Reading Reviews for The Invisible Thief
202 Reviews Found

Review #26, by Evelynn Rose Dress Shopping, ice cream, and TPG

16th March 2014:
OMG! Hilarious! I love that girl in the ice cream parlor. So funny. And the other kid practically drooling over Dom! I love Al and Brielle together get them together soon!!

Author's Response: So happy you liked the chapter! :) xx

 Report Review

Review #27, by silver_coloured_moon Dress Shopping, ice cream, and TPG

16th March 2014:
Yeah! I've been waiting for this for ages, I'm so happy its here! I loved Dom in this chapter, she reminds me of how some of my friends are when we go shopping (I painfully relate to Bri on the whole fashion thing- they shouldn't let me outside). Hmm, I wonder if Al was to see Bri and TPG, would he get jealous? I would love to see some of that, because Bri would just be completely confused. Anyway, great chapter, it really made me laugh! Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: I'm so happy you were glad and liked the chapter! There will be more of TPG to come! I'm glad I made you laugh - a new chappie will be up soon xx

 Report Review

Review #28, by Mollaaay It's Actually Christmas

10th March 2014:
Woah I was so excited for the update because there was a long period there where you didn't post anything, I legit freaked. So glad you've updated and I'm looking forward to more of Brielle! I actually find my self laughing out loud at this story, which never happens.. I love Brielle's relationship with Louis it's the cutest thing and I like that dom and bri are getting much closer, the 'best friends' charm was a really sweet idea. Leslie is my life, need some more of her in the next chapters! And I'm excited for their return to hogwarts :) Keep writing and update soon!!

Author's Response: This review made me smile! So glad to hear all this stuff and a new chappie is currently waiting to be validated as we speak!

 Report Review

Review #29, by Lobellia Sackville-Baggins It's Actually Christmas

9th March 2014:
Darling! Where are you?! Are you ill?! Are you all right?! Please, tell me!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry I've been gone! I'm all good, I just have been dealing with a lot of school work and very little free time! I LITERALLY just posted a new chappie though :) It should take 2-3 days for it to be validated :D xx

 Report Review

Review #30, by AlexFan It's Kind of Christmas

21st February 2014:
I'm finally catching up on this story! Phew! You update really quickly which is great and everything but anyway, moving on to the actual review.

The only thing that I want to point out about this chapter that just kept eating away at me and nagging me and just occupying my mind was the evaporating thing. I'm fairly certain that you meant apparate not evaporate but it might've been something like autocorrect depending on what you wrote the chapter on. But anyway, that's only thing that really really bothered me about the chapter.

This chapter wasn't as action packed as the previous ones but it was still pretty entertaining. I got to the part where Louis and Brielle were talking about Amelia and stuff and Albus showed up and Brielle was all "Jealous much?" And he was all "no, you're obviously mine," for a second there I was like "Woah there friend, you need to slow down." I truly believed that Albus was actually convinced that Albus thought he and Brielle were dating and that she was actually his and that put me off a little bit.

On the other hand, I kind of feel bad for Brielle though because she just friend zoned Albus without meaning to and she really wants to be with him. But hey at least Albus didn't act like Brielle owed him for the fact that he was her friend and really nice to her so brownie points for you Albus. But it was good that the two of them had a talk and sorted this entire relationship business out and stuff.

I still ship Albus and Brielle though!

Author's Response: Someone else pointed out that whole evaporating thing! Sorry about that, I didn't know which one to use! I think my macbook may have autocorrected it and I just didn't correct it but it's my mistake! I'll try to correct it next time I use it!

Albus was just joking, don't worry about it! He's not that confident :) haha. Brielle and Albus are just a lil bit of a mess but I'm glad you think that.

I still ship them too! It'll happen eventually :) xx

 Report Review

Review #31, by free elf 25 It's Actually Christmas

19th February 2014:
Did you just say that in two chapters Bribus will happen? It will be official? Update. Update as fast as humanly possible.

Author's Response: Did I say that? I wouldn't get your hopes up too high - there will just be A LOT of Bribus drama coming up so be prepared but they will happen soon, just not that soon. You've got to have a fall before you find your peace or something poetic like that haha xx

 Report Review

Review #32, by pinkpanther16 It's Actually Christmas

16th February 2014:
Oh my god this chapter is so perfect! Brielle's gifts were great XD I'm kind of mad that Bri and Al aren't together, but they will be. One day. I hope. I'm also super excited for the New Year's Party in the next chapter! Can't wait :D

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter! Bri and Al are all over the place but yes...eventually. I wouldn't be /too/ excited but so am I! A lot of drama will happen for sure!

 Report Review

Review #33, by newgenerationlover It's Actually Christmas

11th February 2014:
Love it! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! Today I will!

 Report Review

Review #34, by inferioridiot Trouble equals Malfoy

10th February 2014:
I like how there's a twist between the romantical aspects of Brielle's life. Ha. But Albus pls pls pls

Author's Response: Thank you! & soon!

