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Review #26, by SlytherClawx Preface

11th September 2009:
This could be on the way to something good!
I didn't read the original, so I wouldn't know about this at all!
I can't have Sirius being sad. It makes me sad xD.
Or Remus. Or James. I like them! They are coool!

Okay, looking forward to the update ^^


Author's Response: wow thanks. you will be pleased to know that i added the next chapter yesterday so look out for the next one soon.

i know how you feel - it kills me to make sirius sad!! x

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Review #27, by Lady Amalthia Preface

11th September 2009:
I am confused who is the Fairy God Mother? I feel bad that Jenifer hurt Sirius's feelings but I have a feeling she will be sorted into Gryffindor, then she can try to expain herself. But I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Jenifer will be able to make people's wishes come true except her own. The first part of the story was meant to be from the future and then the 1st September goes back in time to tell how she got there. it will probably make sense in future chapters.

Thanks for your review x

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Review #28, by Liisarr Preface

4th September 2009:
I liked it, but I don't really think eleven year olds would be that hung up on boyfriends/girlfriends. They'd probably have only just got over the stage of thinking the opposite sex was gross.

Just a thought! ;)

Author's Response: Ye i know. I've decided to change it. The edited version should be up soon

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Review #29, by Rachel Preface

9th July 2009:
That was really good! I think I am going to keep reading this story. I haven't read the other reviews and I don't know whether or not they have mentioned it but I have one suggestion: Occasionally you switch to 1st person while you're on 3rd. Everything else was pretty much good though! I'd just watch out for that. :)

Author's Response: oh okay lol x than\\\'q for your comment i appreciate it x

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Review #30, by poopiness Preface

27th June 2009:
Oh, this is a great start! Can't wait till the next update! C:

Author's Response: than'q it means a lot and congrats on being the first review. i've sent the next chapter so it should be on soon x

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