great start 4 the 1st chapter however i noticed u spelled wrong the elf's name. It's Kreacher and not Kreature. I hope i could help. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Thank you. I am sorry I spelled the elf's name wrong. I couldn't remember how it was spelled. I will post an update as soon as I can. Report Review
Interesting beginning. When I read a first chapter I always try to determine what the problem of the story will be. Your chapter felt like the climax (pun fully intended) of the story.
Your writing is good, and everyone seemed to be in character.Author's Response: Thank you. I had to get Harry and Ginny back together as soon as possible. Get ready to laugh when you read the second chapter. I hope you will continue to read the story. In fact, I hope all my readers will stay with me til the end. Report Review
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