Ah what was about to happen? Omg I seriously can't handle all this drama lol. Actually, I'm loving it but whoa, it's all happening so fast! I wonder what'll happen with Roxy! Eek! And as much as I hate cliff hangers, this really was a perfect place to stop haha.

-Marissa

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Is it bad of me to say that I kind of wanted Tosh to react badly? >.> Because I so did. Not to be mean or anything because I'm not like that but because it seemed more realistic. I love the nosy buggers they call friends though haha.

-Marissa

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TWINS? What? I so did not see that one coming! That's actually so mind boggling! Ahhh. So I'm pleasantly surprised although I really don't know what Tosh'll do when he finds out. All this suspense is killing me! Haha. Another awesome chapter love! xx

-Marissa

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Aww I really liked this chapter! It was eventful and funny! The snowball tradition was a great thing to add! I think it really developed the characters & it's nice to see them all bonding.

And team Voldemort? Haha I about died of laughter when I read that! So funny! I really love this story. Amazing work! :)

-Marissa

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Aw I actually love Mason! He's adorable, even if he is being a little bit of a hypocrite. It's all because he cares right? I mean, I can understand that haha. This was a really cute chapter. I loved it. I thought it was really well written, a tad short but it's alright, all the drama & humour made up for it :) Thanks for another amazing chapter! xx

-Marissa

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Haha the cute friend fluff was very much appreciated. James, Logan & Fred really aren't the smartest of kids are they? Threatening her with her allergies! I'm glad nothing bad happened... Well, at least they can't use this against Dessie anymore! :)

I think this was a very nice chapter. It didn't feel like a filler at all. Also, I love that you've introduced Mason now. So much happened that I wasn't expecting but it was all amazing!

-Marissa

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I love Fred and James when they're together too! They're like the perfect bros with the whole bromance thing going on haha. So cute! :) I absolutely love this chapter. It was eventful & funny! You caught the reader's attention right away and kept it there! Great work! :)

-Marissa

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Oh I absolutely love Fred's POV. Haha I was waiting for them to get caught. I knew it was bound to happen sooner or later but what I didn't know was who'd find them. Haha.

Seriously though, I can't believe this cliffhanger! I'm so excited to read the next chapter that I'm cranking out this review as fast as I can lol. You're actually such a talented writer!

I love how wel you write humour & the characters are amazing.

-Marissa

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Heidi is pregnant? No. Ok, that seriously wasn't expected. I can't believe she is! I'm still in shock. But yes, this chapter was definitely very drama filled! And funny too :) I loooved it as usual!

-Marissa

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I loved that we got to read from Fred's point of view a little bit. He's definitely an interesting character haha. Again, I have to say that he is my absolutely favourite! :) I like that you got Dessie a little bit mischievous. It's nice to see another side of her & I appreciate that. Thanks for another amazingly hilarious chapter!

-Marissa

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“I respect your ability to snog.” HAHA. Fred just comes up with such marvelous things to say, doesn't he? Oh I love Fred Weasley. I think he's my favourite character. I love Dessie but Fred is just so awesome. I cannot wait to see what you have in store for the rest of the story!

Every chapter so far has been amazingly hilarious! I can't stop laughing. And Dessie's angsty teenage girl mood has surprisingly been making me very happy. I love how immature they are. And the Quidditch team watching while they bicker it out was awesome.

Another amazing chapter! :)

-Marissa

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Seriously, this is one of the funniest stories I have ever read. I love funny stories! Dess is actually such an amusing character. The way she explodes & yells, I can totally relate because I end up yelling quite a bit when frustrated like that haha.

When she said that the snog sucked, I just knew that Fred would try to prove her wrong. It's really amusing that he did. Dess' relationship with Tosh is actually pretty cute. I like it & I think it's nice that they're close like that.

I don't have a favourite quote because there are too many awesome ones to pick from ;) It was a funny but cute chapter & I laughed so hard! Amazing work! :)

-Marissa

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Wow I really love this first chapter! It's so intriguing & funny. From the very start, it was eye-catching. It got my interest right away & kept it throughout the entire chapter! I love your characterizations! Dessie, Fred & Roxanne are all amazing. I'm sure we'll see them develop more as the story goes on but they really are great! The plot looks very interesting & aww, I've always loved Fred Weasley II too! :) Amazing chapter dear! I loved it.

-Marissa

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Ah, I just stumbled upon this story and read the whole thing in a sitting. It's brilliant, and I love that it's based around Fred and not James/OC. I think it makes it rather original. Plus, Fred's bloody brilliant. ^_^

Please, please update soon. I can't wait to see what happen after this chapter, even though it was super short.

Keep up the amazing work,
- Adele :)

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GAH! I have literally fell in love with this story. Keep up the good work! And pleas update soon! :)

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Cliffhanger! Really? After leaving us alone and in the dark for half a year?! Dispicable!

Anyway, love the chapter, but if you update ASAP, I will also love you! Not that I don't already, I was just very disapointed in your update speed

KEEP WRITING :D

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Asfjkl why one direction, whyy? this is so good! I really hope the you keep writing and I also hope that hp is your one true love!! I'm not hating on 1D, don't worry, but I find it as a betrayal to our loyal hp family!! ;) But seriously, NEVER ABANDON THIS

anyways, I TOTALLY ship Fred and dessie, so keep up the good work, and I love Fred's POV's! and you should get going on the roxy and Logan thing!! Hahaha but excellent story I

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Aw yay! I feel like everyone's forgotten about this site, boo:( but what's your 1D fanfic called? I'd like to check it out:)

Author's Response: You can type in Off Limits by calmdowncurly12 into google and you should be able to find it! I have a second one now called America's Sweetheart that needs some love :)

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gahuhhh this has become my newest obsession! pleeease update soon, it's really well written and quite intriguing :)

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i love one direction too but harry potter deserves moree. Pleasee write :) YOu're story is really amazinggg

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I check for updates everyday! :)
You're an extremely exciting read!

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When is the next update? Can't wait so long :(

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I'm so happy you wrote more :D
also, wheres your 1D fanfiction? as in which site/story title :)

Author's Response: You can type in Off Limits by calmdowncurly12 into google and you should be able to find it! I have a second one now called America's Sweetheart that needs some love :)



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I read this story and i loveee it but there isnt any other chapters so i started to look for an other story then i found a really good storry and when i read all of its chapters i checked the authors page for another story and then i realized that both of the stories were yours. You are an amazing writer! You should update asap im checking it everyday. Love you xx

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Wow, I was surprised when I saw that you had a new chapter. Yes, I was also surprised when I saw how short it was, but something is better than nothing, especially after all this time, and I really do hope that you don't leave us like this for another few months before the next chapter.

I had to think about that bit about WWIII for a while, but at least now we in the 'past' know what will spark the third world war in the future- we must made sure those four teenage witches and wizards do not get into that conversation!

I was thinking, as I read about the ink spill and how Weasley got upset, that it was probably Weasley that spilled the ink to begin with, just so he could get Dessie alone. Not the smartest move, however, when Roxy came looking for the pair when they were in a, erm, awkward position in which to be discovered. It was a shame James had to interrupt them, but I knew in the back of my mind that it just had to happen. I wonder what Roxy will do when she finds them in their current state. I don't think it will be pretty. I also wonder how Dessie will react when she realizes what almost happened with a clear head. I think those thoughts make me look forward to the next chapter even more! Until next chapter, then.

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