It took so long for her to say it because she had to find it in herself, and that was one thing she couldn't bear to do.

Bravo to you.

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I really don't know what to say. I review every chapter so I have can say something, but I have nothing to say!

Bravo to you.

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Lily with the Marauders sounds perfect, let's be honest. JK Rowling wrote the four of them to be friends with Lily, you just know it. Well, or maybe we all did. You did, certainly.

Bravo to you.

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Although my female instincts want to punch James, I know that it cannot be all Lily's call. He has to find the balance as well.

Bravo to you.

P.S. The thing with Sirius? "He's free right now"? Hilarious.

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Ding ding ding!

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Something is going to change.

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Yeah, I love with Prologues make sense! Even though it is a sad prologue.

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I'm waiting for Lily's eureka moment. I bet it'll be pretty awesome.

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James needs a hug.

Bravo to you.

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Please consider his feelings and not just your own, Lily.

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The "She's here!" made me die laughing. It was perfect.

Bravo to you.

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You know, I was just thinking about writing an AU story where Lily gets pregnant during Hogwarts. Irony, that is.

It's very well written.

Bravo to you.

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She had better damn well go see him in the hospital wing.

Damn Severus.

Bravo to you.

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I love in letters, they address each other by last name and sign their first. I think it's cute.

Lily's relutance is understandable, but I wish it wasn't there.

Bravo to you.

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They have a seriously dsyfunctional relationship. Yet, if messy emotions didn't get involved, it would be perfect.

Bravo to you.

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I've always had a sneaking suspicion something like this was happening between them...

Great job.

Bravo to you.

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Loved it! I read this in 2 days and stayed up until 01:30am to do it! It's a really interesting and new take on Lily and James' relationship and their characters. Well done. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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really interessting plot compared to most of the others James-Lily Stories I have read

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So good! Really well written, great story line, nice ending. I kinda agree with you on the 'ending' chapter (the one before this one, where you said in your author's note that you weren't quite happy with it). I feel there was a little something missing... perhaps the argumentative passion that defined so much of their relationship for those early years? Dunno. I guess you might read over it in six months and realise straight away what it is.

Thanks for writing such a good story :) you'll do well in your chosen field, too. Keep it up :D

-Chanelle (normal username Chapstick...but I can't be bothered signing in at the moment :P )

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You're doing creative writing!! Definitely a good choice :) write an awesome book and mention all the inspirational reviews you got from your readers and I'll definitely buy that book for me, and as gifts for my family and friends for the next ten years :D

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Naww. So sweet :) I like that Lily's not being an overly emotional whiner. I never really found it believable as far as JK's Lily goes.

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Hurried, but I like the way you're telling the story. There's no need to prattle on about the emotional side until there's really a 'roadblock' to worry about, is there? Really a fan of this. Looking forward to the next chapter already :)

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Nice story idea, I love it so far :)

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COMPANION PIECE COMPANION PIECE COMPANION PIECE
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B-E-A-Utiful. That ending is just beautiful. Thank you so much for writing this, you are truly gifted =)

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