Woah!!! Just major WOW! That was definitely one amazing one shot!! Your writing is completely brilliant. I do believe you are a very talented writer ;)
So I don't LOVE Dramione, but I'm okay with it. And in your fic, the Dramione turned out so amazingly! Sure, there were one or two cliches in there, but the way you wrote it made your fic really compelling to read and so interesting! I loved Hermione's flashbacks while she was walking down the aisle to Ron, and the ending was simply brilliant! - Right after this I'm reading the sequel! :P
I love your writing! So descriptive, and though it's also a bit informative with background information, or retelling the past, it's so interesting and you had me completely engaged; wanting to know what was going to happen next.
As with most Dramiones, I did think some of Hermione and Draco's character was a bit OOC, but truthfully, you NEED that to make a Dramione work, so all around, I do want to applaud you for keeping it mostly canon and writing up a great story.
So I loved the plot! And I loved the way you wrote this story! Fabulous fic, really :)Author's Response: Hey Charlotte! :) I'm going to answer every one of your lovely reviews!
I'm glad you loved the way this story went! It was my first Dramione but it really just hit me upside the head!
You're right, Draco and Hermione do have to be a bit OOC but you know, years have passed and people are just diff, you know?
Thank you again for reviewing!
Char Report Review
WOW!!! This story is totally amazing. I was held spell bound the whole way through it, transfixed by the emotional journey you were weaving.
The story flowed so well in and out of the flash backs and there was a different feel about them too. The past scenes were so light and sweet, the present one sombre and sad. There were some amazing sentences and paragraphs in here that are totally gold. I would love to pick a favourite but there are just too many and I would never be able to decide. The descriptions and the metaphors though are just exquisite.
The characterisation was really nice and the way you wrote Draco and the way the relationship developed was very believable. Hermione was also very sweet and the choices she made and the emotions she was portraying were realistic to her.
I was so happy when Draco came back. My heart really went out to Hermione while reading this story and I was so happy that Draco would come back. I really felt all of her emotions as I was reading through.
I didn't notice any spelling or grammar issues, so well done, thought I do conceded that I was so enraptured that I may have missed them.
This is a really amazing story. It is so well written and so beautiful to read.Author's Response: Oh my. I was just about floored when I read this here review. *waves hand in front of face* I do believe I may faint.
Thank you so much for taking the time to write back to me on it! ! ! :) Report Review
Hi, this is AditiDraco95 from the forums with your review.
Let me say, this was a very nice fic.
Good plot-line, good characterization, dialogue, flow etc.
Overall, quite well-written.
there were a few grammar mistakes here and there but they can fixed with a re-read or a beta.
Nice job with bringing out the emotional side of the plot.
I would give this a 9/10
ADAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read this! I'm getting a friend to beta-read this and make it ship shape! Report Review
This is really really good. I wonder how ron will feel about itAuthor's Response: A h h h h! Go check out "One Second Can Be A Lifetime" and you'll see how he feels :) Report Review
Just letting you know, again, what a great one-shot this is. Really super job! Keep writing! And thanks for sharing your talent.Author's Response: Thanks happy. You're hilarious :) Report Review
this was truly a wonderful piece of work :) i love it!!Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
OH MY GOSH! CHILLS EVERYWHERE! I'm SOOO GLAD YOU CONTINUED TO COMPLETE THIS STORY!Author's Response: Thank you for reading!! Love your enthusiastic response!! Report Review
love it love it love it! (:Author's Response: thank you thank you thank you :D Report Review
That was.. Ugh! Evil cliffhanger.. Haha.. But good, great even.. I am definitely reading the sequel.. :)Author's Response: Thanks! :) Hope you like it! Report Review
So Malfoy abandoned her, she fell apart and had to be put back together by someone else. That same someone who she immediately abandoned one minute after Malfoy decided to show up again? Obviously she's an idiot.Author's Response: Ahhh!!! Maybe you can read the sequel and it'll be better.? Report Review
Oh gosh, this was seriously amazing! I felt myself leaning forward and forward while I read this. The flashbacks were so well done, and perfectly placed with the present day bits.
