29 Reviews Found

Review #26, by FriendofMolly  Family

8th December 2012:
Sebastian,
That was a bit strange, Especially Petunia, it's like she took a family love potion, even Vernon was subdued for him. The only one I wasn't surprised by was Dudley. I really do hope they have more than a Christmas card relationship. I'm a bit confused. Even though Harry and Hermione denied being boyfriend/girlfriend, you are putting them forth as just the opposite. Please post your next soon.
FoM

Author's Response: Been too long FriendofMolly, and who's to say you are still around, but thank you for your initial responses, really gave me a lot to think about.

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Review #27, by FriendofMolly Breaking

8th December 2012:
Sebastian,
I can totally see this happening. I have read many AtB's. There are so many starting storylines. Some outrageous, and some very logical. Yours falls into the latter. We all know how Harry hated to be controlled , and Ron and Hermione are the same, to a lesser extent do too. Probably because of the quest they were forced to follow, without supervision/intervention of the Adults, Now that they are of age, they don't want to go back to being "kids". I am surprised that Harry didn't ask Ginny to be with him, but in this story, that relationship hasn't taken center stage, yet. I must go on.
FoM

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Review #28, by qwerty Breaking

1st December 2012:
pretty good but some things are not at all what they would say or do, is there going to be more?

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Review #29, by FriendofMolly Prologue and Chapter 1: Plans

24th November 2012:
Sebastian,
Though it was a bit disjointed, have several parts to the start, it still was a good start. I am always intrigued at how each author starts their version of the days, months, and years after the battle. A few, but not many include a final visit to Privet Dr. I for one, think that Harry would feel that one last encounter would be needed. Harry knows his Mum would have wanted him to. Even as bad as Harry was treated, being under their roof kept him safe and alive. Plus now that he's an adult he can langlock Vernon without consquences. Maybe, just maybe, Dudley will have become the blood relation he needs. Please post soon!
FoM

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