I can respect Nubia but still, Fred is not going to hurt her! I hope she figures it out soon :)

I still love this and can't wait for an update!!

Author's Response: Ah, we don't know that for sure! Freddy's not exactly the most mature fellow. :)

Thanks so much for the continuous support, still_fly! I really appreciate it! ^__^

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Okay, I like Nubia a lot more now. I can understand why she turned down Freddy, and while I don't like that she did, I could see why she would. If that makes sense. Ha. (:

YES! Vic's getting married! I love it, it's so sweet and cute and... aww. (I, er, may be a sucker for the T/V ship. Ahem.)

I like Vic's friends. They're distinct, and they're all really likeable. They're realistic, even after only a chapter.

Hoping to see the dinner next. *That* should be fun. (;

Loved it. :D
-Jasmine

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Yay update! And a long one too!

Aw, poor Nubia. She must feel awful. I really like how she's Egyptian! That's so exotic, and without being cliche, too. And yay! Teddy finally propose! Took him long enough, eh? And aw, things really are going to change. Poor Nicky. But at least she's got Scorpius to cheer her up. Which by the way, I loved the Scorminique action going on. They really are such an adorable couple! I can't wait to read dinner with the 'rents. That should be really interesting.

As for the friends, I absolutely adore them! They seem rather fun, and I'd love to read more of them.

Awesome chapter, and I can't wait for your next update!
-Camila (:

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I don't think any less of Nubia because of why she told Freddy no. I think it's terribly sad, actually, and I pity her because of the ordeal she went through. It makes sense that she would be scared.

As for Victoire's friends, they came off all right, I suppose? We really don't know much about them as of yet, so I can't really say. Most of them, I thought, seemed immature for their age, but some girls are really like that.

Claire seems amusing, though, and I do like that she teases Louis.

I really think I'm shipping Claire/Louis now which is ridiculous as she simply teased him, but I'm liking her already, and I don't know if I'll actually like Lisette.

Yay, for more upcoming Nicky/Scorpius moments. I adore them. Ooo, and meeting Lisette. Hmm, somehow I think her entrance will spell out drama.

Your characterizations, as per usual, were all charming. I absolutely love how nervous and anxious Scorpius is. That's the most adorable thing in the world.

I also adore Dom feeling insecure around Nubia and her sisters. You rarely read a story where Victoire or Dom feel that way, and it was a refreshing change.

& Teddy finally proposed to Victorie! How nice! Though, in Victoire's defense six years is a long time. >_< I don't know if I could be that patient. Yes, I know when you love someone that one must be, but I don't know if I could wait quite that long. I have known girls that have, though.

So all this really did seem quite realistic.

Your descriptions were to die for. I think these were my favorites: Eyes as blue as rainwater…that was the best part of rainwater…how it seemed to make all the flowers even more beautiful…, My laughter was made to sing alongside hers., & I could see the vast landscape of the sky – now an ink-black - patched and swathed in turns where stars pierced the sheen of the water. The ground was specked with puddles, and I could almost feel my boots sinking into the soft mud at the sight of them. Yet it was all lovely.

Wonderful job, as usual!

♥
Linders

Author's Response: Oh, Linders, as usual, you're extremely lovely! =D

Yes, I thought that'd be quite the interesting twist for Nubia, who seems so self-confident, to take. I really do feel bad for her as well, but hopefully, Freddy'd be able to straighten all that out! ;-]

I'm glad they're alright so far! They didn't get too much of a role (yet), but Keira, Claire, and Valentina all play influential roles for Victoire. Valentina and Keira are slightly immature, but Claire is definitely on the more mature side.

Oh, I've never even pondered Claire/Louis! Now there's an interesting theory!

Yes! And Teddy proposed! :) Definitely the most exciting part of the chapter, I think, and the issue's really kept Vic on nerves for a while now. I'm glad to know it seemed realistic - Vic's the patient type.

Thanks so much, Linders! Your support means more to me than you know! :D

- Celeste


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Aw, this was cute. (: I love this story, it's so... *sigh* (:

Oh, no! Nubia said no. Aw. :/ But she wants to talk to Dom- I mean, Nicky? Hmm. (:

Scorpius is adorable. The Flutterby is adorable. I loved their kiss, so sweet and... adorable... (:

I loved the description, especially the bit about peaches and cream. (: It was so... fitting, and so sweet.

