That was a damn good plan! Now if only he hadn't caught the snitch...

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~Marcia

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haha! i loved this chapter !
and poor girls sometimes i don't think they will ever get their revenge.
Scorpius is too good :P

and i'm glad i'm not the only one who is having problems with posting new chapters !

but i hope there will be one out soon !

Author's Response: Poor girls is right...they're going to have to try something new next chapter. My real life is very busy, but I'm trying to write!! I think everyone's life gets in the way sometimes. Thanks for reviewing!!! ;)

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I love this story so far! By the way, who do you have on your banner as scorpious?
... I know random question haha.
Update sooon? Pretty please?

Author's Response: Scorpius is an actor named Alex Pettyfer. Pretty, isn't he? :D I'll definitely try to update soon!! I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing!!

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George's letter at the beginning didn't mean much good already... well, lots of good for Rose, of course, but... you get what I mean, I'm sure.
It's a good thing that Scorpius thought that the girls were only distant because of what happened in Hogsmeade. I don't know what he'd do if he found out they knew he was seeing all three of them.
It's interesting to see that the girls are watching the game together - of course, they all want to see Scorpius go down, but what if he sees them all together?
The effect of the potion was hilarious. Scorpius wailing and crying like a baby was very funny to read. It's really too bad that the Ravenclaws didn't take advantage of that and didn't catch the Snitch while Scorpius was acting like a drama queen. Of course, it has to be funny to hear what he's saying, but it would be even better if they'd win, don't you think?
Flint really used a good tactic there, to make Scorpius play again. I mean, Scorpius caught the Snitch right afterwards! That really sucks :( But still, I'd like to see him recover from that public humiliation indeed!
Hopefully you'll update soon!

Author's Response: Oh, good old George. I know he'd never lose his sense of humor. You're right, the Ravenclaws should've taken advantage of Scorpius's, uh, temporary disability, but they were just too shocked. He is Scorpius Malfoy, after all. :P LOL I think you're the only one who wants him to recover, but unfortunately for the girls, he kind of did by winning the game. Thank you for the review!! I shall try to update asap.

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Phenomenal job!! I've been waiting for an update for like forever!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!!! There is another update up now as well, so enjoy ;)

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You haven't updated in so long, I almost forgot about this story, almost. I think the plot is coming along fantastically, and the only improvement needed is to update more often!

Author's Response: Oh, no! I promise I haven't forgotten, I've just been busy with a new job. Thank you for leaving a review, though, to remind me! I'll try to have the next chapter done within a month.

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hey
i love this chapter ! it's so funny ! :D
can't wait or the next one !

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!! I'm glad you think it's funny. ;)

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I love this! When does Lily come in? Can't wait for the next chappie!

Author's Response: Lily will come in pretty soon, just hold on tight!! Thanks for reviewing!! ;)

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Lol I love this story. Maybe cos I loved this movie so much, and since this is the Harry Potter version of it, I'm really addicted to it lol! Hope you update soon! xx

Author's Response: Thank you!! I really like this movie, too. ;)

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When i saw that this story update I literally yelled with joy.. hahah. Please updatee soon I love this storrry

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Great Job!

xoxo
~Marcia

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Great idea for a story! Unbelievable how Scorpius managed to have three girlfriends at the same time without them knowing... until, of course, that time in the bathroom. Which was also quite funny. That bathroom keeps changing their lives, doesn't it?
The ideas they came up with for revenge seemed like good ideas, and although Kerry's plan worked well at first, Scorpius did manage to come out relatively unscathed. Which is quite a pity ;) Is Scorpius going to figure out what the girls are doing (or, at least, trying to do)? Or will it take a long time before that happens? Either way, I can't wait for that!
Oh, and I hope that the plans Rose and Val came up with will work a little better than this one, but of course, Lily's not even in the story at this point so I'm guessing those plans won't work either?
Well, hope you'll update soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, it's pretty unlikely, but the girls are so different that they never really spoke to each other. You'll just have to wait and see whether the other revenge plans work out and whether Scorpius figures out what's going on, but you have a couple good guesses. ;)

Thanks for reviewing!!! I'll try to update soon.

