271 Reviews Found

Review #26, by phoenixy_friend Burn Out

20th January 2011:
I have to say, I'd completely forgotten about the grenade up until this point. But wouldn't Al have been blown up too?

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Review #27, by SONofBEEDLE Burn Out

20th January 2011:
Finally! HAd been waiting this chap for months. It's kind of a let down though.

The action was cool, but I expected a longer chapter. I hope the story doesn't end so soon.

Longer chps!

8/10

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Review #28, by Mitchie Burn Out

20th January 2011:
OH MY GOSH! FINALY. ok. caps lock off. it was nice to see it come to an end(ish) love it! :)

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Review #29, by Florifera Burn Out

20th January 2011:
Yay, you're back! Now, about the chapter; Ryke did not die. No, she can't be dead already... I think she'll come popping up when they least expect it, I know she will! Anyway, great chapter, can't wait to read more!!!

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Review #30, by James2009 Burn Out

20th January 2011:
I THOUGHT YOU HAD GIVEN UP FOR A MOMENT! It was great to read the story again, even though you seriously had me scared for a moment because i thought someone was going to die, and we still dont know if Harry and Ron are okay...
Anyhow, Congrats on a great chapter and please dont ever take so long again between posts,
James2009

P.S Merry late christmas and hope you have an awesome 2011

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Review #31, by sinwillys822 Burn Out

20th January 2011:
wow i am glad that they won the fight, can't wait to read what happens next.

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Review #32, by irrelevant Burn Out

20th January 2011:
Okay... this was kind of anti-climatic for me. I mean I'm really happy that Ryke finally died (noone's gonna piece her back together now, right?) but it was short and abrupt and totally unexpected, since she seemed to survive for ages even when she was supposed to die. Seemed too simple to me. And the chapter was way too short... hope I won't have to wait this long til the next one :)
otherwise it's still a brilliant story :)

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Review #33, by gr8 people Burn Out

20th January 2011:
excellent! this was just way to goood! in the beginning this was a little boring and i liked the previous story better! but this chapter was crazy! excellent totally mind or maybe ryke blowing!:D anyway great chapter cant wait for the next!

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Review #34, by Derek Burn Out

20th January 2011:
No Way... Months since the last chapter. Going to go read it now. This continuation of the previous book has been fantastic.

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Review #35, by HPFan High Octane

11th January 2011:
Love this! Please update soon!

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Review #36, by Carolina High Octane

9th January 2011:
Hahahaha no. Unacceptable. I refuse to believe that Ryke's immortal!

Loved Ringo again, and Al's rant about puns.

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Review #37, by Carolina Turbulance

9th January 2011:
This was actually the best chapter EVER. So many good moments. "What?! You can’t play chicken with missiles!” “Why not?”
Ringo's AWESOME! And Al is just fabulous. As always. He always manages to arrive in style...

This is my favorite chapter so far easily. :D

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Review #38, by Carolina Love Line

9th January 2011:
Venice! I'm taking you to Venice!

I loved the dialogue at the end there. Priceless! :)

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Review #39, by HP0247 High Octane

30th November 2010:
Loved the first story, BTW, and wondering if you'll be finishing the sequel or if you've dropped it. Thanks!

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Review #40, by Zathura High Octane

26th November 2010:
This was such an awesome story !one of the best i've ever read please review soon

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Review #41, by HP0247 Wild Parties

14th November 2010:
Hi - I'm currently reading and really enjoying the first story of 'Octane', and I'm very disappointed to see you've not updated THIS sequel since August. So, hoping you'll do so soon so I can enjoy the continuation.

Thanks for sharing.

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Review #42, by Crystle High Octane

24th September 2010:
please, please update. Where have you been? It has never taken you this long to update.

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Review #43, by Emmy1 High Octane

14th September 2010:
It's been sooo long since you've updated?!?! It's coming soon? Right? =D LOVE IT!

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Review #44, by mrs_scorpiusmalfoy High Octane

23rd August 2010:
Hello!

It's been so long! I've been having hallucinations of Al falling for me 'cos I kicked Ryke's butt. But, sadly, Shiori beat me to it.



“Yep, squib and a pilot. I’m also a brain surgeon.”

“What?! Really?!”

“No, that was a joke. I’m also a comedian and a wild love machine,” he grinned and winked at Hermione who actually looked quite frightened.

“Hey! That’s my wife!” Ron growled.


I loved that bit. And Albus' pun rant. Brilliant.

This story is actually a brilliant mix of everything: the villian you love to hate, the smoking prontagonist with a fetish for weaponry, the pregnant women and the druggie. Scorpius is cool, too. I guess...

I could never in a million years use ideas from something (Lethal Weapon) AND keep it originally awesome. Good work.

Kindly don't force us to wait this long again. I'm not sure if you're aware, but Al's puns are ridiculously addictive. I still can't comprehend how and why they effect me to that extent.

Jaz

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Review #45, by irrelevant High Octane

22nd August 2010:
I certainly didn't expect this. I mean, Shiori stabbing Ryke, and Ryke dying... well, it did seem a little too easy. But Ryke becoming immortal? Noo... I'm really curious as to what you'll come up with next :)

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Review #46, by SimplyStupified77 High Octane

18th August 2010:
no no no, she can't be immortal!! ugh can't wait to see what happens next! 10/10!

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Review #47, by Kerry Cho High Octane

18th August 2010:
haha Albus and his puns!
Oh snap! Why can't Ryke just die?
more! more!! more!

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Review #48, by graciefranz00 High Octane

17th August 2010:
ftw??!! but the reactor charge and the energy transfer weren't complete! no o o o o o o o o ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Review #49, by Riverwind54 High Octane

17th August 2010:
It was worth the wait, good job.

Thanks,

River

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Review #50, by marciabarcia High Octane

17th August 2010:
Holy cow... she did it... now how are they going to stop her...

xoxo
~Marcia

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