Wow that was great! And original to include cars in a magical world. Good job!

Author's Response: Every story needs a good car chase. :P

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Go Albus! Poor Scarlet...she's like the Fleur of this tournament.
Your story reminds me a lot of the Hunger Games series. Very good writing and amazing plot!

Author's Response: Lmao! I'm ready the Hungers Games right now! It's really good so far. :D

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I thought the ninja would be Shiori. I guess not!
Wow such an intense story. Congratulations!!

Author's Response: Not quite but close. ;)

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Wow that was scary. I'm glad he didn't win it would have been cliched if he had.

Author's Response: Win some, lose some, you know how it is. :P

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Wow this is amazing. I can't stop reading this.

Author's Response: I'm gald you're still enjoying it. :D

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This story is SO GOOD, you're making me wanna visit Japan.

Author's Response: I wanna live there. :P

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Very intense...I'm loving it!

Author's Response: Great! Thanks! :D

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I like this...especially the new Tournament rules. Very interesting!

Author's Response: Thanks. I thought it should be a little different to the GoB stuff. :)

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I like this a lot...it's got a devil-may-care attitude. Fun to read!

Author's Response: LOL that's the idea. :P Thanks again.

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Wow, I didn't realize how bad it was to annoy the Ministry.
Rose and Scorpius are cute. =)

Author's Response: Hehe, it's the government...they're never happy. :P

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This is really interesting...I must say (like I've been saying to a billion other authors) that I started reading this because Ben Barnes was on the banner. =) But your summary was very intriguing as well! Wow Japan, I'm glad they're not having the Tournament at Hogwarts again...oh I feel like eating Japanese food now...

Author's Response: Far Easten food is lovely! You should definatley have some! :P

Thanks very much for the review. :D

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ooh brilliant
i loved this story and i just couldn't stop reading it xx :D xx
off to read the sequal cheery-ho xx
thanks 10/10 xx

Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked it!! :D

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I simply loved this story. It was smart, well-plotted, humorous, cocky as hell, and I adored all the characters! Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks very much. Hope you enjoy the sequel. :D

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Just a question that's bothering me-where's Draco? Surely he'd be there along with Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny insuring their kids safety. Just bothers me that he's not.

Author's Response: I'm not very good at writing Draco so I just kinda stay away from his character. :/

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OMG - that's the cutest first chapter I think I've ever read. It was so humorous - what a couple of very silly bad boys. I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Hehe, yep, they're crazy.youth of today...they're out of control. :P

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Very elaborated story! Lots of nicely thought-through action! I must say I really like the characterization you made of Albus and Scorpius. Congratulations with this fabulous story!

Author's Response: YAY! Thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

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“Aligato,” he smiled and turned to the others. “This is student head of Hokkaido Academy, Shiori Unocho.”

One- if youre going to use japanese do your research.
two - a little lesson in japanese. it is impossible to have an L in japanese. they don't have a sound for it. if you said "aligato" to a japanese speaking person they wouldnt understand what you said. it is "aRigato"

Author's Response: My bad. Japanese is a difficult language.

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Absolutely amazing. Can't wait to read the sequel, unfortunately it's midnight and I have school :L xD

Author's Response: School comes first. It's important. :D

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I have to say that this is the best thing I have read in a long time and I can not wait for the next bit! XD

Author's Response: Hehe, glad you like it. I'm hoping to finish the sequel soon. :D

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'Scorpius started chuckling and shaking his head. “I love that crazy little Veela.”'

This part was amazing. I was not expecting it at all, and when I read it I couldn't help but bust out laughing. Amazing. :p

Author's Response: Louis is crazy. He's a big part of the 2nd novel. :D

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Haha, this story never fails to make me laugh... 'head' puns for the win ;)
This must be my third or fourth time reading this story, it's great. I love this characterization of Al and Scorpius. Even though Sammy23's Albus was similar, your story is definitely unique. 10/10, and I'd like to say this is the best next-gen I've read yet :)

Author's Response: I read Sammy23's stuff on FanFictiondotnet. I really liked them except for the superhero stuff. I prefer characters with no special powers that truly are the underdogs.

Thanks very much for the review. :D

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Nice interaction with Shiori and Al. She hates him which is hilarious to me! Great job!

Author's Response: She won't hate him for long. He's too loveable. :P

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I think the design is gorgeous. Straight out of a magazine. I like the elevator scene. I totally saw it coming that she could speak English. Al is an idiot lol.

Author's Response: Hehe, yep, he's an idiot...at least, when it comes to girls he is. :P

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I love the fact that you made Scorpius sick while using a portkey. I have always imagined that I would puke like crazy after using those things. I'm glad Albus wants to go out with a bang and I'm sure he will. The descriptions of the school so far seem very futuristic and traditional at the same time. Good Chapter.

Author's Response: I figured that since it was a brand new school, it would probably have way more modern magic and design. Hogwarts was built 1000 years ago after all so it's still got it's medevil look. :P

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Ok chapter 2. Love the school's reaction. They are haters though I love the boys! How could you not? So what if they have done millions and millions of damage they saved lives! A human life is priceless! Lol anyway I like that Rose and Scorpius truly love each other and I hope it works out! Albus, on the other hand, I'm sure will find love in Japan. Girls at Hogwarts can't handle him. Great chapter!

Author's Response: Hehe, well, he'd need somekind of superhuman woman because normal ones just wouldn't survive his nature. :P Unfortunately, his destructive to relationships as well. ;)

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