It's cute :) I liked it alot, and thought it was kinda funny. You probably know this by now, as there wasn't a problem in the story I beta'd for you with it, but two is the number 2, and in the places you used it, it should have been too or to. :) But..
The plot was great and I think it was brilliant how you had Ron turn it around back onto Harry :)
~LilyAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for this nice review and really, really sorry for the delay... As you know, I took a distance from, well, everything in my life, including this place for a couple months. The reviews, therefore took a stepback...
I do know this by now (see, I learn from you!) and I will change it as soon as I, erm, take the time!
I'm glad you liked it; it's my first one-shot and I could make it a lot better now with my experience but, I prefer leaving it this way (I might change my mind at some point though). Thanks again for those kind words, you really made my day :) Report Review
This is so cute, dear! It's very well-written; I actually caught myself on the edge of my seat, leaning forward and eagerly scanning the page! It takes a GREAT story to make me do that! I didn't see any spelling or grammar errors, and this had an 'anecdotal' quality, if that makes any sense. By that I mean that it was an easy read and kept me interested throughout. It felt like I was really there, and I was grinning the entire time. Kudos for keeping the plan a secret until the end, and for coming up with such a brilliant plan! Harry, Ginny and Ron were perfectly in-character; I can really imagine something like this could have happened! This is SO going on my favorites list! Bravo! 10/10!
GryffindorAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your sweet review, I'm glad you liked it! This is actually the second story I posted here (meaning it was my second story in english, in my entire life) so I'm very happy to see that it isn't so bad!!
I'm really touched by your review and thank you once again :) Report Review
lol...so funny!!! potter's think Ron is still that stupid huh! Go Ron!!! hehheeh
you are a very good writer! like it!Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review!
This was one of my first story and although I think it needs to be worked on to make it better, I'm glad you like it anyway! Report Review
Oh, I loved it! That was very good, and the mention of S.P.E.W. was not what I expected, but it worked. One thing, though. Sometimes you refer to Ron as the godfather, and sometimes the uncle. I was a bit confused by that. Otherwise, it was great, I really enjoyed it!Author's Response: Thank you for such a kind review!
I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for what you point out, it's something I will have to investigate to fully understand it. See, I believed you could use "Uncle" for a "godfather" too and you make me realise I might be wrong about it. I'll check to see what should be done and correct it; thanks for making me realise this! Report Review
Very cute. I'm glad it wasn't an all-out, crazy, let's-blow-the-house-down prank that you'd find in a mediocre Marauders fic. I felt that the story played itself out. Good job.Author's Response: Thank you for this kind comment! I'm happy to find you liked it this way; just a simple, not even magical payback! I'm just like you and think that most marauder-like stories exagerate most of the time, making it very unlikely and kind of a joke actually. Report Review
I no longer remember how I originally contacted the person who created my banner and that was the only time that I've discussed hpff things outside of the website. My recommendation would be to visit me at siye.uk.co, where I have the same username and story. We may talk outside of the websites that way without actually violating any rules or giving away personal information to the public.
I thought that this really was funny, although again you could have taken it a few steps further. I'm really looking forward to what you have in mind for some of these stories.Author's Response: I'll find the answer than! thanks again for reviewing on this chapter!! Report Review
25 seconds that is not long. ;)
I loved how James got revenge on him :D
i found it really funny and the end!! Awesome :D
krapfmAuthor's Response: Agreed, 25 seconds isn't long but some people seem to think so anyway. I thank you for taking this time to review, know that I really appreciate to hear that you had a good time reading what I had a great time writing! Report Review
Ha ha ha! What a great start! I never would have thought of SPEW, especially to get back at Ron.
I'm looking forward to the next chaper. Great job!!!Author's Response: Thanks!
This story was written as a one-shot. I do have some ideas for a sequel or another chapter but I am not fully convinced of it's quality. If you have some idea you would like to share, I am open to hear it! Report Review
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