Loved it, as always. (:
-Jasmine

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Loved this chapter.

The characters and your characterizations of them are fabulous. I absolutely love Louis, Dom, and Scorpius. I do want to punch Hugo, though, I think he might actually be more annoying than Freddy; at least, at this point.

I really adored the beginning with Fleur forcing a jumper over Louis' head because that seems such a Fleur thing to do. She is so motherly and such a worrywart, that it doesn't at all seem too far fetched.

It's adorable that she's still held onto her accent.

I loved the scene where Scorpius and Dom kissed. It was so adorable and sweet. Not to mention he initiated it, and not her. So that was lovely.

I had to admit that I was grinning at Victoire's discomfort, too. I know that I shouldn't have been, but I found it amusing. Poor Vic.

As far as Freddy and Nubia go, I'm sad. I wanted them to be together. Alas, I'm sure she has some logical reason for rejecting him.

As always, your descriptions are top notch and beautiful. This continues to become even more magnificent with each chapter.

Lovely job!

♥
Linders

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CELESTE! HOW LONG HAS IT BEEN?
But anyways, it's time that I review something of yours, huh?
What I like the best about your writing, as of this new, less description-based style, is that you build amazing characterization. Every character is really different, dealing with their own dilemmas and it's really interesting seeing how they interact with each other. The conversations/dialogue between the characters is also written really realistically. And btw, the 'loud' situation with Teddy/Vic is actually really hilarious! Though, it's odd seeing you write so much first person, but you can really pull it off well! The internal conflict in Dom in regards to telling Nubia about Freddy was brilliant :D

Anyhow, this chapter I especially enjoyed. A lot happened and you know we all love lengthy chapters! It's great seeing you experiment with different kinds of plotlines and twisting and creating a completely different Dominique and crowd from the one in TSOS. (though, I'd love to read more about THAT dom as well)

Cheers, and keep writing! (don't be a fickle writer like I am who walks out on her stories randomly)

Love,
Jasaline

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That was so sweet. I mean, the kiss was so sweet. I don't know, I kind of expecting it to come out soon, yet it still surprised me when it happened. But then, Fred and Nubia happened. Hmm, I wonder what was wrong?

Thanks for the update :)

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :D You'll find out soon what went wrong with Freddy and Nubia! :-]

Thanks so much for reviewing!

- Celeste

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Aw man, why did Nubia turn him down!?
You gotta update soon so I can find out!
But I adored the display between Dom and Scorpius!!
Plus your writing is, like, my favorite style ever! You're an extremely fabulous writer!
Good chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah, Nubia did turn down Freddy! It's a bit of a twist there, so I hope you like how it turns out to be! :D

Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked it! ^___^

- Celeste

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Gah, your stories always leave me feeling all cozy inside! I know I've said this before, but I can't get over how lovely your writing style is. It's so delicate and sweet, and poetic, and just pretty. I liked reading the family dinner scene - exactly how I pictured them to be. And yay! Scorpius kissed Dominique! I have officially fallen in love with that pairing, much thanks to you! Lovely chapter, and I can't wait to read the next one!
-Camila :)

Author's Response: Aww, thank you for the compliment! I have a few authors who wield the same effect on me, so it's lovely to hear that! :D I'm glad you think the family chemistry is alright - definitely had a bit of trouble straightening out the characterizations. (The Bill and Victoire scene gave me the most trouble in particular, so it's good to know it worked out.)

Yeah, Scorpius did kiss Nicky! Whooo! :D Haha, I hope that means you'll be writing that pairing someday, then! I have my hopes up! XD

Thanks so much for reviewing, Camila!

- Celeste

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I love this story, I really do. Louis sounds so adorable, I can't believe that someone would just leave him like that. Anyways, this was a great chapter even if Scorpius really wasn't in it. I still can't get over how amazing you're writing is, and I'm looking forward to see what happens next. So update soon, please? Keep up the fantastic work!
-Camila :)

Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much! I really am surprised with the reception Louis's been getting, considering he has been acting a tad grumpy in this chapter. I will say though that once people find out why Lisette chucked Louis, they may be a bit more favorable of her than him. I'm already 3/4th through the next chapter, so I'll definitely be updating soon!

