Bless Dan... and kyle and drew reacted like anyone would, i think they'll come around in time Report Review
You were right, i totally went, "oh my god." And it is pretty much Evies fault because if she would of just LET IT GO then James wouldn't have gotten that angry and shouted that out. And know one outside of the Wotters knew about Charisma, right? Report Review
Okay a few things: 1) i freakin love Lily's character! 2)James is so dense sometimes... but that's obvious. and 3) i strongly dislike Evie and honestly don't know what James see's in her. oh and i like the story so far! Report Review
Jesus I'm dying right now! I'm laughing every five seconds and my dad keeps telling me to shut up! I love Teddy, he's awesome! Lily cracks me up and Fred and Drew are just hilarious. I'm gonna die laughing eventually. Thank you for making me smile :) xxxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you're enjoying this! :) I love writing Teddy's character, he has a brilliant characterisation for me to play with!
Anytime! Thank you for reading! I hope you enjoy the rest! Report Review
I'm your 100th review for this chapter! Eeeks, that makes me happy, I have to admit.
So... So... Charisma never found out what she was like under a full moon? I kind of thought that would have been funny.
Ah, that makes me sound sick doesn't it?
But oh well, brilliant story! Yay! I loved it, truly truly did.
x xAuthor's Response: 100! Woah, thankyou so much! I never expected to get anywhere near this amount of reviews, so I'm very grateful for you to leave this one! :)
Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed this story.
As for Charisma not finding out what she does, I don't think you're sick for thinking; I actually did write a scene in to one of the earlier chapters where she did find out, but I decided against putting it in; it didn't really fit Charisma's character to want to know :) But thank you again! Report Review
This was truly a LOVELY read. Seriously. A lot better than most of the second gen fics floating around here.
Congrats. Off to the sequel! :)Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm really pleased that you enjoyed this! I really loved writing it, and I tried to make it different to anything else out there :)
Thank you again! I hope you enjoy the sequel! Report Review
As i told you before, this is my second time reading this story, because I absolutely LOVE it! I think that it's actually one of my favourite fanfics of all time! Thank you SO MUCH for posting it! You made me so happy by putting it up (:
~kaleidoscope_eyes Author's Response: Hiya! Thank you for the review! :)
Thank you very much! I'm really flattered that you enjoy it that much, you're very sweet! It was my pleasure; I loved writing this story! Report Review
I love your story... we what I've read so far. the only thing I don't like in this chapter is that she said she kinda blamed teddy :(Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you liked this chapter! Everything will work itself out, just you wait :) Report Review
omg whats the sequel callled? please tell meAuthor's Response: the sequel to this is called 'Seven', thank you for the review! Report Review
I absolutely LOVE your story! I've already read it before, but it's awesome, so i decided to read it again (: And don't worry, this chapter isn't at all confusing with the changes of POV, unlike some others i've read. Good work!
-kaleidoscope_eyesAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you've enjoyed this as much as you have! :)
You've read it before, and you came back again?! Thank you! I'm grinning like a bit of an idiot now :D Report Review
Hey, I love your plot so far! And don't sweat the stuff about spelling in grammer, I get it to with my story. Plus I'm way to lazy to go and change it. Haha, :) Anyways, great start and looking forward to reading more! 10/10
-Raven claw witchAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! I'm so glad that you're liking it so far!
My spelling is something to laugh at, honestly :D but I'm glad to know that someone else has a similar problem - especially the lazy bit; once a chapter is up, I don't always have the time to edit the little mistakes :D
Thank you again, I hope that you like the rest! Report Review
Wow, I love the butterfly part. Is the secret that you need to be in love? I hope so...Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I really like the butterfly thing too, it's probably one of my favourite parts of this story. You'll have to wait and see I'm afraid :D Report Review
Omg! Leapfrog with unicorns! That's from the rejection hotlinE isn't it! HaahahahahahhHahah! Love the story! Thanks!
-FawkesAuthor's Response: thank you for the review! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story :)
I'm not actually too sure where I got that line from, but I don't know what rejection hotline is :D I am not off to google it ...
Anyway, thank you again! Report Review
YOU TOOK AWAY THEM HAVING A PIGGYBACK RACE?!!
That was a really good part:(
But other than that FAB!!!Author's Response: thank you for the review!
Yeah, I'm afraid I did, when I read it back, I simply didn't feel it would have fit with the re-write I did a while back. I'm sorry if it's upset you! But thank you for the review, and I'm glad that you're still enjoying it! :) Report Review
I cried when drew gave her the hat
I love drew he was always there for her and he loved her and then he just left, he couldn't deal with it, I genuinely sobbed D':Author's Response: Really? :) That makes me feel very accomplished as an author! But don't cry! It will all work out!
Thank you so much for this review! I hope that you like the rest! Report Review
I love how you write Magonigal. It makes me laugh and I love it. Great chapter and a very creative story line. I can't wait to keep readingAuthor's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that you like her!
I hope you enjoy the rest! :) Report Review
Your story is seriously so addicting! It's the best I've read in a while!! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really flattered! :D I hope you enjoy the rest! Report Review
I know you've finished your story now and I really do love it. I think if I could choose any name for Charisma it would be Adelaide which means kind and noble and I think it's a pretty name. Dixie's bit was alright but fairly uneventful which caused me to skim the majority of her part. But anyway I'm loving the story and I've read this far in only one day :)Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm really glad that you've loved this story, you're very sweet!
That's a pretty name, I hadn't thought of that! :D
It's okay :) Dixie isn't for everyone. Thank you again, and I hope you enjoy the rest! Report Review
yes. Totally thought of Gilmore girls. And as for the question--James, Evie, and uh James.Author's Response: Thank you for the review! :) I do love a bit of Gilmore Girls! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Report Review
James is a Prick, Charisma's a push over but that's what makes this story. Good job! :)Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story! :) Report Review
i love the concept, and so far so good! can't wait to see how the story unfolds.
p.s. thanks for the cuba reference! i'm part cuban and i never get to see it mentioned.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you're enjoying it, and I hope you like the rest!
Yay, Cuba! :D thank you again! Report Review
I really love this story. It makes me love the Wotters even more. It's so sad that it has to end. I am now reading the sequel and I was wondering if there is a possibility of you writing a new sequel but in Charisma's POV. I fell in love with Charisma and James and I want to know what happens to them in the future.
Btw, you're a really great author. Keep on writing. I'm looking forward to more of your stories!Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I hope that you enjoy the sequel, and I am very glad that you have enjoyed Wolfsbane.
I'm afraid not, no; this is where Charisma's POV ends. But their future is how you wish it to be, and a little of it is mentioned at the end of the sequel :)
Thank you again for the review! Report Review
I know that the story is already finnished so I can't give you criticing but that made me bawl my eyes outAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review! I hope that the crying wasn't because of something bad :/ Report Review
wow... didnt see that one coming..Author's Response: I live to surprise ;) Thank you for the review; I hope you enjoy the rest! Report Review
Omg! Im gonna effing cry! im sso sad when a chapter is over but when a gd story end i have to just effing cry! CRY!!Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so pleased that you've enjoyed this story! :) Report Review
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