Hiya!

Things got a whole lot interesting haha
I see that you've also made Hermione and Harry Prefects as well. There were two things that I found a little odd (1.) Kaya needed to get on top of Malfoy and be in the room while he changed and (2.) the list at the beginning of the chapter showed Draco's name paired with Blaise's, how is it that he ended up patrolling with Kaya? Was that a plot hole or those pairs of names weren't necessarily assigned to patrol together.

I'm sorry. I'm just curious. I did like that bit with Kaya and Draco in the same room though! Oh, and you've finally introduced the lad! I was hoping for some physical descriptions of him, especially for Kaya since she's your original character (yeh know, just to give your audience an insight as to how you pictured her.) I think that would help your story a lot. Description and imagery! Good job though! I'm definitely loving this!

Happy Writing!

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Hiya! Me, again ^_^

I found the last part to be really cute for some odd reason. I think it was because I was expecting the both, if not at least one of them to freak out!

So far I'm really liking the plot. It's unique how you made Ron Weasley the Head Boy while sticking to his canon profile ^_^ I definitely can't wait to see how your plot unfolds ^_^

Kaya seems to be quite a character ^_^ For a girl who thought she'd end up in Slytherin, she seems very nice and quite accepting Ron as her fellow Head Boy considering his circumstances at school. I can't wait to see how things turn out when she meets Malfoy ^_^

Happy Writing!

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Hiya!
Emesias here!

This is an interesting way to start off the story ^_^ There's just something about it that makes me want to read on. I can't wait to see what happens! Moving on to chapter 2!

Happy Writing!

P.S. Please feel free to drop by review thread at the forums ^_^ "Emesias's Reviews"

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Yaay ! They're back together! :D I love them ^^

*Maria

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Aww! So bittersweet :/

Well written, honey!

*Maria

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I'm no longer confused. Great chapter! ;)

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Oooh!! He SO obliviated her!

Great chapter :)

*Maria

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No!

Short, but good.

*Maria

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yay! New chapters :D

The two newest ones were so good! Make them longer please, it makes me sad to read them so quickly and have nothing else to move on to. :/

Ah, oh my goodness what is going to happen? I'm so in love with your story it's so good! Please update again soon, I can't wait to find out what happens next.

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Great chapter. I'm very confused...

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The last part gave me chills, oh my god did someone use a time turner or something?!

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AHAHA I RECOGNISE THAT SCENE!! crazy stupid love

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I actually love this story, refreshingly different from some others iv'e read! please keep updating! x

Author's Response: What you just said means the world to me. I love that you find my story refreshingly different. Thank you !

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I'm honestly crying right now. This is amazing.

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He need to help Kaya!!!
He has to do something!!! He is being weak!! Ok I know isn't much that he can do, but... He can't rebel against his family,. right?
But... he love Kaya, I think he love... Maybe if she move to the "bad side", maybe if Draco use his slytherin skills, and convince his parents that she can be in their side?? Or maybe he can tell Harry that she is there??? but then Harry will be the hero again...

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Holy!! Draco is acting strange. Im excited for future chapters to see what he's going to do 10/10

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Nooo! I've been reading this story for the past hour and I've finally reached the spot when there are no more chapters to read.
I must know what happens next! Please update soon, this story is so good and it's got me hooked!

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You, very, very talented girl! I am proud to call you my friend :)

Very powerful chapter indeed.

I, for one, think(hope, is more like it) that Draco will come 'round and help Kaya.

*Maria(10/10)

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I like this sudden turn of events. I'm not sure what's going to happen with Draco but I hope he steps up and saves Kayla. Update soon. :)

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Awesome chapter can't wait to hear what will happen next

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oh ma gawd!! what is Draco doing?!?! I thought he loved Kaya! Please update soon :D
10/10

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Nice turn of events! I'm confused about the changes and stuff, but I'm sure the next few chapters will clear things up nicely :)

*Maria

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Wouldn't mind being pinned up against a tree by Draco Malfoy.. Just sayin'

You write so beautifully Kat, really you do! I've been pulled in by this story from the word go

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BRILLIANT.
Gosh I love how you write Malfoys character, really! This was just brilliant.

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I love this!:D I really like Kaya's character, and the dialogue between herself and Ron was lovely :) The end tickled me too(': I can't wait to read on!:D

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