Really enjoying the story so far, it's always fun reading about a trouble maker, I'd just suggest that you proof read chapters as there were a couple of spelling/grammar mistakes, but apart from that, keep up the great story!Author's Response: Yup I'm in the process of proof reading the chapters! This was finished a while ago, I'm just fixing up now:) Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE WILL SPEND THE REST OF MY LIFE HOPING FOR A SEQUEL.Author's Response: Blaaah I just can't bring myself to write a sequel! There would be nothing to write about! Thanks for reviewing:) Report Review
This is absolutely amazing :) and I just have one quick question; do you possibly like One Direction? It's just a hunch..'Someones gotta give', Liam has brown hair and blue eyes, Louis...
If you don't this is extremely awkwardAuthor's Response: Nope I find them to be extremely annoying. When I wrote this I don't even think they were famous haha, it was about two years ago now, maybe more. So YAAY for awkwardness!
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I'm crying. I'm literally crying. That's how beautiful this story is. You have an amazing plot, amazing characters and I absolutely LOVE this story. Thank you so much for writing it.Author's Response: Aww thank you for reviewing! I'm glad that you liked it! Report Review
I am really totally honestly liking this story. Did you purposefully put a HSM3 reference in their?Author's Response: I don't remember, which part in particular? Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Zachery Goode? From 'The Gallagher Girls'? Or is this just a coincidence and I am really confusing you right now.
But it was really good :)Author's Response: It's supposed to be Gregory Goode! I don't know why I put Zachary, I'll have to go back and fix it. You're not the first to notice haha, sorry!! Thanks for revewing! Report Review
I loved this story.I read it b4 I got my account and I just had to tell you.Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad that you liked:) Report Review
OMG OMG OMG OMG
they get married :')
yayayayayayayayayay! loved the story (despite the grammar and spelling mistakes), and i loved drew especially!
p.s its spelt 'bite', not 'bight'Author's Response: p.p.s You were doing good until "spelt". That's not a word. I believe you're referring to "spelled"? Report Review
I love your book! I stayed home from school, on my birthday to read it and it has been my favorite present:) I knew it would end happily. I wish you would have let her say yes. It would ease my mind, but it's ok. I already know how her life ends in my mind. When an author has developed characters so well that I can actually understand their thought process then the story will stay with you, change you. Thats all i could ever ask for from a book. Thanks 4 writing the storyAuthor's Response: Happy Belated Birthday! And yes people, she says YES. Thanks so much for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it:) Report Review
FINALLY!!! no words to describe my happiness ;)) Author's Response: Awww thanks for reviewing! Report Review
SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!if i spell sequel one more time i might spell it wrong but SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!sequel.Author's Response: NONONONONO! But thanks for reviewing anyways:) Report Review
Beautiful story love :) it had its moments but u pulled through sucks though that u left It with that cliffy at the end like really u cud of made her say yes and do that heart felt wisdom she seemed to be doin at the end of the last few chapters but no cliffey. Psht that sucks big time! Luv ur story ur awesome I'm glad ur story was one of the Few that captured my gave :) it actually feels like I've read 7 more harry potter books well done! :)Author's Response: She says yes! I'm glad that you liked it and thank you for reviewing!! Report Review
The story was really good. Good job :DAuthor's Response: I'm glad that you liked it:) Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
this is my second time reading, and im not sure why i didnt comment on this chapter the first time, but i totally laughed out loud when i read about Female.
Content happiness. >.Author's Response: Wow you're reading again? I give you credit! Thanks for reviewing this time:) Report Review
At the beginning I was a little dubious about your writing, but by the end you got a whole lot better and it was awesome, really really awesome. I think your plot was good too...sequel?Author's Response: Yeah I sucked in the beginning of this, there's no other way to put it:) I'm glad you recognized me getting better! I was fourteen when I started this...ahhh good times good times. But no, there's not going to be a sequel. Sorry!! I'm glad you liked it and thank you very very much for reviewing! Report Review
My reaction to everything but the epilogue first: I am crying so much right now. Even though I only discovered this a few days ago, it has been routine to check and read this as much as I possibly can, even if it means my parents getting mad because of my room not being clean, or me staying up so late, etc. The part about leaving Hogwarts, and her being satisfied, and when she explained why... it made me satisfied with everything I have lost recently. Not that I won't miss it, but it is the end of that chapter of life. I will never forget the chapter, but it will never be re-read either. Now about the whole thing: For one, the proposal was so realistic and sweet. Between the roller coaster of emotions, and the being in and out of trouble, the sarcasm and snarkiness, the narcissism and even the heartfelt moments that made me tear up. This is now a part of my life, it always will be. I don't think I will read it again. I love it, but I think this is where I need to leave it. But I will never forget this. This is a part of me that will never change, and never leave. I thank you for everything. Soccer tryouts are tomorrow, and even though I have played for years I am nervous. When I was reading this was the only time I could forget, and let the butterflies 'fly away'. Thank you. I can't put into words my gratitude, and how much this means to me. This is always.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I never would have thought this story would touch someone in such a way, and I'm very happy and greatful that you shared it with me:) Also, THANK YOU SO MUCH for not begging me for a sequel. I'm glad you loved this, and I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it. Believe it or not, Kiersten's a lot like me. Not entirely, but certain aspects of her are my thoughts. So letting go was hard but necessary. Thank you for reviewing! Good luck with Soccer! Report Review
I will leave my reaction to the whole thing after the epilogue. I think it would be weird to spill my guts, then be like 'oh yeah, cool. byee.' ya know? (:Author's Response: Haha, thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Aww! This made me cry. Just thinking about the end of 7th year... it's not fair. in Muggle school we get 14 years with our friends, but not at home. It's so sad, but so inspiring too. Great job on this chapter!Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!!! Report Review
Aw! The ending is so sweet! Author's Response: Glad you like! Report Review
Aww!!! How sweeet! I will finish this story tomorrow, I have to go to bed, Lmao. (:Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I already like Cay a lot, lol. I can't wait to see what the letter is...Author's Response: For some reason a lot of people like Cay haha. Not sure why exactly, but that's good I guess! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I loved this chapter. I want to cry when they talk about the end. ): It seems so real. I guess because the wizarding world is real to me.and any other true Potterhead, really. )':Author's Response: It's all real to us:D Here's to the people who cried when the Hogwarts letter never came! Report Review
WOOO! Gryffindor won the Quidditch Cup! Yeah!:D Anyway, great chapter, I loved it! :DAuthor's Response: One of my favorite chapters ever to write! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Aww, this was kind of sad. It really suited this part of the story though, I think it was needed. (:Author's Response: Yeah it'll all get better, thanks for reviewing!! Report Review
Um, woah. Thats honestly all I have to say. I mean I enjoyed it, but as far as what actually happened...just woah.Author's Response: Dramadramadramallama Report Review
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