This was great! and a really inventive chapter name, i like it :)
I can't wait for the confrontation between Rex and scorp because it's going to happen sooner or later! and I'm so glad that you left Rose and Scorp together and they're not even drunk! which means it's serious haha, you done a really great job with this chapter, I really can't wait for the next one.
Sora

Author's Response: It's funny you mention the chapter name because I almost didn't name it that, it was originally called Until the Night, which is the name of the great song by Hands & Teeth but as I started thinking about it I was like but it's already night and...
I'm not sure how much of a confrontation is going to occur between Rex and Scorpius, some things I know and have planned out other's I don't and that's one of the things that I haven't planned out entirely yet. I didn't want them to be drunk because it makes it an accident and I didn't want it to be a mistake.
Glad you liked the chapter thanks for the review.

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I am loving this! And just so you know I will be very unhappy if this does not have a good ending!

Some things that would make it easier to read:
Some commas! They add pauses to a sentence so it will flow better
Correct pronouns (he, she, his, her) I noticed that sometimes you accidently mix them up
And finally: spelling. While I can still tell what you are trying to say, spelling something correctly helps get your point accross in the right context.

Over all you are doing really well, but I think fixing these little grammatical errors will take your writing to the next level! Keep going! I really am loving your stories!

Author's Response: Sorry I can't tell about the ending you will just have to wait and find out. :)
As for making my writing better,
I know that commas are used for pauses and I actually use them quite often, my writing instructor tells me to not over comma because then it makes too choppy and seem to lengthy. In this story I use a good bit of commas, so nine time out of ten if I didn't use a comma it's because I don't want to enhance a pause. Don't get me wrong I am sure that I missed a few places and I think I might have a feeling about where you think I need them.
About the pronouns I will go look at those and see if I can't find them, I do go back and edit but seeing as how im the one who is writing it my mind knows what it's supposed to say so I might be over looking it.
As for spelling the problem is that im not exactly misspelling words im spelling words correctly it's just not the word that I meant to use, so spell check doesn't pick it up. What I can suggest for that is to actually tell me what words need fixing and I will go back and fix them. I am the worlds worst speller always have been and when I go back and read over it I think I am saying the correct thing when im not. If that makes sense.
Anyways thank you for the review.

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Oh my, you have made me a very happy reader. This chapter was filled with so much emotion; so many feelings right now. And I thought last chapter was dramatic...
You are such a great writer. Last chapter I was saying how I almost want Rose to give Rex a chance because he is a genuine guy, but now I am thinking that Rose better not run away again from this moment that her and Scorpius are having. Rex who again?
But then, still, Rose said that she and Rex were not a couple "yet," so what does that mean? She's currently dating him but not official?
I am very curious as to what will happen next. Will she go to his apartment? Will they continue to feed into what they want and sleep together, yet still avoid their issues with each other? Will they dry up, and finally talk to each other about their secrets? Scorpius said that it took only three months with Rose to know that he did not want to be anyone else's. So did he call of the engagement? If so, why would he be hurt and running away from everything then. So many things still unknown.
Anyways, I feel like they won't sleep together since that would be too rushed, but then again I did Not expect them to kiss in the rain. Very sweet, I could not stop smiling.
Cannot wait for the next chapter! :]

Author's Response: I'm happy I made you happy. Yes this chapter had a lot of dramatic moments.
As for Rex didn't expect people to like him that much so I almost felt somewhat guilty when I wrote this chapter, obviously my guilt to get to me too much because they still kissed.
You picked up on the "Yet," I couldn't make it work in this chapter but in the next one you find out what is going on with her and Rex.
The next chapter is coming along, I cant say too much without revealing too much, but a lot of your questions will be answered I can promise that.
Anyways thank you so much for the review and for reading.

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Rose becomes pregnant or that Rex just happened to walk by?

Author's Response: No. Rex is in south Carolina and why would he be walking around in the middle of a storm, not to mention Scorpius appererated with her to his room if Rex had seen something it would have happened. As for her getting pregnant sorry nope I don't do the pregnancy plot line, just not my thing. Besides who says that they are going to sleep together? Thanks for the review.

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i cannot begin to tell you how much i love this story. I've been reading the first one for the past few days (work pulls me away) and so when i got to this chapter and went to go press the arrow to go to the next chapter i was surprised for a second that there wasn't one. I just want to keep reading! I want to find out what the hell happened with the Fiance(!!), And i want to find out about Albus' secret boyfriend(!!). There's so much i want to know, i cannot wait for your update :) Thank you for writing such a compelling story.

