I ENJOYED THE MOMENT!

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floating on a bubble of happy :D

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YOU WOULD NOT BELEIVE YOUR EYES. IF 10 MILLION FIREFLIES LIT UP THE WORLD AS YOU FELL ASLEEP.

:D

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wow. COOL...Yet creepy.
CREEPY MY GOOD FRIEND.

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PRATbam!NORMAL?
i wish that would happen to my albus.
...oh wait. i dont have one.
YET.

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PINK SHUTTERS?
how utterly horrnedous.

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Thats so cuuute.
buy me an albus.
please?

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CHEESECAKE.
yummay.

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swimmingly? SWIMMINGLY?


...i LOVE it.

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Can you please update? I love this storie and i love to se Al and Adel get to together again.

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IF YOU HEARD THAT. IT WAS MY HEART BREAKING. alright, that was melodramatic, but seriously YOU HAVE TO UPDATE. PLEASE. MY LIFE MAY DEPEND ON IT. they have to make up, they have to! al and addie, they've been apart for six bloody years YOU HAVE TO GIVE THEM A HAPPILY EVER AFTER
please?
pretty please?
PRETTY PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE
UPDATE. NOW. I COMMAND YOU. NOW. DO IT.
please.
UPDATE!

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ARTEMIS! ARTEMIS AS IN ARTEMIS FROM YOUR OTHER STORY?!
MUAHAHAHAHHA. i love cross-overs.
but what is she doing working in a mall? why isn't she off living happily with James?
ANSWERS. I NEED THEM.
off to the next chapter, i suppose. SCREW YOU, MATHS!

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SO AWKWARD. yet adorable. awkward & adorable moments are the best. you have successfully veered me away from my maths studying, shall deal with the consequences later, and now i shall REEEAD, because this is funny. and good.

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THIS IS SUCH A FUNNY STORY. it made me chortle many times. be proud; chortles are valuable.
what an awkward situation. i was half expecting someone to jump out and yell KIDDING. but no one did. and now its interesting.

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Urgh!!!
Update please please please!!!
I'm dying here! I need to know whats gonna happen soon or my head will explode!
Please please please, pretty please with a cherry on the top?
Please?

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ok i love this story but you should try and control your americanisms, especially since they're british. it'd make it more believable.

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OMG, I love this story. It always keeps me wondering what will happen next. Can you update soon. Im dying o know what happens between Al and Adele. Plz Plz Plz Update! :)

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UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE PLEASE!
No, I don't want to hurry you or anything.., take all the time you need to give us another fantastic chapter. But seriously, I would really love to read about Saturday sometime as soon as you can write the next chapter, I love the story so far, and Adele, and Al, and the whole family, and the unexpected time jump/ twist in the plot. :) so please, please update asap?..

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oh please update! I've been waiting for so long and going to piss my pants, please!

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I have been waiting months for an update!! i love this story so much and your other rose/scorp engagement one. please update them both! i think without a doubt you are my favourite author on here but the updates are killing me! are you going to continue with the other rose/scorp story? i think its been what a year since an update? i really hope you do. your an amazing writer x

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it's been 6 months. please please update. you're an amazing writer and i would love to read more. :)

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AMAZING! Waiting for the next chapter :D

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please update! Please, please, please...

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please please please!write fast this story was amazing!

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NAW! I WANT MORE! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

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