First chapter and I already love it! :D

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Oh wow! I was not expecting this from the chapter name at all haha! I see you as a complete and utter genius right now for having written all of this so perfectly :). Also, I confess to being unhealthily addicted to this fanfic! ;)x

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I love this story! This chapter was very good. I hope Draco and Hermione stay together. In the next chapter are we going to find out what's up with Draco?

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Woah! This is genuinely amazing. :) I usually try to find something to point out in a fanfiction that could be improved, but I can't find anything that's wrong with this chapter at all! Beautiful writing :) x

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Another amazing chapter please update soon.

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Amazing! I just love it. Cant stop reading! 1 point off for grammar, but you have an amazing story going here!

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it is padma and parvati Patil not patel. just so you know. love the story and I loved chapter 9!!
I hate ronald weasley!

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I feel so sorry for Hermione I wonder why
draco is doing this to her.. is he trying to
protect her by distancing him from her...lots of
questions but hopefully they would be
answered lol thank you for updating regularly
hope the next chapter is up soon 10/10

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i really love this story. i wish it has a happy ending :)

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I love the way this whole story has been written and thought out really well. (: Keep it up!!

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Amazing absoluting hands down the best I've read so far really a piece of art . Great job outstanding I could go on forever

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The writing in this story is very well done, I really enjoy it. Thanks so much, I can't wait for the next chapter. And yes, please do write a sequel!

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I love this story! Please write more!

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Why are there no more chapters yet! :/
Beautiful story.

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Please write more. This is such a good story!

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Write more. Thats all I have to say. ;)

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Omg... How could he?? :o can't wait for the next chapter please update soon 10/10

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Thank u for updating plz finish this book i want to kmw the happy ending.

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The tip off was Ron wasnt it?
great story keep writing :D

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Okay so I quite like this story but I've had to stop reading. I really do think it's a wonderful story with a great plot but there are way too many mistakes. One that pops up repeatedly is that you keep writing 'Privati' or 'Pravati' when infact the character is named 'Pavati'. There are plenty of punctuation mistakes and many words are only half written. I understand that it may just be that you aren't pressing keys hard enough or you are simply just typing too quick to notice, but it let's your story down a lot. Maybe it would benefit for you to hand write your chapters first, or double check before submitting them. You could even get someone to help you with this, even if they just quickly scan over it and correct where necessary.
Please don't think I'm being an arse by saying these things because it is purely just constructive critisim. I really love where the story is going and I'm so glad that it isn't horribly cliche and totally unoriginal. I think it's great and I'm really enjoying it. I'm merely saying the things I am because it could end up benefitting you greatly and get you a lot more acknowledgment. Your story is immensely different and I love it so keep up the good work and take what I say with a pinch of salt. :)

Author's Response: I have had a couple of people say this and it is purely because i didn't notice. It is most likely because I started writing it two years ago and at that time I did not have spell check on my computer so it missed a lot of things. I am however only a few chapters away from finishing and after that I am planning on going through the whole thing and editing, if you wish to wait until then then that is fine but I do hope you come back, The Pavati thing is me simply just not realising. Anyway I hope you come back as I am going to write a sequel! Thanks =)

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Plz tell soon I want them to get together hopefully Draco will tell them everything and he will not be sent prison.

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You're.killing me. WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! Love the story!

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loved this!!! I can't wait to read more!

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Aa i need to knw how the trials um sorry questioning goes, anyway another amazing chapter plz update soon.

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More! Please write more your story is very good. There are only two things i would like to point out. Everytime you talk about parvati you spell her name wrong; and differently every time. And you always refer to ginny as her best friend, by chapter 2, the point had already been gotten.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the tips! When I finish the story I will go through and edit it all and change the bits you have suggested =) thanks

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