Author's Response: Yeah I started this story in January and ironically it was published on the exact same date as the first one so they are exactly three years apart. Anyways with this one I update every two weeks and the next chapter should be up sometime next week, I was running a little behind on Chapter 11 and missed my update but no biggie.
It's nice to know that you want to keep on reading and that you think my story is compelling thank you. As for Albus' secret boyfriend that isn't going to come out until either chapter 12 or 13, and information about the Fiancé will come out slowly because there are two sides to that story.
Anyways than you so much for the review, so glad that you enjoying the story.

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Your stories have me continuously on edge. I've found myself shedding a tear in some of the chapters from Fighting Temptations. I swear to God you are an amazing writer and you have such a way with worths...gosh.. there are some teeny tiny minor spelling errors...but they really don't take away from the fact that this story is amazing and I really hate the fact that I have to wait another two weeks before I find out what happens next. It will really kill me when this story is over...it is truly amazing and not like those boring typical love stories where they automatically end up with each other.the trials and heartbreak in this is so real...I'm still recovering from it. You have a gift and you seriously need to consider developing your own characters and creating a book of your own. I've fallen in love with Scorpius...really I have...I've got tingles all over.I love your book so much...

Author's Response: First of all thank you so much for the sweet review, totally made my day. I do have original characters and ideas for books of my own it's just matter of time and arranging them out into a story.
A lot of people like Scorpius more than Rose and that's because Rose is conflicted which to me is what makes her seem human unlike those stories where they fall in love instantly and everything ends happy and nice and pretty. Scorpius on the other hand isn't as confused he knows what he wants and he in a way allows her to keep hurting him because at least if she is hurting him then he is near her.
Anyways the good news is that I update every two weeks and this chapter will be hitting two weeks this weekened which means I should have an update. The bad news is that I am running slightly behind on the next chapter but it should be up sometime next week. Thank you so much for the review and I am so happy that you enjoy my stories.

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i love it..plz update soon..

Author's Response: I'm running a little late on the next chapter but I should have it finished no later than tomorrow and it should be up sometime next week. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing

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hey i love the story..n can't wait for the next chapter..plz plz plz plz update it soon...or else i would die from curiousity... plz..love from india..

Author's Response: Yeah I'm running a little late with my update this.chapter my goal was to have it up by this weekend but that is clearly not going to happen so it should be up sometime next week. That I can guarantee. Thank you so much for the review.

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Love it!!! Can't wait for Scorps part!!!

Author's Response: His part is a little ways away unfortunately. Anyways thank you so much for the review.

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Update more. Love the story.

Author's Response: I'm trying to get the next chapter finished asap my goal was to update this weekend but I think it's looking more like the middle of next week when it will be up for show. The past two weeks have been unbelievably ridiculous and i'm like seriously. Anyways it will be up not later than next week I promise, even if I have to lock myself in my room and play sick to get it finished.

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As usual, perfection. I WANT MORE!!! You have me addicted.

Author's Response: I will update soon, been crazy busy and I think it wont be up for viewing until sometime next week, but absolutely no later than that. I absolutely refuse to fall back into the habit of not updating often. Thank you so much for the review.

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i dont even know what to say anymore
this is ridiculous
rex is cool
argh!

Author's Response: Ha Ha Ha Ha, thank you so much for the review it made me laugh... in a good way. I'll be back with an update soon.

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This chapter was so dramatic; I loved every bit of it.
I am die-hard Rose/ Scorpius shipper, but for some reason I almost wanted Rose to give Rex a chance. I usually never stray from the main ship, but he seemed so sweet and genuine. So did he ever come back? Or was this chapter his coming back?
Anyways, Rose has a lot of sorting out to do with Scorpius, Rex, Carla, Matt, and Albus (Almost everyone actually). I am excited to see how things develop, and am especially excited for Scorpius's background. Although for some reason, I feel like his would be more heart-breaking. Only time will tell... Another great chapter; I always get excited when a new update is posted!

Author's Response: Yeah I didn't expect people to like Rex as much as they have. The chapter was his coming back. I think he genuinely cares about Rose and he stayed away so long giving her time to try and move on because he wants to be with her, the only thing is that he might have stayed away a little too long. Yes Rose has a lot of thinking to do. As for Scorpius I will say that there are multiple views on what happened. So glad that you enjoyed it a new update should be up sometime next weekend. Thanks for the review.

