I've finally finished reading the 25 chapter monstrosity of a fantastic, magnificent, AMAZING, and lovely story that is this one and I have to say one thing...

James is going to be punching himself and pulling out his own organs soon. hehehe

So, I wanted to let you know that while most of my reviews are actually quite crazy, I do truly love this story. Its gripping, witty, drama filled, and so darn humorous I think I might have broken my jaw from all the smiling and laughter.

Speaking of laughter...my favorite line from this chapter was DUN DUN DUN..."Albus has taken a recent obsession with the idea of screwing a hippie girl.Yeah. I know. No comment."

Siriusly! I started laughing out loud and I think I might have awoken my sister. She's going to be so totally thrilled about this tomorrow when she realizes she only got four hours of sleep because of me.

So, I wanted to let you know that I adore this. I can't say it enough. I really hope that you are truly back from your four month hiatus as I assume you are because of you "about me" status... but really, what right do I have to complain about not having the next chapter out. I just had the chance to read all 25 chapters without having to wait for any of those to come out! so. yeah. I guess, I can't complain about anything.

ANYWAY, I'm very grateful to you that this story was written. It kept me busy the past two days and it has been added to my favorites and I will be checking for updates every day.

I would rate this story as one of my favs and it is definitely being recommended for a dobby. Thank you so much for writing this! It is bloody fantastic.

10/10 (you know I really want to give it a 11/10. *sigh* if only i could)

:)

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Ah. Ah. Ah. Ah. Ah. Ah. Ah. Ah.

I don't freaking care if it takes you longer to update on this site. I'm just happy that you will continue.

I love this. Really.

Please. Please. Please. update soon.

Love you to pieces!

10/10

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Love it. Love it. Love it.

Fantastic...and Jamsie poo "I sort of have a thing for American girls"

AHHH! FAN-BLOODY-TASTIC!

11/10 you know...if I could

10/10 :)

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hahahahahahaha! I love this! Okay...Now to my 18th review??? I WANT THEM TO GET TOGETHER DARN IT (see I keep it 12+).

But, I know not everything will work out my way. I'm so glad that you wrote this story and I'm so pleased with this story.

THANK YOU FOR THE STORY! I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW ITS UNBELIEVABLE!

10/10

if I could, I'd make it 11/10

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WHY! WHY just FRIENDS!

AH. Okay, lovely though. Seriously I love it.

And, I'm quite pleased that this is my 16th or 17th review on this story in 2 days.

I'll be so surprised if you actually read them all. haha

10/10 :)

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Why did she run? WHY?

And James? HELLO! You should be HAPPY! not swearing every two seconds and all that.

Boo. As I am extremely thrilled that they finally kissed (!!!) I am confused! WHY DO YOU RUN AWAY FROM THE LOVE OF YOUR LIFE AFTER YOU KISSED HIM?

10/10

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Go rose! Go rose! Go rose! I'm so proud of my favorite little Gryffindor Chaser! AND I'm proud of Lily and I know that's quite an accomplishment with everything that she has done and said in this story. But, I love it. Love it. Love it.

I'm so glad that I gave this story a chance and I'm so thrilled that you gave the time and effort to write such a gripping story.

Thank you :)

10/10

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AHHH! YES! ROSE IS BACK! MY DEAR AUTHOR YOU ARE AMAZING!!!

Okay, so last night I was going to read this chapter, but after seeing the numerous amount of reviews for it and the length, I thought it would probably be better if I read it when I was in sane mind.

And wow. I'm glad I did.

Thank you for making it all right again! I know things will continue to get complicated. as they always do. But, I'm so thrilled with this.

Not only are you a fabulous author when it comes to dealing with relationships between characters, but the whole quidditch match was lovely. Those are probably my favorite chapters in this story. I mean, the one's with quidditch in it. And wow. There are a lot.

So, as this is probably a rather long review, I'd like to say THANK YOU! and LOVELY WORK! (siriusly) Wow.

10/10

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AW! Okay, I'm starting to love you again. THEY LIKE HER! THEY TRULY LIKE HER! YAY!

on to the next chapter...really I need sleep. darn you.

10/10

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I hate you (not in reality). BUT NOW I HAVE TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER BECAUSE OF YOUR AMAZING WRITING AND AHHH! WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME! I NEED SLEEP!

hahaha, okay, well as you can tell I'm a bit tired and I'll be amazed if you actually read the tons of reviews I've left for you today. But, you are an amazing author and I've been hooked to this story since the morning. I love it. Fabulouso!

10/10! Keep up the excellent work!

