109 Reviews Found

Review #26, by WolfGirl_MoonEyes Twelve-Years-Old.

16th May 2011:
This chapter makes me think that Teddy and Vic may have trouble with age difference and other peoples veiws in Hogwarts, afterall, does a year 7 spend so much time with a year 9, related or not?

It'd be awesome if a new chapter came out! Ive spent my time reading the chapters over and over again! It makes my day when a new chapter comes out!

If you want any help with ideas, or names, (I'm practically an unquallified nameologist, thanks to me having the-almost-world-record for most 'middle' names), I'd be more than over the moon to help :).

I'd love to see James and Lilys parents over, for lets say, christmas, or something along thoes lines, just to extend the family and expand the story. If they needed backstory, just throw in a line along the sounds of 'James well remembered... How could he forget? They looked exactly like...'

Thankyou so much for your amazing idea! I am honestly becoming more and more fond of it as i read and considering how many times I've read this story... Lets say its a whole new level! :')

Thanks for your stroke of GENIUS! :)

-
Lirit Wolf

xx

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Review #27, by WolfGirl_MoonEyes Still-Twelve-Years-Old.

4th May 2011:
Best ideas ever! Faster uploading tho please? I love your wrighting style! Its got me hooked, whats happening next? PLEASE continue this story - i will die if it is abandoned! :(

Author's Response: Thank You so much!!! And I will try to type faster, as Im working on the next chapter right now!!! Thanks so much for the comments and for reading my story!!

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Review #28, by Dizzy73 Still-Twelve-Years-Old.

2nd May 2011:
Love it! I can't wait when Victoire enter Hogwarts!

Author's Response: It might take about three more chapters before Victoire enters Hogwarts. Sorry. But thanks so much for commenting and reading my story!

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Review #29, by faithintheboys Still-Twelve-Years-Old.

24th April 2011:
I love this story! Awesome job!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I will be updating soon!

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Review #30, by Maddie Still-Twelve-Years-Old.

23rd April 2011:
YAY! Thank you for updating. I loved how Harry and Ron had to come and teach a class, it's such a good idea! Teddy is so cute. I wonder whats going to happen when Victoire comes to Hogwarts??? I hope that you update soon!

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Review #31, by Lost4ever4ever Still-Twelve-Years-Old.

23rd April 2011:
Great chap
the next could be about Teddy first date or real kiss, and make them say James and albus middle names to surprise Sirius and snape. Continue soon

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Review #32, by becky Still-Twelve-Years-Old.

23rd April 2011:
course i didnt mind i was actualy hounered that u did

i think it would be quiet nice if you did a chappie with harry & co. at the burrow for like i dunno easter (or somthing) and then the 'people in the clouds' (including snape) learn james' & al's middle names cause i think it will be a nice break from school with the weasly/potter + teddy & andy clan altogether & the reaction of sirius & snape will be funny

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Review #33, by Maanf Still-Twelve-Years-Old.

22nd April 2011:
I think your story is really good :). I never actually thought about what happened when they died. Please update soon (:

Author's Response: Thank You so much! I sha'll update soon!

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Review #34, by becky Still-Twelve-Years-Old.

22nd April 2011:
loved that chappie as always - good job, try to post again soon

Author's Response: Lol, I will try to write more soon.any ideas about what you want to see. I used your teaching idea and I even added in your name to the story, lol, Hoped you ddin't mind too much. I sha'll continue my typing of chapters now!

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Review #35, by becky Twelve-Years-Old.

8th April 2011:
yh soz did mean post new chappy

oh well life gos on.

... but only if that chappie gets put up

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Review #36, by Ally Twelve-Years-Old.

2nd April 2011:
I love this story please please write more this is the best fanfic ever but I want more please write another chapter soon

Author's Response: Thanks for the comments and the praise and sorry about the slow updates.

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Review #37, by Ally Twelve-Years-Old.

2nd April 2011:
I love this story please please write more this is the best fanfic ever but I want more please write another chapter soon

Author's Response: I'm sorry about the slow updates, really I am.

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Review #38, by becky Twelve-Years-Old.

27th March 2011:
plz review soon i miss reading ur story its got such a good plot

Author's Response: Please review soon? Lol, don't you mean post the next chapter? I'm sorry about the delay I've been slightly busy and I was working on chapters from a few of my stories from another fanfiction site, but I'll update this story this week, or at least send in the chapter this week and hope it gets posted by this week.

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Review #39, by Maddie Twelve-Years-Old.

18th March 2011:
I can't believe how much I love this story! Please post a new chapter soon, I really want to know what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank You, chapter nine is posted now!

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Review #40, by nicola Twelve-Years-Old.

11th March 2011:
aww such a lovely chapter i realy do love this story hope you write more soon xx

Author's Response: Thank You so much!! I'll write more soon!

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Review #41, by sugar_spun_butterflies Twelve-Years-Old.

1st March 2011:
There was a slip somewhere around the middle
"adorable Victoria is has a disgruntled Victoria"

Author's Response: Sorry about that, I hope you like the story, though.

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Review #42, by GriffindorGal Twelve-Years-Old.

1st March 2011:
Yay ! Great chapter ,a little short though :(

Author's Response: Sorry a longer chapter will come soon!!!

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Review #43, by becky Twelve-Years-Old.

28th February 2011:
lol great chapter although it wasnt one of your best - it could have been a bit more informative
but it is still a great chapter

becky xx

ps:i am not going to kill you unless the chapters get worse
lol jokin!

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Review #44, by Canadian_Hogwarts Twelve-Years-Old.

28th February 2011:
Awww, so sweet! I love Teddy and Victoire together so much, whether they're friends or something more. The last line was the cutest thing:) Great work, as always!

Author's Response: Thank You so much!!! I love Victoire and Teddy as friends or more also!!

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Review #45, by ekroman Twelve-Years-Old.

28th February 2011:
Aww! That's so cute :)

Author's Response: Thank You!

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Review #46, by Kandy Twelve-Years-Old.

28th February 2011:
Aww! So much cuteness! Please bring Snape back, there's SO MUCH POTENTIAL for some fun times between him and Sirius :) wonderful story, funny and engaging, keep it up! 8/10!

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Review #47, by imaginary lines Twelve-Years-Old.

28th February 2011:
OMG just finished reading all eight chapters and I cannot wait for the next ones because it's too good. keep writing chapters please!

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Review #48, by nicola Still-Eleven.....

27th February 2011:
OMG the waiting i cant stant the waiting lols it is your fault for writing such a good story ;p x

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Review #49, by becky Still-Eleven.....

26th February 2011:
*sniffs* where is that chapter it was ment to be out weeks ago *sniff*

Author's Response: It is in valeditation...and it said it would take up to six days so if that doesn't change then the chapter shoulde be out by at least Tuesday. I'm hoping.I'm really hoping the valeditation days don't go up any further...because I sent it out on the 21st so six days later is the 27th.

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Review #50, by becky Still-Eleven.....

20th February 2011:
gr wheres the nxt chapter my life is empty

Author's Response: I am so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so sorry! I sent in the chapter today, I swear! Don't kill me or anything.=p.=].

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