Thanks so much for all the reviews, Camila! I really appreciate it! :D

- Celeste

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Haha, Freddy's such a horribly annoying boss. Must be a nightmare working for him, lol. Nubia sounds promising, as does a future relationship between her and Freddy. I enjoyed the date with Scorpius, it was very sweet. I also like how Victoire and Dominique actually get along in this story. It's rather refreshing. Onto the next chapter!
-Camila :)

Author's Response: He kind of is and he kind of isn't. He is a bit annoying, but he did give Nicky a job, she can't complain. ;) I'm so glad you like the Dominique/Scorpius bit of it! ^___^ And I'm really enjoying writing Victoire and Dominique getting along well.

Thanks so much for the review, Camila!
- Celeste

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Aw, I'm really falling in love with your Scorpius. I like this happier and softer side to him, that I don't usually see. Your characters and writing have such a delicacy to them - I love it. Poor Dominique, she always tends to be the forgotten one, doesn't she? Anyways, I'm off to read more!
-Camila :)

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I gotta hand it to you, you're pretty amazing when it comes to Scorminique. Granted, you're an amazing writer in general, but this and TSOS are definitely my favorites. They're both very different from each other, which is good because it means that you're versitile. I can still distinguish your lovely style, without feeling like it's repetative. So congratulations for being such a talented writer! I'm off to read what I'm sure will be a great chapter!
-Camila :)

Author's Response: Okay, first off my response is unforgivable late.

But regardless, I love this sweet review :D Thank you so very much! It's been a few months since I've updated, but I promise to update as soon as the queue reopens! Thank you very much, Camila!

- Celeste

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Hello again!

Ahh filler or not I enjoyed this chapter. Yes, I may be having Scorpius withdrawl, but it's okay because now Nubia knows!

Also, I think you were more descriptive in this chapter - I see hints of your more descriptive style of writing coming through. It was a lovely balance of beautiful poetic description and plot development. Even when your not describing things beautifully as you have a talent for doing, you seem to be able to phrase things so wonderfully.

I was a bit suprised by Al's character. You probably mentioned it in one of the earlier chapters, but I didn't realize he felt that way about the Malfoys. Well, I suppose he IS a Potter haha ;) The thing that was odd about that conversation was that Al knew Scorp was one of Freddy's best friends, but he was being rude about him right in front of Freddy. So that was a bit odd. But other than that I still like Al's fierce personality. It also showed how awkward and estranged Victoire is from her family. Each chapter I fall more and more in love with Freddy, he's such an idiot, but such a loveable idiot! I love his melodramatics.

The introduction of Louis was interesting, but I have to say he came across as a bit unfriendly in this chapter. I know he's just hurting, but his mood seemed to change a lot.

Urgh at Teddy and Victoire - it's so funny and so horrible. I love that you've added that in. It seems so real.

There are so many unique touches to that fic that I would have never have dreamed off. The whole Weasley family is so believable and the characters all have their own little personal biographies. I love the small touches like you mentioned the infamous Weasley blind dates ;) Haha, what a fleur/molly thing to do.

The plot seems to be developing at a lovely, even pace and you've still got me hooked. I can't WAIT to read the next update, not that I'm pressuring you to write or anything! *Hypnotizes* Do it now, do it now! *Hypnotism over*

Thank you for posting!
~ Helena

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Celeste! I much enjoyed this chapter, as always.
Ohhh the awkwardness. So much fun to read. I was kind of cringing along with them. I'm also smiling like a fool the whole time as I read this fic, it's probably not normal but who cares? Ack, and the way you describe Scorpius is so lovely. Honestly, I worship you for writing Scorp/Dominique. You are a gift from the gods of amazing-romance-writing ;)

I loved Victoire's characterization in this, how she was getting carried away and acting all knowing about Dom and Scorpius. She seemed very older sisterly and kind of reminded me of both Fleur and Molly Weasley (the first!).

Also I love Freddy and Dominique's relationship ;) Freddy is always bossy and complaining, but Dom knows how to control him and they are family and love each other after all. It's a really good idea and adds a lot to the story. I like that she's not just working at any old bookshop, but she's working with Fred.

