hahah this is funny, its kinda ridiculous but its ok because its a ridiculous premise. they are all interesting characters and i really like charlie Report Review
haha i was thinking new girl while reading! i like it its cute and funny, james is appropriately snarky and charlie seems funny too! Report Review
I saw the synopsis of the story and then started reading the first chapter (it's super good by the way) and I was like OH. MY. MERLIN. NEW GIRL, MUCH? HECK YES.
Anyway, I love Charlie and your characterization of James (I could totally see him stepping on his girlfriend's pygmy puff) and I hope your plot advances as much as New Girl does. 10/10 Report Review
I love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D Report Review
Charlie is definetly awesome, but I might actually have to say Aiden. Though he's booted out of the favorite character spot by Rose in the next chapter. I'd love you forever if you updated! PLEASE?!?! 0:D Report Review
I do like James' POV. Maybe you could do the occasional chapter by him? And please, Please, PLEASE update this soon! I'll give you a cookie! (::) It's chocolate chip!!! Report Review
love love love it :D really funny :) wow, Dom is...er...quite demanding, isn't she? But I can totally see that she would be fun to write XD Report Review
WOW! tis so good! Dom was so funny, so was Rose though. i can defs understand the feeling of having my yoghurt stolen, but it was FRENCH CHEESCAKE! not just mixed berry, but i didnt throw a tantrum... maby i shldve though! cant wait for an update and more on rose, shes awesome! id like to meet al, but not vic! please please please update soon or i will throw a tantrum! im not joking!! Report Review
i really like your style of writing its funny but it also has a point i really like your character aiden with his grapefruit fettish cant wait for you to update Report Review
HELL YES. that's all I have to say :) Report Review
haha i literally LOVE rose- she's so funny!
ps i really liked the line: "If anything we minorly pouted." that made me laugh so much :)
i cant wait to read more!
10/10 Report Review
haha this story is so funny, i really like it from charlie's point of view as she is a really like-able character, i can't wait to read more :) 10/10 Report Review
I really love this story, it's so funny and well written. Well done :) 10/10 Report Review
Love it!!! Update sooon!!! Its really funny! Report Review
amazing chapter :) update soon ! Report Review
OMG I was on the homepage and started flipping out because it said you were online! Please tell me you are writing more of enemies with benefits or the love godesses one. I LOVE THOSE THE MOST! but I still love roomies :) WRITE MORE AH Report Review
Haha this is hilarious. Please update this story soon.
BTW, Aiden's my fav character (even though I don't know why…)
Defininetly 10/10 material
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This is amazing! Update soon (: Report Review
Great chapter! I can't wait to read more : ) Report Review
yay love this story all i have to say *huge hug* Report Review
You should've seen the epic freak out of happiness I had when I saw this was updated. Actually, you're probably glad you didn't. I'm alone, so I could be as weird as I wanted. Pretty scary.
Aaanywaaay... LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE!!! You're amazing, I love you so much right now. Dom was fun to read, but Rose is AWESOME!
Ps, this is Me- WITH AN ACCOUNT!!! Report Review
HAHAHA!!! I have never laughed soo much! Dom made me laugh but she also made me soo angry. Charlie is hilarious and I love Rose (although I always have:) Please update soon, reading this makes my day :) xoxo Report Review
First of all, i find it funny that Dianna Agron is your Charlie, because in her twitter description it says 'Dianna Agron, but you can call me Charlie.'
I don't know if this was just coincidence and such or if you planned it, but thats cool :)
Also, James's list of apologies made me laugh so so much- especially the one about stepping on the Pygmy Puff and I love how he and Charlie call each other 'America' and "Britain'.
I could go on listing all the things i love about this chapter but that would take forever. So good job!!
Put up chapter 4 soon please!!!Author's Response: Haha that was just a coincidence but I thought that was really funny when I saw that after I named Charlie (:
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
OH MY ROWLING! This story is so funny!Author's Response: Haha thank you! Love the starkid reference :D Report Review
again, hilarious :) Dom might be a bit over the top, so hopefully she'll become more believable in later chapters. And Rose is pretty awesome! Will Al be in an upcoming chapter??Author's Response: Thanks! And Dom is supposed to be over the top. She's also supposed to make you want to gauge your eyes out (: And there might MIGHT be some Al in the next chappie :D Report Review
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