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Review #26, by AlexFan July, 2029 - Someday Soon

26th October 2012:
That was great Nicholas is so completely happy. I can't believe he made a bet with his dad about Priscilla getting married.

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Review #27, by Rupertlover July, 2029 - Someday Soon

26th October 2012:
Aww yay I loved this! I'm glad she finally told him she is pregnant and they will get married !
Please update soon !

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Review #28, by Mazz June, 2029 - Bits and Bobs

20th October 2012:
oooh oooh ooh what happened to cora is she still as crazy as before??

Author's Response: I hadn't planned on mentioning her but since you asked, I'll write in a special appearance for her somewhere along the line! Thanks for reading!

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Review #29, by Rumbleroar goes roar June, 2029 - Bits and Bobs

20th October 2012:
Aww really loved this chapter! You have such a great style of writing! Aww I love Lucy :) And Desmond and Nikita sounds like fun! Can't wait to read more :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy that you liked Lucy all settled down, haha :) I was happy with her future too! And they definitely are loads of fun! Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #30, by bester_jester June, 2029 - Bits and Bobs

20th October 2012:
Hey! Just spent a lot of yesterday reading Bathing in Roses - it was lovely.

June was, at times, dumb. But you managed to balance it out perfectly with her moments of insight. I especially loved her determination to earn money by working. I also loved that, despite my hating Albus at the start, there was a moment when i sort of thought OH his behaviour makes complete sense.

I'm actually sad about reading the sequel! It really feels like a conclusion of sorts. So far it's been interesting. I never expected Patil to be a gold digger! Haha i hope their business works out.

Anyway i'm kind of rambling. Thanks for sharing so many amazing stories. I cant wait to read more!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I hope reading so much of it in one go was worth it!

She certainly was dumb. That was the angle I was going for. She was a parody of a lot of rom-com leads. And Albus was the typical chauvinist pig. Until both of them accidentally grew up and grew sympathetic.

It definitely is a conclusion of sorts but a good one I hope! And Nikita's not a gold digger by choice, more like by circumstance. You'll see how it works out as we go :)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!


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Review #31, by Carellio June, 2029 - Bits and Bobs

18th October 2012:
I'm do glad you are writing a sequel! I love the idea that you are writing from every characters point of view. I loved this chapter! I like how you brought patil back into it, and it would be cool to see another chapter with them because I'd love to see them together :)
Can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thank you! I almost didn't do a sequel but it was too tempting - I just had to write in their futures at least a little. This chapter covers the majority of their scenes together I'm afraid, but you'll see hints and bits of them together as we go. There's certainly a good mention of them in the epilogue.

I'm also not writing a chapter from every character's perspective. You'll definitely see all eight boys and girls, but Lucy, Henry and Duncan won't get their own chapters as they're all relatively settled down. They certainly make appearances and have things to say, though :) Priscilla and Nicholas share a chapter as do Albus and June.

I hope you stick around!


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Review #32, by Bea June, 2029 - Bits and Bobs

18th October 2012:
cute chapter! I'm liking the direction you're taking with the characters even if it's not what im expecting (which is a good thing) but it's a good decision. cant wait for albus and june! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to here there are some surprises! There'll be a few shocks and twists and turns but I hope that keeps the story interesting, haha :) Al and June will be up after Priscilla! Keep an eye out!

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Review #33, by AlexFan June, 2029 - Bits and Bobs

18th October 2012:
That was shocking, I didn't expect any of them to actually be married or with kids. I'm happy for Lucy anyway, I wish this story would get more notice but oh well, you can't have them all.

Author's Response: I actually almost didn't marry off but plenty of people get married in their early twenties. I definitely saw Lucy settling down soon in life and having a child so off she went :) Ah well, it's all fine and well as long as the readers who are reading are enjoying it!

Thanks for reviewing!


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Review #34, by krapfm Mid May, 2029 - The Friday Blues

14th October 2012:
The first chapter sounds very promising! :) I'm very much looking forward to the rest of the sequel. :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you find it promising and I hope you stick around for the next few chapters!

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Review #35, by AlexFan Mid May, 2029 - The Friday Blues

5th October 2012:
Oh my goodness, I just loved this. June/Albus FOREVER! Can't wait until your next chapter, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Ahaha, thank you :D I love when other people ship my characters as much as I do! I love them together! And thanks so much for reading!

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Review #36, by Rumbleroar goes roar Mid May, 2029 - The Friday Blues

3rd October 2012:
Aha loved it! Aww I really like the sound of what's to come! Interested to see the chapters focusing on the other characters, but I'm glad they'll be Albus/June ones too! Can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Albus/June remain the main characters, so there'll certainly be a spotlight on them! With that said, there'll be interlude chapters and other characters get their own limelight!

Thanks for reading!


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Review #37, by heart4siriusblack Mid May, 2029 - The Friday Blues

2nd October 2012:
Can't wait for more! Albus/June are a pairing I adore, so I'm glad I don't have to let them go just yet! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love that you like them together! I wasn't ready to let go of them just yet either so I hope you stick around for the next few chapters!

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Review #38, by Gobsmacked Mid May, 2029 - The Friday Blues

1st October 2012:
Yay! Wasn't expecting a sequel so it's a wonderful surprise to have one!! But omg, there better be a wedding in one of those chapters!!! Can't wait for next week!! Are Nick and Priscilla still together o.o?

Author's Response: A wedding? Whose? ;)

You'll find out! Priscilla's having problems of her own right now and they are definitely due to a bloke in her life!

Thanks for reading!


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Review #39, by Amy Mid May, 2029 - The Friday Blues

1st October 2012:
Aaw! I loved Bathing in Roses! This is gonna be so cute! I love it already :)

Author's Response: Yay! First reviewer! And thank you! I'm glad you're sticking through with the characters and I hope you like the next few chapters too!

Celeste


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