The description of the scenes was really lovely. A vivid moment for me was:

The bell above the door tinkled lightly as somebody entered. He pulled off his hat and his blond hair shone like the sunlight that was not there. He smiled at Freddy, but began walking towards me.

I could see that so clearly. Swoon! Scorpius is blatantly a fictional babe ;) But that moment reminded me of an old romance film or something along the likes of that.

Aww, the embaressment at apparating was so unbearably cute, I love how awkward you made this. It was so realistic. They were getting embaressed over the little things that you would.

The jealous waitresses were funny ;) And we learnt a bit more about Scor.

It was a great first outing, I love how shy/awkward Scorpius can be with Dominique. I love your characterizations of them in this story.

Oh and as for Fred/Nubia... I don't know what will happen there! Kind of reminds me of when Ron used to fancy Fleur. I think Nubia and Freddy would be funny though, I can see them suiting. :D

I noticed one typo and that is all - “We’re we going?” Probably should have been where? But I really don't think that is worth editing the chapter for. So I have no idea what I'm pointing it out for... maybe not be a party pooper but to be complimentary as I only noticed one mistake? Yeah, that sounds like a safe option! :P

I'm going to scamper off to chapter four now, thank you for writing and updating! You have no idea how much I adore this story. Keep up the wonderful work! (Or else, Dun DUN DUN!) ;)

10/10

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Err, I hope Nubia likes Fred as well. I really want to have her around instead of return to Egypt. I also personally think that Lisette was actually trying to make Louis jealous, but who knows? :)
Thanks for the update! :D

Author's Response: Well, regardless of how Nubia feels about Freddy, I assure you that she won't be heading back to Egypt any time soon. She's definitely here to stay. :) As for Lisette, you'll find out more about her in the coming chapter. ^___^

Thanks for reviewing! I really appreciate it! :D

- Celeste

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Wow, I really liked this chapter.

It cracked me up in the beginning considering Al and how he ate all that food. It sort-of reminded me of Ron and his constant hunger. I think to be a Weasley male, you have to eat a lot.

Ha ha!

As for Louis, I really adored him. He seems like an interesting person. I pity him and his situation with Lisette.

Your characterizations were brilliant. I loved everyone including Victoire. Though, admittedly in this story I think Freddy, Dom, and Louis are my favorites.

Nubia being flustered was incredibly cute. One would think that someone as confident as that, might never get flustered. It was cuter still that Dominique was upset about being intimidated by Nubia. Though, I can see why that was possible.

I can't wait to see how the relationship between Nubia and Freddy progresses.

The ending was adorable, too. Ah, hopefully she gets to survive to see Saturday then.

Lovely job, as per usual!

♥
Linders

Author's Response: Thanks so much, Linders! :D

Yes, Al is definitely Ron-like in that sense (and a few others - he's a bit insensitive and loudmouthed).

I'm really surprised with the reception that Louis's getting! Everyone seems to like him, while I was the only one thinking he was a bit annoying. XD The whole Louis/Lisette situation will enlarge itself later on.

Aw, thanks so much! ^_^ Glad you like Victoire this time! ;) Nicky and Freddy are my favorites. Nubia was definitely flustered - one can't always keep their cool. And Nicky was getting annoyed with herself for being intimidated, but who wouldn't be?

Freddy/Nubia, I'll say honestly, is one of my favorite ships of this whole story. Nubia may be my favorite OC. XD

Thanks so much, Linders! I, as always, adore your reviews!

- Celeste




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So Nubia knows. Hmm.

Since I am a hopeless romantic, I'm going to take her not running away as a sign that she likes him.

All I'm going to say about the Teddy and Victoire situation is ew. Poor Louis, and poor Dom. :P

Aww, Scorpius is so cute. (: I like how she got his letter right after Freddy's, and how he was all rambly and she just said "Yes." (:

This was cute and I loved it. (:
-Jasmine

Author's Response: Indeed she knows! ;)

And who knows, perhaps she does fancy that idiot after all!

