oh dear lord i absolutely LOVED this chapter! i can't decide who i ship bee with more, remus or sirius! keep up the good work and PLEASE post again soon! Report Review
Write fast! Pleeasse!! I kind of want her to get with Declan just so it can piss Sirius off ;) haha. Report Review
Yay! Another update! I know I've said it before but I really do love Sirius, he's perfect and I want him. I not really sure about this new budding relationship with Declan, but he seems like a genuine fellow so I'll remain mutual for now. But I can see it really took a lot for Sirius to tell her how he felt and then call her our on her spending time with another guy right after he told her. He said it took a lot and it's obvs he's sincere. And I think her relationship with Remus is beyond cute.
Wow Richmond! Congrats! I actually took a look at Richmond and then I saw not only the price but the grades needed, and I decided to turn back now before I liked it to much... If I wanted a chance there I'd pretty much have to give up my social life, I'm a good student but my gpa is only around a 3.4 my goal for junior year is to get it up to around a 3.6 if I really work I think I have a chance. But I'm going to be visiting some schools in Virginia anyway and I was concidering visiting Richmond anyway. But again CONGRATS! You're going to a great school I'm sure you're going to love it there :)
xoxo, Emmm < 3 Report Review
Hmmm. Good story, I like it alot. I like her relationship with Remus, too. Also, a few chapters back, you had a chapter image of remus, and I was wondering who that actor was...so that info would be helpful to me:) Good job and updare soon, as always:)
love, annAuthor's Response: chase crawford. he's gorgeous isn't he? Report Review
Hmm, I really like this. It's very relatable, how she doesn't want to hang out with girls and prefers guys. well, relatable to me, anyway:) good job:) Report Review
I think you have a really interesting character in Bee. I can't wait to read more and see what happens! Report Review
oh my gosh the love speech!!! thats all i have to say. keep writing! Report Review
I love this fic!
Please update soon!
Lots of love,
KateAuthor's Response: thanks so much! Report Review
This is fantastic! You're an amazing writer and I really hope you continue this story.Author's Response: I plan on it! Thanks! Report Review
THANK GOD IT'S ABOUT TIME YOU UPDATED! Anyway it was a great chapter, I'm so excited to hear that more will be coming soon :) I love Lily, she kinda reminds me of myself. No bullshit type, but I would have caught Bee's lie, I tend to know when people are lying to me. I think Bee's awesome and obviously she's scared of a relationship and she's afraid of letting herself have real feelings for Sirius but at some point he'll get the best of her, I have faith! :p
Where are you going to college? I'm only a sophomore so I've started looking since junior year is about to kick into high gear come September, any advise that would help me not rip my hair out would be great lol
xoxo, Emm < 3Author's Response: First off, thanks so much! I'm very glad you like the story (and I'm trying to move faster in the updates!) I like Lily too. But don't worry, Lily knows Bee better than Bee thinks she does. You'll have to wait and see about Bee though.. anything can happen.
I'll be at the University of Richmond next year! I'm really excited! Junior year is rough, I won't sugar coat it. Lots of hard work, but it'll pay off, trust me.
My advice would just to find schools that you'd be happy at. Don't apply somewhere just so you know you'll get in there. Because if you end up there, you'll hate it, and yourself. All my "backup" schools would have been damn good fits for me as well.
I found the perfect school, and so did all of my friends. Figure out what you want, find a school that has it all (because there really is one for everyone) and strive for it. I really had to work on my grades, but it paid off.
And remember to breathe. It's not the end of the world if you don't get into you're first choice. Mine was Vanderbilt, I got straight up denied.
It doesn't really matter where you go, it's what you make of it and how you perform.
Good luck to you! Let me know how is goes!!
Cali Report Review
Please upload soon! It's so good!!Author's Response: thanks! It's much appreciated! Report Review
I was so happy to see that you had posted this! I love Bee and the way that she thinks, it just so real and kind of out there at the same time, if that make secents. I cant wait to see how this next bit is going to go, by the looks of things very instering and not the way that Bee wants it to.
