I read this after I finished my precalc test and actually got kicked out of class because I was lauging so hard lol.

This is hilarious! And really cannon haha...
Please update soon!
10/10

Author's Response: Hey!

I'm so glad you liked it! And your story made me laugh. :P Hope you didn't get in too much trouble!

I'll put the next chapter in validation tomorrow. ;)

Thanks for the review!

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This is good. I think story has great potential. However, it seems to be a bit rushed, as though there is so many things going on at once its hard to keep up. Also, the line "brotha from anotha motha" just doesn't strike it with me. But it's your story, so it's fine. Just wanted to say that : ). In this, it sounds as though there are just three maurarders, but I always thought that it was the four of them. Maybe I just read it wrong, but that seemed a little confusing.

Otherwise, it seems great, and really seems to fit James' personality.

Keep writing!

Author's Response: Hey there!

Thanks for the review! Well, yes, the fact that there was what I was trying to go for. I just thought of many of the cliches that I could think of and wrote them all down. :P

Haha, yes, there are four Marauders! But in many Maurarder stories, Peter just seems to never have exsisted. which was what I was trying to show. :P

Thanks for the review!

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HAAH THIS CHAPTER MADE ME LAUGH ALOT, actually. I love some good old cliche bashing, it's halarious. You did a wonderful job with balancing the awfulness of cliches while still maintaing good writing. I can't wait for the next chapter of this. GREAT JOB.

Ps. I'm still lol'ing from just about everything, but especially the part with dumbledor. " 'I have many mysterious reasons for my many mysterious ways. I like to keep people clueless and guessing about my reasoning, even long after I'm gone.' He then winks and high-fives me, before disapparating into thin air."

-ronsgirl29

Author's Response: HEY there!! :D

I'm soo glad you liked this! I always wanted to write James' point of view, so I thought this might be a good way to let it out. :D

Hehe, glad you liekd that part! Thanks for the review; I hope you like what's to come! :D

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OMG! this is hilarious! I love jamses nickname prongsie poo.
lmao!

Author's Response: Hey there!

Yay! I'm siked you liked it! :D I always love the first reviewer!

Thanks! Hope you like what's to come. :D

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