Yup, poor Nicky and Louis. I'd be forever traumatized if I was them. Unfortunately for them, Victoire's not exactly empathetic about it all. XD

Aww, thanks so much, Jasmine! ^__^ I really appreciate you reviewing me so much! =D

- Celeste

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I really enjoyed it! I don't see why Dom's feeling so guilty when Nubia clearly likes Freddy too. I like Louis' personality. He made me laugh. Loved the chapter and update as soon as possible please!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) Nicky hasn't realized that Nubia fancies Freddy back, which is why she feels so guilty. The reader realizes it, but not her. And I'm so glad you liked Louis (even if he was brooding a rather lot)! Thanks again! ^_^

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Awww. (: The awkwardness, once more, is absolutely adorable. (: I love Scorpius in your story. I like how it's obvious his family isn't crazy Death Eater-ly; I think Draco would have changed, and it seems like you agree. (: Although now I'm wondering, what did Narcissa want to name him? (;

I liked it a lot. It flowed really well, and the story seems natural, as does their romance. I'm still interested to see how Molly takes this all, however.

I love Freddy. XD I don't know why I like him so much, but I really, really do. I hope he and Nubia work out; I think it'd be great for him to get some happiness. (:

Great chapter, great story, great author. (:
-Jasmine

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Aw, Lorcan is so cute. (: I loved how you mentioned that he asked her to marry him, it was sufficiently adorable.

Oh, wow. So Molly's got feelings for Scorpius? That's not good, not if Dom wants to be a part of the group...

And I have a quick question. Is Nicky a common nickname for Dominique? I don't really read much Next-Gen, I'll admit, but I've never seen her called that. I was just wondering. (:

I loved it. So much. And yaay! The date is going to happen soon-ish!
-Jasmine

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Soo because I've just finished Autumn's Sonatas and I was really sad it's over, I've decided that I'm going to read most of your other stories. ;P I hope you don't mind. (:

I really like the style of this one. (: It's a lot different from TSOS, you're right, but I think you could make any type of writing work. (: It's fantastic.

I loved when Scorpius asked her out; it was very realistic, you could feel the awkwardness and it was just... adorable. (: And how she kept threatening Freddy with Roxanne was priceless.

(: Another winning story. Now on to chapter two!
-Jasmine

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Before I begin, I did notice an error: “We’re we going?” - I do believe that you mean, "Where're we going?" Otherwise, that question doesn't quite make much sense.

Otherwise, I didn't catch any blatantly obvious spelling, grammar, or syntax errors.

As always, the description in this is lovely. I really loved any extra poetic thing that you threw in there as it seemed to tie this in nicely together.

As far as your characterizations go, they were awesome. I love Victoire. She amused me. She is really quite motherly, isn't she? I also loved Dom, Scorp, and Nubia. She seems like quite the fun character. Freddy kind-of got on my nerves in this chapter, but maybe he'll get better in the next. xP

As far as Freddy/Nubia, I think that would be awesome. I love her already, and it would certainly be original. Few people include someone that is part Egyptian. Especially not as a love interest, so I say, go for it!

Where the Scorp/Nicky meeting is concerned, I found it quite adorable. I thought it was realistic. The envy, the situation, the girls. I hate how catty some girls get especially when it comes to boys. I've never been a girl that liked drama so I can understand how Nicky feels.

Great job!

♥
Linders

Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much for pointing that out! Sadly the queue's closed, so I have to wait a bit before I can edit it. X_X

Thank you! :) I'm glad you're liking it so far!

Victoire is superbly motherly, which annoys Nicky to no end. I figured that since she'd be the oldest of the Weasley brood, she'd probably had a lot of practice. Freddy gets on everyone's nerves, including Nicky's. xD He's the immature friend/cousin that almost everyone has. He annoys Nicky, but he does behave later on. ^_^

Yay! I'm glad Nubia's coming across okay! She's definitely going to be loads of fun to write!

Nicky's quite placid too in that she avoids unnecessary conflict. But she did get a bit possessive, which'll show more in the long run. ;-)

Thanks so much for reviewing, Linders! I really appreciate it! :D

- Celeste

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Ohh, it's so cliche! The waitresses are jealous but he's so infatuated with Dom. I love it! I can't wait to see how this plays out with Molly and whatnot. Update as soon as the queue re-opens!

10/10

Author's Response: Haha, cliche? There's a first time for everything, I suppose! But I do hope it's a good kind of cliche - Scor's kind of charming and he frequents that place a lot, so he has a lot of admirers (to Nicky's ire). He's not quite infatuated with Nicky, but that'll come! ^__^

Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm so pleased you liked it! :D

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