ah! you are dirving me nuts!!! I can not wait for more and I hope you have fun on your vacation!!!

Author's Response: ahhh, I'm sorry! haha, if it's any consolation Natalie is driving me nuts, even though she is the character I've created lol :p

aww thank you so much! the next chapter will be up very soon :)

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BAH! What is she doing?! It is so obvious that James likes her!!! They seriously need to talk!
Have a lovely holiday and looking forward to an update when you're back :)

Author's Response: Natalie's one of those who really doesn't see the truth till it hits her repeatedly over and over in the head lol. This will happen soon, promise!

Thank you, and hope you like the next chapter! Very drama packed if I do say so myself :P

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so u end the story like that until the middle of augst?... at least it isn't a cliff hanger :) Enjoy ur vacation

Author's Response: Haha, I'm sorry! Hopefully the next chapter will make up for it!

And thank you! :)

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I found this story earlier today and I have been reading it ever since! Great story with a interesting plot line that is different from many next generation stories.
Update Soon!
Jess

Author's Response: First, thank you for the lovely review! And second, yay! I wanted the plot to be different but I was also pretty nervous to write it so it always makes me happy to see that people like it :)

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Very interesting story so far. :) Looking forward to the coming chapters.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Actually, the next couple chapters are the ones I've been waiting for and am really excited about, so I really hope you like them :)

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I just found this story and I love it! :)

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I hope you like the next chapter--it'll be up very soon :)

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OOH IT'S JUST GETTING BETTER AND BETTER!! Thanks for updating ) And HAHA totally willing to fight for Luke ahhh.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it! LOL, I might have to join in the fight for Luke too. I've probably said this before but he is so much fun to write :)

Thank you for the review!

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I love this story! Please keep updating! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! There will be a new chapter very soon :)

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Love this story!!! James and Natalie are fast becoming one of my favourite couples!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like them! Gah. Thank you! :))

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I can not wait for more!! this is so awesome! I want them to be together! I am so glad that it takes 6 months to make! that makes it so they can work out there relationship!!!

Author's Response: Aww thank you! Its definitely going to be epic when (if???) they get together haha. Oh gosh, six long, difficult, tension filled months. It'll be fun for me to write :)

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Natalie's getting more confidence in herself and expressing her feelings. That is nice to see. The potion takes 6 months to make - that gives you a nice long time for their relationship to develop. Great update - thank you!

Author's Response: Natalie's definitely changing! I love writing her with more confidence because sometimes I just want to shake her and make her tell James the truth lol

Thank YOU for lovely review :)

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Another great chapter - thank you! I can't wait for Natalie and James' relationship to carry on developing! :)
Looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter should be up in a week! :)

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This was good. I look forward to the next chapter 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Thank you!

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I love Luke! Dying to see more of him, and please move this RELATIONSHIP forward! Great writing, by the way.

Author's Response: Luke will definitely show up again! And oh gosh, I know their relationship is moving at a glacial pace right now but I promise it will get better! Haha :P

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Oh, I love this story! Thank you so much for updating!
Luke might be my favourite charakter :) I really hope to read more about him. And I am totally Team Natalie and James. Although I feel really sorry for Albus. Maybe you can find some love for him too, so he's not left behind heartbroken?
Very much looking forward to the next chapter! Great work!

Author's Response: Aww I love Luke and I love that you guys like him too :) And haha yes, I definitely feel bad for Al too...hmm we'll see. I'll just say that he won't be too heartbroken by the end :)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!



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This story is so great! Just read the whole thing in one go! :)
please update soon! :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I hope you like the next chapter!

Sorry it took so long to update btw, but since its summer there should be more recent updates :)

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aw,
awww,
aww
aw.
aw.

The ending is so cute. Like so cute. I hope she remembers what she said when she wakes up.
I think that they are finally realising that there is actually something real between each other, and THAT makes me really happy.

Luke is awesome. Just thought id let you know.
Warning to others; if you don't want him, I'm taking him.
To you; can i have him?? pretty please??

Love it,
please update soon!
lots of love from,
imacullenpottergirl

Author's Response: I had no idea Luke would end up being so popular! LOL oh gosh, I can't promise you can have him haha. But he will be showing up again, definitely :)

thank you so much for the review! I'm so happy you're liking it!

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THANK YOU SO MUCH I LIKE. I LIKE IT A LOT.
Ugh can they just hurry up and confess and make out hello people waiting here! Where's Al haha surely he's not going to put up with this without jinxing James into the next century.
Hey can I have Luke? Please? I'll pay you!
x

Author's Response: bahahahah. This made me laugh so much :) But I know, can't they get a clue already?? And Al's been a bit absent of late, but he'll show up!

Omg, Luke is so popular. You'll have to fight for him with everyone else who wants him! Thanks for the review :)

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YAY! I was so glad when I saw you'd updated- I love this story so much, and the plot really is so unique! Aha, why can't James and Natalie just see...asdfghjkl! At least they are making some progress, which is good! I know you are probably very busy with other things, but please please please please update again soon! You have no idea how much I love to read this! I really have no criticism for your writing (I just wish James and Natalie would sort themselves out, but that would probably mean the end of the story, so I'm not complaining too much!), so just keep up what you're doing! Alex :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like the story! It makes me so happy to read reviews like this :)

And I know, I cannot wait for James and Natalie to sort themselves out too...all in good time, haha. I'm so sorry I took so long with the next chapter! The updates should be more regular now that its summer :)

Thank you, thank you, thank you for your lovely review!

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I liked it. Luke does seem like he would also be a good friend to Natalie as well as James. Renewing their friendship does seem like a good idea for both of them until their "contract issues" are resolved (or not). Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: I love Luke. We'll be seeing more of him--he's so much fun to write :)

And yes, being friends again will definitely help especially in the next chapter! Thank you for the review!

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James is so in love with her. 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Or is he? LOL. Ignore my attempts to try and be really sly. Thanks for the review!

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Aw, James is cute. I changed my mind, I'm 100% for James now. He's adorable :) I also really like Luke. You should write him more.

Also, I just want you to know that I absolutely love you for knowing AVPM and AVPS. It's not often that you FIND other Starkid fans :)

Author's Response: YESS. Haha, I mean I understood why some people for rooting for Albus but...I'm all about James LOL. I will definitely include more parts with Luke! He is so much fun to write :)

Aww, Starkid bonding :) And HAHAH, find. That seriously made me smile so much. btw, how awesome does Apocalyptour sound?? But I have no one to go with :(

anyway, thank you so much for the review!

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GAH!!! I can not wait for the next one I hope it is up soon!!!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry it's taking me so long to update :( But there will be an update within a week or two! Promise :)

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lovelovelove it! You did the characters perfect! I love a clueless character:) I love how you didn't make her so clueless she is ridiculously stupid...and I LOVE Luke and James

Author's Response: Thank you so much! LOL Natalie is so oblivious. Sometimes I just want to shake her and be like get with the picture and then I realize she's a fictional character haha :P

I'm glad you like Luke and James! They're pretty fun to write :)

Thank you again!

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I loved james pov. 9/10 : )

Author's Response: YAY, I'm glad! Thank you! :)

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