Operation: Green with Envy =]Author's Response: haha thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy! Report Review
Great chapter and such a cliff-hanger at the end haha. Please update soon! I love that this story is progressing pretty quickly (without skipping things), so can't wait to see what happens next :)Author's Response: thanks! I'm trying my hardest. I go back and re-read it a lot and I feel like I might be progressing too fast all the time. It's nice to know you feel differently! Maybe I'm just being hyper-critical haha.
keep reading and reviewing!
xxx Report Review
omg! that was super intense in a box! i really did love it, but what i was thinking through our this entire chapter, im not to sure if Bee was but i was thinking Devon! anywho i really did love this chapter! : DAuthor's Response: interesting, and thanks!! Report Review
i LOVED it!! an AMAZING chapter! slowly this fic is making its way to the top of my fave fics! :DAuthor's Response: thank you so much! it means a lot to me. I've been having trouble with a case of writers block but im trying to work though it. knowing people love it helps to keep me motivated!
thanks again! Report Review
aweee!! that was super cute!! and i LOVED it!! it made me laugh and SMILE! : DAuthor's Response: glad to know you like it!!! Report Review
I love your story! Keep up the great work! Keep writing, don't leave us readers hanging, deffinately going to be awaiting more of your wonderful work! Your writing is simply fantastic!
I like bee's character, very strong in mind, But I do hope she become's more womanly, I'd like to see her change up a bit, be a bit more lady like but still be one of the boys! I love her parallel to lily!
I feel Remus is a bit too close to Bee! Possible rival of Sirius maybe? ;)
James and lily are adorable! Wonderful characters, very real, if only they were real! Hahah!
Once again, brilliance! Hope you consistenly update!Author's Response: yeah Bee does have a pretty strong personality. She's very stubborn so there may be subtle changes but she'll stay mostly true to form.
as for remus... you'll have to wait and see. there are many others contending for Bee's affections (which are hard to come by). Keep in mind it'll never just be Sirius!
i'm so glad you like it though! I'm trying my hardest to update regularly but it's tough. Keep reviewing and I'll keep writing! Report Review
omg update now! i need to know what happens!!!
p.s. love ur story!Author's Response: more on it's way!!
and thank you!! Report Review
hey diddle diddle, this has had me in hysterics! my boyfriend's in the kitchen, cooking din dins, and he keeps shouting at me - 'what on earth are you doing?!'. And i just keep laughing...
love the characters! update soon =DAuthor's Response: hahaha I'm really glad you're liking it!! Report Review
i love your story so far!!! please keep writing!Author's Response: thank you!! Report Review
I've really enjoyed this story so far, and urge you to write more! I think Bee is a very likeable character...sort of tomboyish and the whole 'I don't care what anyone thinks of me' attitude. I think all the characters had great personalities, and that your wording was excellent - I like your style of writing.
Thanks for a great read!
GinnyWeasley_13 Report Review
update update update update!
Loving this(:Author's Response: hahah i'm trying! and thanks! Report Review
Yikes! A little fun gone wrong. Or should I say curiosity gone wrong. Who knew this could cause such a mess? Now everything is awkward with her and Sirius and Remus is now mad at her too. I feel bad for. I hope everything starts to go a little better for her. That was a great chapter and I can't wait to read more. Update soon! :)Author's Response: Everything will be remedied in the next chapter. No worries! Although, I'm not making any promises that they'll stay that way for very long at all.
Just in case you haven't begun to realize, Bee isn't the most...stable human ever.
hahaha. Don't worry though, I've got a plan. A Good one I think. You'll just have to keep reading to find out what it is and reviewing to tell me of you agree!
xxx Report Review
can't wait to see what happens(:Author's Response: keep reading to find out!
Thanks for the review!! Report Review
Ahhh! You can't just leave it there! Gosh! Stupid cliff-hang endings. Write me more? :DAuthor's Response: Always! Glad to know you like it!! Report Review
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