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I don't normally do reviews but I have loads of free time and decided to do one for once. I remember finishing Fighting Temptation in around one or two days. It had spelling errors which are like one of the things that nag me (like people leaving the door open and stuff) but it was a good plot. My sisters read it too (they loved Scorpius and hated Rose for having to walk away). ANYWAYS I have been following this story since you first published it and so far, so good. I just really want them to get together again, Ron to go psycho and then everything to turn out beautiful but I guess that I'm going to have to wait if it's happening. Again, spelling errors were found here and I got a bit confused with the flashbacks. But don't worry, I will still read everything since I can never leave fanfics unfinished and I am curious as to how this goes. Update soon please x

Author's Response: Well thank you for doing a review, yeah spelling isn't my strong suit although now I do catch onto them more often and I try to fix them. However I will admit that this chapter didn't get edited because I was so busy and I had to post it to meet my every two week deal. I am in the process of editing it now and I am going to re-post it.
Tell your sisters that I am well aware of the I Hate Rose fan club. They will get together again soon I have an idea about where but i'm not 100 % set in it yet so i'm not going to tell. The flashback I tried my best to make clear through the scene which is when she is in the bed with Rex that is present everything in between is a flashback, I get tired of always saying he though, she remembered, he pulled away from his memory, so I was trying something new. Anyways thank you so much for the review and I am happy that you will continue to read. I will update sometime next weekend.

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Wow.
This is my favorite chapter yet, it is absoloutly perfect. I loved the way thatyou managed to switch between the past and present as many authors struggle with thatbut you done it smoothly and easily. Also, I really like Rex, I think he's a great guy and he's exactly what Rose needed at the time, I can't wait until Rex finds out that Scorpius is back, I wonder if he'll hate Scorpius because he's the reason that Rose can't be with Rex.

Also, I love how Carla was so laid back with things, most brothers and sisters are very protective of one another and I did see elements of this but I like how she knows thathe's a grown up.

I honestly can't wait for the next chapter, I'm going to check out your new story now, I'll write you a quick review as well :) thanks for such a lovely chapter, it really helped to exapain lots.

Sora x

Author's Response: Hello again, I'm not going to lie I didn't expect this chapter to do as well as it did, I think it filled in a lot of missing holes but at the same time I was worried because I was dragging the story away from the main pairing. I also didn't expect people to like Rex so much. I will say he isn't going to be thrilled when he finds out about Scorpius.
As for Carla like I said she is used to Rex and his deal with girls he has been dating her friends all the way back to like middle school so she has had a good decade to get used to it. But she does not want to see Rex or Rose get hurt and that was why she mentioned the whole him becoming serious to Rose. So that Rose could either end it with Rex before it got too serious or so that Rose could maybe decide to be with him, I think the romantic in Carla wanted Rose to actually commit to a relationship but Carla doesn't judge her.
The next chapter is just going to make things way more complicated and I can't wait. Thank you for reading and reviewing as always and thank you for checking out my new story I hope that you enjoy it.

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Oh my god... I started reading Confronting Temptation last night but i didn't like it very much at first, so I thougth i should try reading Fighting Temptation first. I started (and finished all 33 chapters) today, i simply couldn't stop myself... when i was done, i started Confronting Temptation again and just finished it a couple of minutes ago.

First: your take on the whole weasly-potter clan is slightly different (which is good - i was getting kind of sick with the whole we-love-each-other-always attitude they seem to have in so many stories). I get why it was important for the story for ron to be so "cruel" to rose, i would think he normally gets mad really quickly but also calms down fast...
I love how you let rose and scorpius grow up during their years at hogwarts, you really wrote a great first story.

