I'm reading this for the... fourth time? And I still love it. And I love Victoire so much right now. :D This is one of my favorite fan fictions out there. You are an AMAZING author. Report Review
This was so amazing :D. i cant help but feel all warm and fuzzy inside! and you're right, the song is absolutely beautiful. Report Review
THAT WAS SO BLOODY CUTE!
That is officially the sweetest fan fiction i have ever read!! I love it!! 10/10 Report Review
YOU GENIUS. I CANNOT EVEN FATHOM THE EMOTION I'M FEELING RIGHT NOW
YOU'RE SO CLEVER AND AWESOME AND ESJDKFGNF Report Review
I love it but I think u should write more chapters about their relationship before and after the wedding Report Review
That was freaking cute. Keep up the good work! Report Review
that was the most hilarious thing I have ever read. And now I know where waldo is, thank you. Dr seuss is also the best rapper in the world, thank you, finally someone else notices Report Review
I'm sorry, but I was disappointed with this chapter.
You see, I usually love your stories, and your wit and humour.
But what I didn't like, is how you wrote "She’s just…that sort of girl you like right away, you know? She has this long, silvery-blonde hair, vivid blue eyes, a bloody perfect body…she’s beautiful. Absolutely, breathtakingly beautiful"
Since when does a person have to have a perfect body and appearance to appeal to a guy. A person doesn't have to be perfect to be exactly what you both want and need.
Her, you are not promoting self esteem in young girls, and as being one yourself, I think you would understand.
Sorry, but this really gets to me. Not just you, but everything that states that you have to be a stereotypical, skinny, blonde girl to get boys annoys me greatly.
I hope you understand.
Otherwise, great job with your stories! Report Review
perfect i absolutley love it Report Review
OMG! This is the BEST STORY EVER! omg omg , im hyperventilating , i promise im not a idiot but this story! wow , You are a amazing writter! you have a amazing talent... omg omg OMG! Report Review
I love your characters!!! Can't wait to read the rest of the story :) Report Review
Oh, that was so swet ^^. Well, not actually believable, but still sweet. End - despite all illogical things - I loved that. I don't know, what you've done to me, but it makes me enjoy everything what you've written. Whatever - good for me :D.
Please, update "Welcome to the Chase", please! And "Deja Vu"! But Chase first! I mean- I don't mean like, I don't know, commanding you, or something xD. You know, right. Sooo, I just need to go, like now. Bye! Report Review
I have never really read a full lenght Victoire/Teddy fic before, and this was just amazing. I fell in love with them as they fell in love with eachother. Just brilliant. Report Review
Oh my goodness. How do you make these awesome stories that should be cheesy but are just gorgeous? You're probably Jesus, aren't you? Report Review
ROBOT hahahaha u so funny I love your stories Report Review
Haha. Peter is such a creep. I'm sitting here literally wanting to peel his skin off slowly and painfully. Hehe. Report Review
LUV THIS IT IS AMAZING, MELUVS THE KISSING SCENES
10/10, as usual...never rated u anything lower, mayb once i accidentally rated u a 9.
thats beside the point. MELUVSIESLOTSIES
(translation) ME LIKEY A LOTTY
teehee. that sounds like potty. Report Review
this is my favorite:
“You just looked a bit constipated, so I was suggesting that you try and sit on the toilet seat.”
FUNNY! Report Review
I LOVED IT!!! ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Now listening to the song, which is good, I'd never heard it before. I've always been wary of teddy/victorie stories before for no aparent reason but now I've read this I just want to read more. Thanks for the entertainment :D Report Review
WOWOWOWOWOWOW! Great story!! I love it!! One of my favourites!!! Report Review
My favourite quote from this chapter is 'Ha Suckers'. I love it. It makes the chapter funny. It's great. I'm excited for the rest! Report Review
I listened to Vanilla TWilight while I read this and it added more depth. I LOVED this chapter. My favorite by far! You are a great writer! Report Review
MADDY IS AMAZING!!! Hahaha! I love the intensity of this chapter. I give props to Jenn!!! Report Review
I like it!! very suspensful. Can't wait to see what happens next Report Review
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