 Report Review

Review #35, by StellaRose It's Actually Christmas

9th February 2014:
I did love that she gave the shoes back AND that she was such an emotional sap towards the end of the chapter. I've really liked all your Christmas chapters! Bri and Albus just need to get together already! I'm glad Bri was able to talk about everything with Dom. Hopefully Al gets the hint soon. Feel like there's still a lot to look forward to and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep Writing :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The shoes part I have been thinking about for a while. Hopefully Al does too - he's a mess. There is a lot to look forward to and we are not at the end yet so don't fret! I will, thank you!

 Report Review

Review #36, by silver_coloured_moon It's Actually Christmas

9th February 2014:
Pleeeasssee update, I need to know how this ends! I love Fred, and James and Louis and Bri and- everyone, really. I've even warmed up to Rose! I thought the gifts were rather cute; especially handing back the stolen shoes, and Al's gift to Bri. those two need to be locked in a cupboard or something until they sort themselves out. Or at least have a dance at the New Year's party where they can look cute and talk. That would also be great! Anyway, I liked the chapter even if you didn't, so please update!

Author's Response: I'm updating today, hopefully! Aw, I'm glad to hear that! YES! We shall lock them up very soon. That would be just adorable. Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kindness

 Report Review

Review #37, by silver_coloured_moon Cheating and Beating

9th February 2014:
Mm, I don't know how I feel about Rose; but I liked that there was more of her in this chapter, so I could see a different side of the story. I really liked this chapter, as I did all the other chapters I have read- Bri is just so easy to relate to and I love her!

Author's Response: Rose is always on the edge for me as well, she doesn't fit in exactly. Thank you!

 Report Review

Review #38, by inferioridiot Angry (not) Quidditch Blokes

9th February 2014:
It's so difficult to read and scroll down every minute, to be honest. A little too much paragraphs, don't you think? :) Great story though.

Author's Response: I'm sorry, I can't fix that. It's how HPFF posts my story. The only way I can post it, I'm sorry! I need double return feed for easy read. Thank you though!

 Report Review

Review #39, by Lobellia Sackville-Baggins It's Actually Christmas

9th February 2014:
Oh, darling, I am SO sorry I missed reviewing the last chapter -- I have this GIANT math paper due in a week (twenty pages or more on the relation of fractals to chaos theory!) but I simply MUST review!
And poor baby...oh, the poor child cried herself to sleep...poor baby. My heart goes out to poor, idiotic Brielle Patil.
Who is now sitting on me.
I cannot believe how easily Al agreed to be just friends! Why is he okay with this?! What is going on here?! No sadness? No nothing?! Did he not cry himself to sleep in Scorpius's arms just as Bri cried herself to sleep in Dom's?! WHAT IS GOING ON HERE?! ALBUS SEVERUS POTTER! (I'm channeling my inner Ginny -- although it has been said that I'm more like Luna. I agree with that statement wholeheartedly.)
SLYTHERIN QUIDDITCH TEAM SUCKS JAMES POTTER?! What does that mean! Did he forget the comma and it was supposed to be like a signature? Like, "Slytherin quidditch team sucks, love, James Potter"? Or that.EW MERLIN GET IT OUT GET IT OUT IT'S IN MY HEAD GET IT OUT!
I was slightly worried about Bri's presents, to be honest, but I am so glad that it worked out all right -- the surprisingly personal touch on all of them nearly choked me up. Bri never ceases to surprise me. Her gifts to Mel and Les were HILARIOUS, by the way.
But AL IS ALSO SURPRISING ME IN A BAD WAY! I mean, I'm glad that he isn't a whiny child (thank heavens), but I expected him to be a LITTLE upset, given that he seems to have QUITE the emotional connection to our half-Indian heroine! Unless he has a plan...I don't know. I DON'T KNOW. I am FAR too emotionally connected to this story than is good for me or anyone else.
I was surprised with Fred as well -- I cannot imagine how much time and effort it must have taken for him to narrate the WHOLE BLOODY BOOK. I mean, it's a TEXTBOOK. AND HE READ THE WHOLE THING OUT LOUD. He's so sweet and thoughtful!
Now, time for me to go -- I'm having ramen for dinner! And none of that instant stuff -- I'm talking REAL ramen -- even more delicious and HEALTHY!
yum yum yum
I can't wait for the next update! Love you ALL, darling, and happy writing~!

Author's Response: I love seeing reviews from you Lo!
I'm in a bit of a rush so I can't respond to every little comment but I'll try my best.
First of all, laughing so hard about the part of Albus crying in Scorpius's arms. I just can picture it now and it's grand.
James's has an interesting (and dirty) mind of his own. He needs a good swift kick from Ginny so he learns his manners.
Fred surprises everyone in a good way :)
YAY for ramen!
I'll be updating today, hopefully!


 Report Review

Review #40, by Sakura9879 It's Actually Christmas

8th February 2014:
I completely forgot about the shoes!

That aside, this was a great chapter, but in addition to working out the Bribus thing, can there be a crazy adventure in the next chapter? The story is starting to lose its hilarious edge and I don't want that to happen.