Thw sequel is so much more. There is so much emotion and so muc detail packed into every chapter, you have me laughing, cryin and getting angry in almost every chapter before i'm even halfway through... the worst part is waiting for the new chapter to load on the computer...
I hope you update soon, i can barely wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Well thank you I am so happy that you decided to go and read Fighting Temptation instead of just quit reading and move on. I'm glad that you like it.
For me the whole-we-love-each-other-always, as sweet as, to me it is seems a bit out of character. Although I will say though the family itself has their flaws I wanted to make clear that to them family comes first no ifs, ands, or buts about it.
As for Ron (and this is my personal opinion,) I don't think he was being cruel to me I think I was think he was only trying to be protective and sometimes when parents are protecting their kids they don't see what their kids see. I mean in general ( and I only mentioned it once in Fighting Temptation, so I see why not to many picked up on it) but Ron never really liked anyone that Rose dated he didn't even like Ben that much and he was perfect. So for him to find out that she was not only dating someone and for it to be a Malfoy, I think really set him off, for many reasons.
As for them growing up I personally feel that if you hate someone that much, almost with a passion, then you are not going to fall in love with them instantly it is going to take a while.
As for the sequel it's nice to know that it still holds peoples attention. I take what you said about laughing, crying, and getting angry as a compliment, I always like to read stories that make me feel something so thank you.
Anyways thank you so much for the review. Right now I am currently working on Chapter 2 for Twelve, but immideatly after that is finished I am going into Ch 11 for Confronting. With Confronting I try to update every two weeks so the next update should be not this weekend but sometime over the next weekend. Once again thank you so much for reading and reviewing I am so glad that you are enjoying my story.

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How dramatic! My only critique is that I found it difficult differentiating between Rose's flashbacks and her present thoughts.

Author's Response: Yeah I tried to make that clear as possible. basically the part after the party was all a memory, the parts where she is in the bed with Rex is the reality and current, any thoughts that she had on the beach, with Carla, and when saying good bye to Rex those were all past thoughts. I hope that helps. Thank you so much for the review and yes more juicy drama to come in the next chapter.

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Hello again! It seems I missed last chapter somehow so this will cover both. The party was excellent last chapter, and that cliffhanger! The background story behind Rose & Rex's relationship was phenomenal and helped put some more pieces into the puzzle. I'm excited for the next chapter and to learn about Scorpius' failed engagement and why that didn't go through. I think that this has great potential and will definitely live up and exceed Fighting Temptation. Just a few grammar/spelling errors here and there, but I know you'll go back and catch those when you edit these chapters again. Great job, waiting for the next update! :) xx

Author's Response: You got lucky you didn't have to wait fro the cliffhanger like other people. lol. As for the background story I really wanted to show that Rose has let Scorpius, even though he wasn't there, take control of certain aspects of her life and that she knows they are meant to be together even though she does nothing about it. As for Scorpius sorry not a whole lot of information is going to be revealed in the next chapter. His engagement is something that Rose has known about for a while and she has accepted it and dealt with it. Also I will say that i'm not saying that the engagement didn't go through, remember Rose only knows what Scorpius tells her and he hasn't told her anything, the fact that he didn't get married is what she has concluded but she doesn't know. And if i'm really being honest I don't know I have several different scenarios played out it depends on how the story feels when I decide to give Scorpius' backstory that will determine which one I use. Not that I don't have the story planned out, because I do, it's just that sometimes I change my min on certain things or add things in. I hope that this story does better than Fighting Temptation, my goal is to always improve. As for editing yes no editing was done to this chapter. No joke it was like 1 in the morning when I posted it, and I was grumpy and my friend was over and I simultaneously talking her through her drama and I couldn't get it to copy and paste onto the site correctly and then I found out that my new computer which I got three months ago had uninstalled word randomly so finally when I got the chapter on the site I was like forget it i'll edit later. It was a very long night.
Anyways thank you so much for the review and I'll have the next chapter soon.

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Ooh! Very intriguing update!

Author's Response: Yeah the next chapter will have much more Scorpius/Rose stuff going on. Thank you so much for the review.

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Oh, great! Loved it! Interesting with fiancé! Keep writing! You're doing it well!

Author's Response: Yeah there is a lot more to the story that Rose doesn't know but still he kept it from her. Thanks will do. The next chapter is coming along. Thank you for the review.

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"She will argue to the day she dies that she isnt running, but deep down inside she is"

- roses actions contradicting her emotions eh? Something I touched on in my essay! Was just congratulating myself really , lol :(


Good chapter and much better without that snivelling, b@%#h-boy, aka matt:

"Dear diary,

I told rose everything about me and today I found that she didn't do the same. I mean that's not fair if I tell her everything then she has to tell me everything, because that's what best friends should do

Matt "

"Dear matt

Get a grip! you're a 20-year-old-something man. Not a 13year old pubescent girl. Maybe, MAYBE, if she was your wife I would understand why you feel betrayal, but she isn't this is 2030 mate... Man the hell up and let the girl make her own decisions and stuff! Next time you write in me, make sure it's about real stuff, and not this drivel, I have no further desires to waste perfectly good ink.

