{reviewid: 2340628, reviewer: 'Deans_Girl08'}
30th April 2010:
Very good chapter. keep up the great work!!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!
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{reviewid: 2340626, reviewer: 'Deans_Girl08'}
30th April 2010:
I think this was a very good chapter! I'm liking where this story is going. Keep up the good work. I can not wait to read the rest
Author's Response: Nice, I hope it continues to keep you intrigued :D
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{reviewid: 2340561, reviewer: 'Deans_Girl08'}
30th April 2010:
I thought this was a very good chapter. I can not wait to keep reading on.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it :)
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{reviewid: 2337903, reviewer: 'crestwood'}
25th April 2010:
Yes! Ron proposed. I love Hermione, but she really needs to get her head straight! I love characterizations. I really care about each character and what happens to them!
Author's Response: Me too, when I write it I find it really hard not to think of them as real people.
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{reviewid: 2337900, reviewer: 'crestwood'}
25th April 2010:
Wow. That was a really sweet chapter! This is really good for your first story. I didn't catch any mistakes so far!
10/10
Author's Response: wow! 10/10 thank you very much :D
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{reviewid: 2337895, reviewer: 'crestwood'}
25th April 2010:
Wow she's liking Fred more and more! You've got me hooked.
Author's Response: Well Fred is rather dreamy XD
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{reviewid: 2337881, reviewer: 'crestwood'}
25th April 2010:
Ha ha. This is good. Hermione working in a joke shop! I'd love to see where this leads. *favorites*
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Hope the rest doesn't disappoint!
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{reviewid: 2334750, reviewer: 'HoneyBabyDarlin'}
18th April 2010:
So I just have to say that i love that Ron doesn't just magically become the biggest jerk ever like he does in a lot of stories. I like that you have more of the realistic tug because hes still overall a sweetie. Its just Fred's so much sweeter ;)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it :) Yeah I don't hate Ron, I think he's sweet. I'm just not sure if he's right for Hermione and I love Fred and I think it's quit ea random match and I like to think that Fred does have a deeper side to him than just being a joker :)
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{reviewid: 2334686, reviewer: 'HoneyBabyDarlin'}
18th April 2010:
what a jerk ron is! hmm. so its fred shell go after?
Author's Response: Naaah he's not a jerk, he's just not right for her :P
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{reviewid: 2331272, reviewer: 'Kaka'}
12th April 2010:
Great chapter! I hope Ron doesn't get to awful mean.
Author's Response: I like to think he isn't mean he just doesn't understand her, thanks for the review :D
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{reviewid: 2331150, reviewer: 'Amy'}
12th April 2010:
I wonder where this is going.
Author's Response: You'll have to read on then :P Sorry it takes so long I have all the chapters written, I just have to get them validated one at a time!
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