Usually I don't like leaving big reviews, and many a times don't even leave one (yeah i am that lazy, u can know by my typing that i dont even press shift while writing "i" , if that makes sense to u but thats beside the point). The point is that you trick me into into leaving a review by your writing.
Without further babbling, just to tell u that the best part of your story is dialogues. been waiting for this part to come in last chapter but that was brilliant, and beside the fire was perfect place for this conversation so 10/10.


p.s. Can't wait for James and Lily to get together.

p.s.s. Hope u update soon.

Author's Response: aw, thanks :D haha, its a good thing you like the dialogue, since I've realised I do use a lot of it! will try and get the next chapter up as soon as I can :)

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Oh.plz plz plz update soon...cant wait to know what happens next.how james and sirius will reconcile.hope they will make up soon.

Author's Response: thanks! got a lot of uni work at the minute, but will try and get the next chapter up as soon as possible - hope you keep reading :)

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I hope James gets a nice long romance with a nice sweet girl who is noting like Lily. I'd say the poor bloke deserves it after being betrayed by someone he thought was a mate.

Author's Response: strong words! Lily has her sweet moments, don't you think? lol anyway thanks for the review - i hope you keep reading :)

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You can't believe my reaction when I see this story updated, its like
:-| to :-)
what really amazes me in your writing style is your updating skill, really :)


ok just kidding!!!

actually what really amazes me in your writing style is your easy flow of the story even when it includes a forbidden ship i.e. Sirius/Lily. I mean your plot is actually very realistic apart from some cliche's, which, well keeps the story living..

And Moony comes back, that's enough for this chapter!!
So keep updating and updating and updating..
Bye~~~

Author's Response: haha, i dont update that quickly! thanks very much, really pleased its coming across quite realistically, i know i love my cliches :)

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Please keep writing, it made me cry, i was feeling all their emotions plz keep wriiting

Author's Response: oh wow, thanks! will try to update soon, really pleased your enjoying it :)

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I love your writing style so much! I've become really picky about what I read because this just dims everything by comparison. And now I don't know who I want Lily to be with anymore! I mean Sirius is really daring and just awesome really and James is really sweet and - gah I really am confused with my emotions. Please update soon!

Author's Response: oh wow, thank you! thats really flattering, will have to hurry up and get the next chapter up now, haha - hope you keep reading :)

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plz update soon...cant wait to read next chappy

Author's Response: :D ill update as soon as the queue opens, if it isnt already :) thanks for reviewing!

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:| Good chapter, but sad.

Author's Response: thanks :) and it gets happier dont worry! well i think it does, havent written it yet haha

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Please keep 'em coming! It's just getting to the James and Lily part! Good Stuff.

Author's Response: thanks! will do :)


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Love it so much! Can't wait for more please please please please please update soon I need to know what happens!! This is amazing I love your writing style and the story line and everything is just perfect and gah can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response: oh wow, thank you! still working on the next chapter... but i hope you keep reading :)

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plz plz plz update soon...i want to know how james and sirius will rekindle their friendship...i hope james will forgive sirius soon.
i just loved how you characterised james.and his reaction to whole thing.it was really something refreshing rather than the ususal ' beating the crap out of sirius" and yelling " she's my girl".."how could you do this to me" etc etc.hope you will update soon

Author's Response: thanks! i didnt know whether people'd like the reactions and that, but thats reasurring :D i'll try to update soon.

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OMG OMG; James is being such a gentleman. I thought he was going to break two three of sirius' bones;-)
The real cliche is James got to know everything when it all ended. Anyways so much bad for Sirius now he neither has James nor his precious Lily!!!

Mary is really being sensible and a good friend.She'll help Lily wth it, and where is Remus in it??? How can a chapter be complete without Remus' help? Hope to see him in next chap when he has recovered from full moon.

What I desperately want is the two of them to be friends again i.e. Sirius and James. Everyone likes the marauders united. But when they are separate they will realize it.

Liked the last part when James and Lily talked, Lily is really falling for James. Poor girl, doesnt know who she wants to be with. But she'll know eventually.
Now she is torn between two friends and feels guilty for breaking up their friendship.

Enough rambling for now, bye.

I didn't realized I wasn't logged in so i am reposting it.

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OMG OMG; James is being such a gentleman. I thought he was going to break two three of sirius' bones;-)
The real cliche is James got to know everything when it all ended. Anyways so much bad for Sirius now he neither has James nor his precious Lily!!!

Mary is really being sensible and a good friend.She'll help Lily wth it, and where is Remus in it??? How can a chapter be complete without Remus' help? Hope to see him in next chap when he has recovered from full moon.

What I desperately want is the two of them to be friends again i.e. Sirius and James. Everyone likes the marauders united. But when they are separate they will realize it.

Liked the last part when James and Lily talked, Lily is really falling for James. Poor girl, doesnt know who she wants to be with. But she'll know eventually.
Now she is torn between two friends and feels guilty for breaking up their friendship.

Enough rambling for now, bye

Author's Response: wow thanks for the review! Remus will be back in the next chapter, don''t worry :) glad youre still enjoying it!

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OMG!!! Update soon! Please!

Author's Response: I'll upload the next chapter today, so it should be up soon :) thanks for keeping reviewing!

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OMG James and Lily need to end up together! Please! James is perfect! This is so goood, please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank god, someone who likes James :D was starting to think i'd made him too boring! thanks for the review, will update soon :)

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Hey,
Good to see you again soon:-)
And with such an interesting chapter~~
And finally James knows!!! Yay clich!!! Does he listen to the whole conversation or just the kiss part???
am waiting for another update,
so bye for now,,
see you soon!!!

Author's Response: good to hear from you too! youll have to wait and see how much james saw, lol - thanks for the review, next chapter will be up soon:)

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Please update soon I need to know what happens! This is so good!!

Author's Response: thanks! next chapters just waiting to be validated :)

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Are you almost done with chapter 28 yet??? I can't wait much longer!

Author's Response: finished and its up - just waiting for validation :) my internets been down, hope you can wait that extra bit!

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Awesome story!! I love Sirius/Lilly stories, and this is the best so far. If she does end up with James at the end something inside me will die. Jk, XD- update soon.

Author's Response: thank you! :) and lol, youll have to wait and see!

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Love it! Perfect! Really fantastic! Update soon!

Author's Response: loving all your reviews! thanks :) next chapter just needs to be typed then ill get it uploaded :)

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I'm so infatuated with this story! You are really amazing!

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Oh gosh. Very dramatic. Love it!!

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Aw. Finally they kiss again.

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Oh my gosh! Run Sirius run! Run lily run! Run James run!

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God lily! Just tell Sirius that you love him!

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