Sincerely
Diary"

!lol only joking :)
he's not too bad, I will stop bashing him soon I promise! :)

Loved the conversation flow between rose and scorp too; it was beautifully written!

~Kim

Author's Response: Yeah the entire time I was responding to your essay I kept think just read on. So yes Congratulations.
As for Matt. Wow, Ouch. In a few Chapters you are really really going to like Carla I think. But in my opinion he has a right to feel betrayed simply because Rose ke[t her past a secret on purpose and you really need to understand that she knows 100% everything about him and she pretty much lied to him, if they were having a conversation and he said something she would respond with something like "Well there is not much to tell," when in fact there was. Also, and you will see a little bit of this later on, as partners they know each others every mood he looks one way so does she, She thinks one thing he can generally guess what she is planning. they are very in sync, which is required for their job. The reason they are so in sync is because they know each other so well and Matt knows the Rose that he has worked with in New York for 3 years down to a T. In fact he is one of the only people that Rose has let get to know her, even though she is so guarded, of course Mat can't appreciate that because he doesn't know that Rose push's people out.
I will admit that he is stubborn and acting like a slight child but he does have a past with his own family and to him Rose and Carla are his family and to find out that Rose had been hiding stuff from him, even though it was because she was running and hated to think about, is like a knife to the back. If she had been the one to tell him then it he would have been better it was the way he found out.
Also for plot purposes I had to put Matt aside for a while so I let him brood. In a few chapters he will come around and he does explain things a little bit.
So Thank you for the review I hope that this helps give you some insight or at least explains him a little bit better.

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Just a quickie:

I hope matt isn't like this all the time..it's such a feminine per-madonna reaction to have, like really to walk out just she's not telling her about her school days?! It's like he's desperate to know every little freakin detail..he dangerously close to bordering obsession/infatuation/ love and I really hope that isn't where matt and roses' relationship is going .
Please make matt man-up a bit, he is literally the SPITTING image of al ( acting like the wounded party!? Pffft!!)
At the very least he should be more "angry" at Scorp than rose?
I personally would like him so much more if there was a little bit more of "Hugo " and "Bryan" in him.please. Lol

~ Kim

Author's Response: It's a trust thing with Matt, he does love Rose in a friend way and nothing more. The part about every freaking detail, he knows absolutely freakin nothing, there is a sever in imbalance of knowledge between their relationship and Rose kept that from him and that does hurt him because she knows everything about him and I do mean EVERYTHING.
Matt overreacts to some things and he does see Rose as family and he redeems himself and he would do anything to protect her. Just keep reading he does get a slight chance to show his side.
Anyways thank you for all of the reviews now to respond to the next one.

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Another great chap!!
I always thought those two would/should be together( bracy, lol).I was surprised they didn't at the end of FT .

What's Scorp hiding I wonder?! Hmmm why did he run away? Clearly it was another woman ( an estranged wife perhaps?!) but bracy said it was a bit OTT for him to leave so maybe it wasn't anything too bad... Whatever it was I don't think Scorp was the victim in the situation I think he's "running" from something that was essentially "his fault"...

Ive been reading alot of what people have been saying about disliking rose, I must admit she is quite a unique mystery...why is she so guarded? Why does she react like that when she's upset? Why does she choose to hide her past with Scorp? ( these are just the questions I asked myself when reading)

I mean she makes everything a mini- drama doesn't she and its so unnecessary.. I was screaming at my screen " just take the sweets you fussy £&@. Say thanks and stop making every little such an issue? I know it sounds silly ( to be annoyed about her not eating) but she was grateful and recognised that he had gone out of her way get them but didn't show that appreciation by eating them. I suppose it's the same with Scorp; she loves him but doesn't show him that she loves him... Which is so contradicting she seems like she is forever at war with herself ( like a teenager) which I think I was makes her somewhat disliked; she is to "back-and-forth" as a character, always a bit "shaky" ( no matter how physically strong she is) shes a bit fair-weathered like she doesnt really fit anywhere and doesn't really have a place or "belong" anywhere. I do hope her character develops so much more throughout this story, because she seemed more mature in FT than she does in this (so far anyway)

Oh yeh and her temper, doesn't really endear me to the "weasley temperament" she just comes across as rude. I'm not complaining or disagreeing with you or how you've portrayed her, it's just how I respond to rose the character but your writing of her is brilliant ( as always is, no matter how the characters are perceived! :) ).

