

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I love how Rose realized what she wants to do for a career! It had been building the whole story and it flows oh so nicely :)

La la love it!

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Yay she got the job! I love that James got to play during the Quidditch match and that he won his first ever match which meant that his team is going to go onto the finals! I thought it was rather funny that Ginny set Albus up which really only ended in disaster as a lot of blind dates do. The chapter was good though more of a filler chapter then anything, but I'm still excited to continue on and find out just how being a teachers aide goes for Rose! I hope that there will be more interaction between Rose and Scorpius soon! I only spotted a couple of minor errors such as saying names instead of James at one point but really nothing too huge! I absolutely loved it and can't wait to continue on! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~
Recenseo 2012

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Oh wow!! This seemed to be over so quick, I don't want the story to end ): But I love that Rose is getting her life together and you're summing up the story brilinantly. I can't wait for the next chapter (:

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I loved the snippet into their hogwarts days! I feel so bad for Rose, thinking that nobody would ever love poor Rose but at least Scorp makes her see that someone can at least for the most part like her! i hope to see more between them in the next chapters to come. I'm really enjoying your story so far! Each chapter is just absoutely wonderful and flows so well and I just want to keep reading to find out what happens and because its just so well written! Honestly I could go on for ages about how much I love this story and just gush over it but I would probably end up running out of characters for the review if I did that. So basically what I'm saying is this story is wonderful, you've got me hooked, and I just love your Rose! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~
Recenseo 2012

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Oh this chapter in particular really caught me, especially this ending bit about how their similarities were about past things and they were each now going onto seperate paths as thats something that I can really relate to! I think you did a wonderful job describing her emotions in this part. She was wistful enough about the past and a hint of being scared for the future. I really think you have a wonderful story on your hands and i can see this becoming one of HPFF's best of or a Dobby winner! Honestly you do such a great job with your characters, they are all refreshing and different but then also compliment each other! It's absolutely wonderful! I'm so looking forward to the next chapter to see more interaction between them and also if she gets that permit! Very original story, will keep reading! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~
Recenseo 2012

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Yea! Rose has a plan :) Auror, nice choice. Fly like the wind Rose and tell Scorpius everything. Good build up chapter. Loved it!

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Oh Giola this is an absolutely wonderful story! I have never read anything written by my wonderful beta and figured this month was as good as any to get a start on one of your stories! The summary of your story intrigued me as it already seemed original and funny to which the actual chapter did not disappoint!

I loved your characterization of Rose! She seems to be a very independent and headstrong girl though still is selfconscious though she doesn't want anyone else to know that she is. Her friend also seems to have a very interesting personality one of which she kind of does what Rose does though is opposite in how she wants to dress and is also secretly interested in Albus.

I found the intereactions between the characters to be very interesting and funny and can't wait to see more of Rose and Scorpius together as they really made the chapter interesting! Altogether, I think you have a wonderful beginning on your hands, one that is interesting and orginal! You shall see more of me as I will be continuing to read this story! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~
Recenseo 2012

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Great chapter!:)
I can't believe it's gonna be over soon. :(.
Oh, well, thank you for writing this :). I loved every single chapter.

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oh you write so well it kills me!! this is a stunning chapter, can't wait for the next!

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Sophia will someday be an entirely awesome witch. Great OC!

Fingers crossed that the next chapter will come soon!

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All of that and Rose is still a fool. With age comes great wisdom. She needs to talk with an adult. Hermione may listen and be unbiased.Mothers and daughters tend to get close after their out of school and on their own. Can't wait to see what your answer to the relationship dilema will be? Great chapter update!

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Lovely chapter as always, you are one of the most talented writers on here, can't wait for an update!!

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Gosh I love your writing. I'm so glad that they didn't get into trouble, that would have been so unfair. Yay a new chapter! Can't wait for the next one :)

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Whoa. Intense. I like it :)

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I love this story so much! It's so brilliantly original - the idea of Rose, particularly your Rose, in a muggle primary school is hilarious and I really didn't expect the whole thing with the traders and Sophia and them all to come up. It really jumped up on me - but that's a good thing, seriously! :D

Ah, Rose. She's such a good character. She's so well-rounded and sorted out and real - she seems like she could be an actual person in real life, you know? Like if I walked into a school or shop somewhere I could actually meet her. And Scorpius... he's so lovely! I want one! ;) Neither of them are perfect, either, which is so wonderful about both of them - they're just themselves.

Also, I love how you haven't had them have a wonderful, amazing relationship and that it didn't break up because of cheating or anything like that, it's such an original way to break them up, such a different and complicated situation for them to be in. I love it!

The traders! Poor Sophia! I wonder where she is... I'm imagining Ron and Harry attempting to look after her and failing miserably, lol. I really, really want to know what happens now - yes, they've got let off this time, but will there be a next time? If so, what will happen? Why do the traders have Rose's picture? What's happening on the third floor which is so dangerous/important?

So many questions! So much suspense! It's so good - I want another chapter now, lol.

Please keep writing - I /have/ to know what happens next!

Aph xx

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Great chapter! I am happy that Rose and Scorpius are not in prison or anything. I also wonder what's going on the 3rd floor.
It was worth the wait :)

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I like this chapter alot, and i really enjoy the flashbacks, that you keep giving(:
Rose and Scorpius are really cute together, update soon!(:

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So glad your back. I missed this story. things were just beginning to click for Rose. I think that date she had said it all.
Now I want to know what the disturbance on the third floor is all about. Rose's student still hasn't been accounted for.
See you soon :)

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oh so exciting, I love the way you make each chapter so good, I'l looking forward to an update!

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This is an amazing story!


10/10

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Wow I read your story at once and I am very impressed. Thank you.

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