I literally had goosebumps when Draco said I object. I've never read a Draco/hermione wedding fic where that happened, and it was stunning!
I loved the pacing and ending of this, but I still think you should continue! Amazing work!
-Katie:DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for R&Ring!! And you are in luck since I DID continue--"One Second Can Be A Lifetime"--which is basically done, just have to get it all through the que... Report Review
touching... beautiful...sad but filled with hope a the same time. Can't wait for the sequel!Author's Response: Thank you ! Sequel now up "One Second Can Be A Lifetime" Report Review
Oh. My. God. This is probably the best story I have ever read and it's only a one-shot. You are AMAZING! You should definetly write a sequel! You described everything so wonderfully, I felt like I was there :)
On theories for what happened to Draco; I think his father forbade him from seeing Hermione, simple but it's what makes the most sense to me :) Thanks for writing this WONDERFUL story :)Author's Response: Thanks! This one was really written on a shot of random inspiration in the middle of a class so I'm very happy it turned out so well Report Review
I think I may have read this a long time ago, but I'm not sure. Anyway, I loved it! Well written and heart rendering. thanks for sharing.Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
OMFG I love this. It's adorable, fluffy, loving, beautiful. I love it.Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Report Review
thats a wonderful story - i love it. i want to read more.Author's Response: Well, I'm not adding anymore to this one but go look at "One Second Can Be A Lifetime" which is the companion piece to this one. Thank you for reviewing!!! Report Review
Love, love, loved it! A sequel would be an awesome and welcome thing.
Draco hmm . . . where in the world was that boy???
This totally reminds me of the one-shot I have just written about Oliver Wood . . . it's currently waiting for validation . . . Only mine is the sequel. =]
Anyway, I haven't the faintest idea what you have come up with as to where he was but I'm sure it will be reasonable and hopefully plausible. I'm definitely going to watch out for that.
Again, I loved it! It's wonderful! And I can't wait for the sequel! =]Author's Response: OK! Yay! Sequel made it through the que! "One Second Can Be A Lifetime" I'll look out for your Wood one, ay? Report Review
hey um dentists don't usually say emergency denatl work, i would know both my parents are dentists and they almost speak another language of root canals and bleaching and fillings.
otherwise i really enjoyed your story and loved your unique way of setting it out! :)Author's Response: Um, yeah...I normally stay away from dentists (don't tell them!) so I don't quite know the "slang"...thank you for reviewing!! Love it! Report Review
this is a great story!!! what happened to draco whe he left? why did he leave hermione alone? did his parent have something to do with it? how will she react? sequel! sequel!Author's Response: Hang in there! It's coming!! Thanks for reading :) :) Report Review
sequel ! Sequel ! Sequel ! Plz plz plz write a sequel I'm curious of what happened ! It was a really great story :)Author's Response: Sequel up! Look at it "One Second Can Be A Lifetime" Report Review
this is one of the best dramione one-shots i've read. :)
i love the very ending, how ron isnt a complete jerk and actually lets her go.Author's Response: Thank you for reading! That's a pretty lovely review :) Report Review
absolutely beautifully written. one of the best i've ever read :)Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! That really makes me want to do more AND better!! :) :) Report Review
Beautiful! I bet Draco got imprisoned by his father... that's my guess.Author's Response: Close! :) Thanks for reading!!! Report Review
This was really very good. I love how understanding Ron and Harry are. my ideas for what happened to Draco is that his family wiped his memory of his time with Hermione, but he loved her so much that when he saw the wedding announcement in the Daily Prophet he broke through the memory charm. I would really love to see a sequal.Author's Response: Sequel coming!! Thank you so much for your theory! And it may or may not be close to what I'm writing XD Report Review
OH MY GOD! You should definitely write the sequel! Please write the sequel! I need to know what happens next and I need to know what happened to Draco to, not only break up with Hermione, but to do it in an absolutely horrible way! There has got to be a reason! Personally, I think it has something to do with his father, it seems like something he would do (and 'cause I like Narcissa more than Lucius!)
10/10Author's Response: I am def writing a sequel!! All will be revealed...slowly yet surely... (totally agreed on liking Lucius more than Cissy, but...we'll see) Report Review
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