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That was so funny! Unbelieveable! SO FUNNY! I wish I was there to witness that! *wink wink*

Author's Response: Me, too, definitely!! LOL. Thanks for reviewing!! ;)

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really enjoyed this chapter looking forward to the next

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hey :)
i loved this chapter !
i hope things worke out for them i mean this mess for the girls.
and i hope someone gets him or some other girl, maybe lily :P
love

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!! This mess is FAR from over for the girls and Scorpius. I may actually turn this into a novella or novel. And hmm, Lily? Whatever gave you that idea? ;P

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YAY!
This story is going great.

Cant wait for the update?
How long do u think it will take 4 it 2 b up?

Author's Response: I just put it in the queue, actually, so it'll be up in about a week I think. I'm so sorry for the delay!! But I'm glad you like it so far and thanks for reviewing.

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I am enjoying the story.
I picture it exactly like the movie.
Please keep describing their clothes and stuff...It helps to know which one is which.

Like Rose would be the one who was the HeadCheerleader in the movie all bossy and proud.

Valerie is the one who was in like every group and had all the technology stuff and wore really preppy pink clothes, like Valerie the Ravenclaw.

And my personal favorite in the movie the one who is sorta all hippy and major slut as in like a girl who would give it up easily...well that is Kerry.

hahah, great story.

:))

Author's Response: LOL you've got it right. Rose is the sassy, athletic girl. Valerie is the smart, preppy one. And Kerry is the hippie!! (She's my favorite, too.) She's all...free love. :D

Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it!!

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I love the idea of it being based on the movie.
That is one of my favorite movies...
I cant wait to see how this all plays out...

Author's Response: Awesome, I really like this movie, too. It's funny in that would-never-happen-in-real-life but still-fun-to-watch way. ;) Thanks for the reviews!!!

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Hmmm, well...not much to say..since it wasnt very eventful..I like how you use the word trickled instead of dropped makes ur writing much mre intersting

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Haha great chapter! Hope you'll update soon.
Would you mind leaving me a review as well? :)

Author's Response: Chapter 6 is ready to go. I just popped a brand new chapter image into Chapter 5, so it has to go through the queue, but after that I'll pop it right in. It shouldn't be long. ;)

And okay, sure, why not. You left me some great reviews!!

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Ohh how exciting ! Valerie is definitley my favourite. But I've got a feeling nobody will win Scorpious because they'll all start fighting or something.. Hehe anyway, I like the story so far!

Author's Response: Yay, some variety!! LOL, everyone (including me) liked Rose the best so I'm glad someone likes someone else best. ;)

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Hehe aw Scorpious.. he can really make a girl's heart melt. Poor Val! Fun idea for a plot, btw! I'm off to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Pshh, Scorpius has had lots of practice, don't forget. And yeah, I do feel sorry for the girls. Thank you for reading and reviewing!!

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:D I liked it! Very well written, funny, and it has Scorpius! :D

Author's Response: Whoo, Scorpius!!! Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it. ;)

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Oh he's in trouble!!! Please update soon this story made me laugh exspecially the old man part haha

Author's Response: LOL I know! Everybody's had that "old man" scenario happen to them at least once. Maybe it's a teacher or a little kid instead, but it's still butt awkward! Unless they're nice about it, like the old man is.

I should update soon!!! Thanks for reviewing!!

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Scorpius HAS TO CHOSE ROSE
not LILY
ROSE
ROSE
ROSE
why Lily anyways?
Rose's relationship with Scorpius is better anyways: they've been friends for a long time, their parents are arch-rivals (Harry got over his rivalry with Draco, pretty much)
AND ROSE IS TEN TIMES COOLER

Author's Response: LOL, so I'm glad you still like the way I wrote Rosie. Lucky for you, Lily doesn't pop up for another few chapters. But it's got to happen sometime. :( I hope you'll still read and enjoy this story, though!! Thanks so much for all the reviews!!! I appreciate it.

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