o my gosh! I just wanted to say that your story got me hookd on Lily/Scorpius:D Its amazing. great work and I'm going to go to the next chapter, ok? lol lates!

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Lol, I'm glad you wrote more, I really do love this story. Oh, and I love the fact you mentioned Ender's Game, it is my favorite book and book series ever (besides Harry Potter of course)

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Oh I love this! I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job!

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Aww...he is such a hopeless romantic in his own rugged annoying snobby way...aww. oh and lols i have a 'friend' called Caroline and i dont like her much

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love this story plz write more

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This was sooo cute. I really liked it

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really glad you decided to continue with this story its one of my favorites been looking out for it it can,t always be easy to think what to write but i am glad you do

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you use Merlin a bit much

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very nice. I like Scorpius. He's a very relateable character.

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It's just keeps gettin' better. I love it. (:

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I like it so far. I expected Albus to be a bit more shy though and Rose not to be a bitch. I mean, it's Hermione's daughter, yknow? Other than that I love it.

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Your story is so amazing, I absolutely love it. c:
It makes me happy so happy, and I think Scorpius is really cute. :D
The characters are adorable, and very unique. You need to continue, I'm addicted to this thing. (:

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The description of how each of the girls added there own homey touches was nice another way to sort of talk about thier personality without saying "dom shes like etc"

I love liam haha i lol'd as i read that he slicked his hair back awh what an adorable tin :)

Ani versus Scorpious hmmm i'l with hold judgment on that one for now :)

Aw it was sweet seeing scorpious unsure of how to deal with Jemmia

Favourite quotes - "we were tight in the womb"

"Bloody hell! Was she smiling? Was that suppose to be a smile?"

"Magic was basically the shit" i dont think i could ever agreed with a sentence more :)

"I was still pretty sure it referred to something dirty, and I was pretty ok with that."

I love your writting style its very funny and its really ..rich? i dont know i suppose its becuase your dealing with so many characters and doing it so well:)

Thanks! cant wait for the next update...unfortunetly i will have to wait six and a half weeks at least :( Im giving up the internet (apart for studying) for lent. See you then :)

Author's Response: oh no! well i hope by that time i'll have a few chapters out?
amazing review as always(:
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I love lily's friends :):) they are so gunny glad to see scropious has his priorites in order lol "my nose my perfect nose"

And so it begins...

Favourite quotes - "So those who cant Heal, push candy carts huh?" ha i knew the trolly lady had hidden depths :)

"lacking in consciousness"

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Wow this is such a beasty chapter :)

Trust James to ease the tension :) it was looking quite awkward there for a bit, why didnt teddy just tell her grrr. James is such a "big brother" i love it.

Liam sounds hilairous - a fake muggle cigarette ?? lol Ani also sounds pretty awesome its adorable that roxy likes him :) Though i have a feeling that lily's more his type especially after he got all glare-y at the guy who her up on the train.

I love how harry and ginny are still all lovey dovey

Favourite quotes- "He had two whole freaking months to tell me that... that. jerk muffin!"

"He's thousand-lingual"

"Or I could always bring them over to Albus's room"

"You ate my best friend and vomited up a brainless thing" im kinda starting to feel sorry for albus i mean he obviously wants ot be this cool "potter" kid but hes just ending up being this mean B'tard. What a tin.But a sad one all the same.

"His pale skin was flawless, hell every inch of him as flawless!"

"he wouldn't care if I got helped up by some dirty hobo covered in STDS, as long as he wasn’t a Slytherin." every story is better with a hobo mention i my opinion :)

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thanks a milion
wonderful review as always(:
-Chloe

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hi again :)

i love the of the notebooks thats such a good idea ! :)

Albus-what a TIN ! i thought it was very funny how Victoire amongst all the tension and drama is looking at her self. In a spoon lol :) Agressivly vapid? i think so.

Again loving the family dynamic and the added drama of Teddy's announcement :)

Good lord there is a hell of a lot of Flints !! though i suppose that makes sense with them wanting to re-establish pure blood supremacy how long did it take you to think of all the "E" names.

I loved Scorpious and albus's dialouge at the end aswell.

Great chapter very funny and really interesting :)

Favourite quotes - "He always goes for the mysterious bad boy, try and tame me angle. Pfsh I have that angle down to a fine science"

"Alas dashing as ever" scorpious is so full of himself in a hilarous kinda way :)

"Merlin Albus Potter would always be the pooper to my party, the rain on my parade, the ass to my foot"

Author's Response: it took me FOREVER to think up all those E names! trust me.
thanks a million, you are the best!
Your reviews are so good(:
love yah
-Chloe

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I feel i should warn you although this may seem a long review its mainly my favourite quotes..sorry about that i get a little carried away :P

Your scorpious is great, a real complex character

Not either focused on "clearing the malfoy name and change the predujced opinons people have of him" or being a total player he is actaul a multilayered character thingy (you know its my clarity which people find as my most prominent characteristic lol)

That part when he read enya's letter was really sweet but somehow felt complete in character.

Did i mention that i love your James ?? well i do :) Roxy is also absolutly adorable. Poor lily her family is so obnoxious (well for the most part anyway)

Favourite quotes - "Well first of all I'm thinking of becoming a male prostitute, and then as I rise through society I hope to start smuggling drugs across the borders, but don't worry Rachelle between my spreading of STDS and drug lording I'll still be living here with my thirty two cats and my gay lover"

also

"I was seventeen now bitches!"

and finaly

"So there we sat, four Weasleys/ Potters, meditating on a bright blue blanket in the middle of the lawn, surrounded by plastics, male model wannabees, mad scientists, a certain doom and gloom cupcake, and heaps of hugging old people"

proably my favourite end to a chapter ever :)

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i absolutely adore your reviews!
My Scorpius is a complex fellow.
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-Chloe

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Hi there :)

First off an apology, i have this thing where i feel i have to leave a review if i read a whole chapter otherwise..i dont know it feels like stealing i suppose.

However i have been a bit of a thief and a glutton becuase when i found this story i just had to read all of it and not stop for reviewing but i promised myself i would return so here i am sorry it took so long :)

I love your charctersation of the next gen lily is such a bad ass and i feel she is usualy portrayed as this sweet BORING little sister type character. Also i like how she doesnt get on with Albus who is imperfect and not the perfect potter kid for once.

Similarly i was impressed that you didnt make the weaslys and potters all great pals a brave descion, i wasnt really comfortable with it to begin with but whats exciting about comfy??

I was kinda overwhelm with the sheer number of characters but now its not even an issue :):):) Really differnt fanfiction from what i have found before cant wait to continue reading !

favourite quote - "She is like a Barbie Doll, a whining, bitchy, psychotic. Barbie Doll that no one plays with"

P.s sorry if this is hrad to read I'm dsylexic so the spelling is probs appauling i also tend to avoid punctation

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it made me feel really good when i read it, im glad you are enjoying the story!
if you have any suggestions please share(:
i adore yah!
-Chloe

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Love the story. Very origanal I like how The Potters are not a "perfect" family. That gets real boring real fast.

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"As your team captain I say no interteam relationships, of any kind. As your friend I say what the hell"

HILARIOUS :):)

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This. Story. Is. AMAZING! I have never heard a story from this point of view. i love the characters I love the conflict. NEVER STOP WRITING IT...if you do I will murder you in your sleep...JK! ahahaha
xoxoxGreta

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-Chloe

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more plz i'm loving it Lily should play hard to get

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love it :)

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doom and gloom cupcake lol

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Love it, the next gen are quite cool

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