Oh and one more thing it seems like its "all about rose" everyone talks about how well they know her and love her, it's like everyone is in her corner fighting for her so because of this she gets "lazy" and doesn't really do it herself ... I mean she doesn't seem to have much of a backbone or seem be comfortable in her own skin unless someone tells she is? ( not deep down anyway)

Funny thing is, I don't particularly "dislike" her, I just enjoy analysing her for some reason. It's a bit like voldemort ( not that she is like him at all ) but I mean I didn't "dislike" voldemort either and I think it's cos, from a technical point of view, voldy was integral to the story and only through his "bad" could Harry's "good" really be seen in all its glory. And similarly it's only through Rose's faults ( or the irritating parts of her character) that you can see her potential for "success" ( we only get irritated because, really, we want her to succeed; we want to see a strong, satisfied, self-assure confident leading character, not a whining thug who appears to be suffering from some constant inner-turmoil)... Another way I like to look at it is that Scorp and rose are one. So when there are scenes with just her its like seeing half of a person, so we ( the readers) are constantly going to keep finding "faults" or things we "dislike" about her because she is only the "real Rose Weasley " when she is when is with him...that's my more romantic take on it lol :)

I really wanna write a longer review ( longer than this mammoth essay anyway) as there is SO much more I wanna say but with my word allowance getting low and a sprained wrist its proving difficult! :( but as soon as its healed I will review some more so you might get another long-winded essay,several chapters on, about the previous chapters...

Overall an excellent job though! im really enjoying it so far! I totally agree with a review a read a while back ...you should seriously start thinking about doing this professionally ya know! :)

On to the next!!

~ Kim

Author's Response: It's funny that you mention the candy. The only reason I put that in there was because Rose does have a habit of not eating when she is stressed which was seen in FT. Also I her mind really wasn't there with her that night, I was trying to show that.
I agree with what you say about Rose, for the most part, the part about her being more mature in FT not so really but then again I am inside her head and I know what she knows and how she thinks so I suppose that gives me a slight advantage to her personality.
Rose is conflicted character and that is why I love her so much because she isn't perfect and she is hurt and worn and she isn't comfortable in her own life, although I will say she is more comfortable in New York than any where else and that is why she stays.
As for her personality Scorpius makes her Shaky. Him beiong in her life puts her on edge and in a way does Rock her world and that is why she is so back and forth and confused in general. When he is not around, I mean in her life, she is much more stable, she does love him and having him around kills her in a way because she has to confront a lot of things that she has been running from.
As a character I think she is fun to analyze as well because she is so conflicted and to me real. She isn't perfect and she does analyze everything, she has always done that she takes her time to think through problems and then decides what to do based on her thoughts. I enjoy reading your analysis even if I don't fully agree with it because it does give me insight into what other people think and its interesting. So I do look forward to more of your analysis even if they are mammoth essays.
There are some aspects that you brought up that aren't wrong but that I have never really thought of before such as Scorpius and Rose being one and in a way you are right because they balance each other out. I personally think that Rose is strong and she does run from her problems but I don't think she lets other people fight them I think she just avoids them until they aren't a problem and that will become an issue for her. As for her being rude when I right her I get the sense of frustration from her a lot. She is frustrated when things don't go as planned at least that was what I was feeling when I wrote these early chapters, things have changed since then and she is currently unraveling so things are becoming less frustrating for you, but ill let you get there before I go on about that.
Chapter 10 which is awaiting Validation will give some insight into Scorpius' past. I can't give much insight into it thou w/o giving a lot away but I will say you are on the right track.
As for Bryan/Stacy (Bracy) lol. They were never planned to be together I kept getting reviews about them and then I began to think and I saw the light it was the only time I have ever let reviews influence my plotline but seriously the more I thought about it totally makes sense that they would be together because they are good together. Anyways the reason why they weren't together at the end of FT was because I kind of wanted it to be surprise for Confronting Temptation.
Anyway Thank you for the review I look forward to more thoughts from you. Hope you enjoy the rest.

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Love this story! Keep the updates coming!

Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying it just posted the next chapter for validation so it should be up hopefully this weekend. Thank you for the review.

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Oh, I hope she didn't really kiss him back even though Scorpius thought so and that she slaps Rex. Next chapter soon please!

Author's Response: Im evil. He he. The next chapter will explain a lot and I have just posted it for validation so it should be up hopefully this weekend. Thank you for the review.

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