Loved this chapter!!
I really can't wait to find out what's going to happen next, please update as soon as you can. Report Review
Yay the action is beginning!! Thanks for updating. And the deal she made with Rose is a nice add in to the story. Keep updating.
-LEP :) Report Review
This should definitely be exciting! But I have a feeling it'll all end in tears... Scorpius is just such an adorable doormat, and Rose needs a slap. Hehe :) I can't wait to see how Lucy attempts to get close to Callum without her throwing up or him getting suspicious - it seem like the most impossible job to do in the history of the world!
I'm excited for the next chapter :)
~Maddie x Report Review
Yay you're back! Loved it! Keep writing :D Report Review
I love Lucy! She's just so to the point and snarky, I actually thought she was going to tell Peggy that Callum cheated on her with Rose; that would have been interesting as Rose deserves it.
I'm looking forward to seeing Lucy get close to Callum and expose him on the grapevine :) Report Review
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I like this a lot!! It's funny and even though I'm not a Lucy weasley person, I like it
Clea Report Review
LOVE it! Please update soon! x Report Review
Ooh, drama! I can't wait to see where this goes! Report Review
This is such a great idea for a story, you have developed the characters really well and I am looking forward to getting to know them better. This story is really refreshing as I haven't read anything like it before so keep up the good work and update soon.
GirlOnTheSidelines. Report Review
I really didn't see that coming!!
I love this story, it's a great start.
I really like Callum, he seems like a really original and interesting character. :D
Is Callum simlar to Lucy, but he just doesn't take the pictures he just does it himself and gets paid for it? (I've just realised that sounds really bad but I didn't mean it like that, sorry XD)
I really can't wait to see where you go with this and what the secret is, please update as soon as you can. Report Review
Loved this chapter! :D I don't really like Rose but I love Bridget, Callum, Lucy and Louis. :D eee I'm very excited for what's to come :) :) Report Review
Yay! New story!
I really like Lucy :) Report Review
I love Lucy :) She's just so straight-to-the-point, it's refreshing. And Callum's just incredibly moody, seeing him with Bridget was so funny 'cause she's like the complete opposite to him! So, Callum cheating was just a way to expose Rose to Scorpius? Interesting... though, I wonder why Callum would even bother with that anyway since it seems like it wouldn't benefit himself in any way. But we shall see :)
All the characters seem really different and extremely intruiging so far, I can't wait to find out more about them, especially Louis! (what can I say, I have a soft spot for him :P) This story sounds like it's gonna have lots of twists and turns, I'm excited to see what else is in store!
Btw, the banner is gorgeous, and your summary had me hooked straight away! :) Report Review
Great start, I loved it!!
I really liked Lucy, there are so many of the same stories going around and this one seems really unique.
Louis seems so funny, I love the banter between them.
Anyway, I really can't wait to see where you go with the plot. Please update as soon as you can. :DAuthor's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! And thanks for saying it's unique, that's what all writers like to hear! I'm going to update asap so hope you read it :) x Report Review
I like this very much! It's got the witty banter and the girl detective who acknowledges and loves her ability to be invisible. It's a little like Veronica mars if I do say so but if you have never watched the show and just came up with this, then kudos to you! I can't wait for more! Update soon!Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so much! I've never watched Veronica Mars myself, but i hear good things about it...so i assume that's a compliment? thanks for reading and review and i will update soon! :) x Report Review
Lucy is so underappreciated on the archives. I really like that you chose her as your main character. This story is really clever and just like your other story I'm already liking it! I think it's a good twist as Lucy as a private investigator. I don't think I've ever read that before and the ending was such a surprise. Can't wait to see what happens next. :DAuthor's Response: I completely agree! There are stories about her that are really great, I don't know why people don't use her more often! She doesn't have to convene to a stereotype like Rose or Albus, instead we can make her whatever we want. And I'm glad that you found the story unconventional! i'll update asap :) x Report Review
Yay it's so good!! I love Lucy and Louis' characterisation, the concept and the writing is easy to follow and effortlessly funny. It's obvious you have put a lot of effort into the plot and characters which I love :) :) good for you!Author's Response: I'm so happy you like it! Characterization is probably the most important thing in a story for me personally, while the plot is still being fully formed in my head! and I'm so flattered that it's fun and easy to follow :) Thanks for the review! x Report Review
i love this so far update soon:)Author's Response: I will :) glad you're enjoying it! x Report Review
So awesome! I love the characterisation of Lucy and the dialogue is hilarious! Love your writing style, PLEASE continue and soon LOL! Lovin' this story so far!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you're enjoying it! I will update as soon as I can :) x Report Review
Woah. Did not expect it to be Rose, I assure you...
*whistles a long, light tune*
Update soon! I LOVE this story, can't wait to read more!
10/10Author's Response: Glad it was unexpected! And glad you're enjoying it :) I will be updating soon! x Report Review
I have already fallen in love with this story. I never imagined Lucy that way or really payed much attention to that Weasley. Keep on writing,
-LEP :)Author's Response: Im glad you like it :) I felt like Lucy is always overlooked, and i really wanted to try someone other than Rose/Albus/James etc. Thanks for reading! x Report Review
loved this premise you set up here! i think there's a lot of promise for this story - can't wait for the next chapter :3Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! The next chapter will be up soon :) x Report Review
This seems like a really interesting concept so far! Lucy's my type of girl and Louis just made me smile. The way they seem to have accepted how they're the oddballs and will never live up to anything more than their cousins is quite sad though, they seem really cool. BUT Rose has been caught, so perhaps they're not as brilliant as Lucy once thought, hehe ;) Ah, I can only imagine having Percy as my dad... *shudder*
Hope you update soon, I'm hooked!
~Maddie xAuthor's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it :) The way I see it Lucy and Louis are outcasts because they don't want to be associated with their cousins popularity, which they have just because their parents are rich and famous. But the truth as to why they cut themselves off completely will be revealed soon enough! I know, having Percy as my dad would be horrible!
Anyways, i'm going to update soon:) x Report Review
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