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I don't like this chapter. I love it in the sense that your an amazing writer and all, but I hate that everyone hates her and James said that one word that I've been dreading to hear come out of his mouth.

"goodbye"

WAH! I can't believe that this is happening to her when all of two days ago everything was fine between her and her friends! REALLY! you can't take the stupid things someone does while drunk seriously. It just ruins your life.

So...I'm planning to read one more chapter tonight before I go to bed. It might end up being quite a few more chapters...but that is up to you. Will you leave me on yet again another cliffhanger? we'll see. :)

10/10 as always!

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You're mean. I don't like an upset James. Not at all. Especially when Els WAS out of her mind.

I do not like this at all.

10/10

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Please please please let rose love her again. She needs the weasley's/potters in her life. If she doesn't have them, then I'm concerned she's going to go to a looney bin.

PLEASE! I BEG OF YOU!

cough...sorry for that outburst.

Lovely chapter. I'm a bit worried for Els.

What did she say to James?

10/10

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I love it when she has her friends! Especially when James wants to be her friend! Ahhh! :)

Also, when she was hitting him in the head with the blugger, I literally laughed out loud and I think I might have just woken up my sister. hahaha.

Lovely job as always!

10/10

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I hate james now. I know i litterally just said that I loved him...but REALLY!

He left his best friends of 6 years for his girl friend of 3 weeks?

I don't want to talk about my utter confusion at this new revelation. but I bet if Els told him what his girlfriend (ugh) said to her and about her, then there would be a diff reaction from James.

Now...time to keep reading. :)

10/10

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ROSE ROSE ROSE!!! PLEASE LET SCORPIUS END UP WITH ROSE!

And, WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED!

This is so intense that I think I might need a lie down soon. Siriusly! Rose and Lily almost killing each other freaked me out so much and then Els not really having a birthday!

But, you know she is acting a bit immature with the whole ruined birthday bit. It just seems a bit obvious that I don't think she needs to be stating it every two seconds.


BUT! AHHH! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! James and her really do have so much love for each other that I know when I get to further chapters, I'm going to be terribly upset. Just now when they had their 'baby fight' I freaked and almost started balling. But, because I read ahead...cough cough...I saw that in the preview for one of the next chapters James says "goodbye, Elaquay". OH MY GOD THAT CAN'T HAPPEN! I'M TELLING YOU THAT I WILL KEEN (as in wail over their dead body of a relationship...not showing enthusiasm)!

Anyway, congratulations on yet again another chapter that has kept me at the edge of my seat. LOVELY JOB!

Also, I apologize for the amount of caps in this review. But...they were somewhat necessary. :)

10/10

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Oh my goodness. JAMES YOU MEANIE YOU!

So, I love this story and at the moment I am officially bothered by James and his lack of understanding if his feelings for ms. Els.

But, I want to give you one word of advice. You keep mixing up the words "too" and "to". You will occasionally use "to" instead of "too" and while its not entirely that big of a deal, you do this quite a lot and just want to give you a heads up for future chapters.

Otherwise, fantastic job and keep up the magnificent work! :)

10/10

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AH! I CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF THE QUIDDITCH MATCHES!

They are so perfect for each other and I KNOW something is going to prevent them from getting together, but please let them at least confess their love for each other once!

Ahh. This chapter was fantastic. I'm so excited to see what does happen at the burrow on Els 17th birthday just so I can see what Mrs. Weasley will have whipped up for her.

Wonderful job on a wonderful story!

10/10

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Ahh! Their midnight quidditch match! LOVE THEM!

Perfect job as usual! This chapter had me smiling almost the entire time and when my dad called me to come down stairs, i almost didn't because I wanted to keep reading.

Lovely job!

10/10

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I freaking love this story! James is so cute and so are the rest of his family! Their sense of humor is perfect and oh, Mrs. Weasley Senior playing that wonderful trick on Els. hahaha!

So, I just wanted to compliment you on how wonderful of a writer you are and how I completely adore this story already. Absolutely going to be on my favorite list. :)

10/10

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Continue! this is so freakin awesome!
it feels like rowling's written it.
Yayy

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Bloody hell, will u PUH-LEASE update?! Faster faster!

you know what i was thinking? I was thinking, "how would james punch himself?" ahahahha.

:)

PLEASE DO UPDATE.

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Thank you, thank you, thank you for finally updating! I was getting worried about where you'd disappeared to!
Please get them together already. You've dragged it out long enough! It's torture!
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! 10/10!!! :)

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Pls pls pls update ASAP

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PLEASE UPDATE SOON OR I WILL DIE ! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! 10/10

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