The christmas gifts were awesome, and some favoritism was definitely shown.

The dead rose thing was priceless! Keep it up!

Best of luck with the writing-
Rachel Payne

Author's Response: I think a lot of people did!

There will be a sort of version of working out (or destroying) Bribus AND a hilarious adventure hopefully. I'm sorry to hear that and I'll work on it, I promise!

For sure, favoritism was shown!

Thank you!

 Report Review

Review #41, by silver_coloured_moon Ruining the Mood

7th February 2014:
Gods this chapter is so sweet, I love it! I should review every chapter, but then I sort of can't wait to keep reading and forget. Sorry for being such a terrible person, but I blame you for having such an entertaining story okay! Albus is really cute and I love how Bri is just going with it, although it is probably very difficult to refuse the likes of Al Potter. Imma go ahead and read even more, I wish I'd found this story sooner, but hey ho I'm here now! Can't wait to see how it all goes!

Author's Response: Thank you! You should! I love seeing reviews it makes me smile. Aw, thank youu! I'm so glad you've found us now!

 Report Review

Review #42, by Evelynn Rose It's Actually Christmas

7th February 2014:
I love it! Brielle and Al may not be together, but this was the perfect chapter! I loved it! Bri's gifts were so funny. I forgot about the shoes.

Author's Response: THANK YOU! xx

 Report Review

Review #43, by silver_coloured_moon The Bodyguard

6th February 2014:
This is such a great story, and I love the girls and their sassiness! You tell her! Bri is so cute with her 'uh, bye?' its something you can imagine someone saying, which is great because its not all 'sass attack!' and her immediately shutting Dom down. Can't wait to read on!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much!
I hope you like the rest of the story!

 Report Review

Review #44, by Spyci It's Kind of Christmas

4th February 2014:
Thank you for updating so often, kind absolutely love it. Now please shower me with a massive long chapter next? I'll accept it as an early valentine's gift.

Author's Response: Aw, your welcome! I'm glad it makes you happy. I just updated and it's just under 3,000 but I promise the next one is going to be a biggie! xx

 Report Review

Review #45, by Dirigible_Plums It's Kind of Christmas

4th February 2014:
So an interesting chapter but I feel the strong urge to correct "evaporating" into "apparating".

Author's Response: Thank you! Ah - I never knew which one to write! I'll try to use the correct term "apparating" when I write it next! Thank you Thank you! xx

 Report Review

Review #46, by harrystiles It's Kind of Christmas

4th February 2014:
Do we find out what happened with Dom and Victoire soon??!

And great work btw, I love the pace this story is moving at :)

Author's Response: Within the next five chapters!

Thank you so much! xx

 Report Review

Review #47, by Evelynn Rose It's Kind of Christmas

4th February 2014:
What on earth happened to Albus and Brielle?! They were so close to getting together! How could you do this to me! Maybe if Brielle reveals everything to Dom, she can knock some sense into Al.

Author's Response: I'm sorry darling! Albus and Brielle are a mess! Hopefully they can work it all out - Dom would be of great help I'm sure! xx

 Report Review

Review #48, by AlexFan Christmas Cheers

30th January 2014:
How long is it going to take for Albus and Brielle to get together. I've been shipping the two of them for so long and it's killing me that they're not being couple cute together and instead are just being friends cute together.

I hope that Albus doesn't assume that he and Brielle were dating, I mean he never actually asked her so he shodnt have jumped to the conclusion that the two of them were dating. I have a feeling lots of drama is going to ensue once Bri brings this to Albus' attention that's for sure.

Author's Response: They're is going to be a lot of drama coming up with Albus and Brielle and I don't want to spoil anything!

I'm so glad you've been shipping them because I will always ship them to the end, no matter what crazy things they do.

Albus is a man of his own so we'll have to see what he does! Hopefully he doesn't screw anything up too much. You're spot on about allt he up and coming drama though!

 Report Review

Review #49, by TotallyNotVernonDursleyInDisguise Christmas Cheers

30th January 2014:
more Bribus! Yay!
Ok does Scorpius still like Rose?? Um I'd say yes so then He says Rose go to hogsmeade with me and she's like YES And then they go and get married the end
No just kidding
Umm... I really like it!! And yeah!!
THE INVISIBLE THEIF it just sounds so hilariously violent but it's not hehehe
Ok please update soon ME WANT WOTTERS AND BRIBUS
Oh and Do you say bribus like bree-bus or like brii-bus? Yeah I wanna know
Kk bye

Author's Response: Bribus is always a good thing!
HAHA I love your little scenario. Scorpius and Rose are a very interesting duo so we'll have to see what happens between the two of them.
I'm glad you like it! :)
I was really proud when I came up with the titel a while ago haha x)
I'm updating tonight!
Um, I believe I call it like brii-bus!

 Report Review

Review #50, by newgenerationlover Christmas Cheers

25th January 2014:
love the story! can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login

<Previous Page   Jump:     Next Page>