i am completly enjoying ur story. really love it.
10/10

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I just want to say that I also knew from the moment you first introduced us to Adrain Hufflepuff that he was going to die. He was just to kind and noble to live.

I love this story!! and want to finish it quickly.

Keep up the great work

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm excited to see that you guessed; most other lovely reviewers have been really shocked about it! Please keep reading and I hope you enjoy it!

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Impressive, tells several tales in one, well thought out. Loved it

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was trying to go for a several strand story here, and evidently (because of all the lovely reviews) it worked! Thank you so much for reading and I hope you read my other fics!

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You are A-MA-ZING. Really. Wonderful. Lovely. This story is such a good Founders fic, you really put so much in here. It made me want to keep reading.

Honestly, I love it. You are a wonderful writer.

(If anything - just because I feel like I should give SOME criticism! - I'd let a beta run a quick spell and grammar check. You're spot on with the characters and plot, but I have noticed some small mistakes. No biggie!)

On with your next fic, now...

Author's Response: Thanks so much! My usual weakness for my stories is my characters, so I'm glad you like that aspect! I hope you keep reading my stories!


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I've seen this story many times but have passed over it simply because it is a founders era and I've always had a particularly hard time with that era but I'm glad that I have started it now as it really is interesting! I love the idea of him having to decide which lady he wishes to be with since they both end up having their babies on the same night. I felt slightly bad for Mikayla at the end when she is all alone with a brand new child but no husband to support her during this hard time. Your description in this was wonderful and i really enjoyed this look into their lives though i'm interested to see how this chapter will play a role in the lives of our founders! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~
Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I've always felt that Founders fics are so interesting as you can literally do anything you want with these characters, as only a limited amount of information is known about them. Thank you for reading, I hope you continue!

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I've been looking for a good founders story to get into and this is definitely it. I think you've done a wonderful job weaving this old wizarding world to match the original by J.K.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it! I found it quite hard to create this "old world" so I am glad you are enjoying it!

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I didn't review on the other chapter because the story twisted and turned but i have to say you have done a wonderful job with this story there are so many challenges and heartbreaks for the charcters i love it so much you are a gifted writer thank you so much for this experiance and thrill you've given me!! Keep writig and reading!! All the best for future stories Lauren x :)

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Great story. I have never read a founders story before or thought of writing one but this is amazing. Well done. Also as a fan of Merlin awesom use of Morgana and Gawain in the banner.

Author's Response: Hahaha! I love Merlin too! I thought I would use a picture of Morgana in her pre-psycho evil days though!

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I loved this chapter, im so happy poor salazar i hope someone will come along, so he can be happy too. Rowena and Godric forever;) x

Author's Response: Happiness for Salazar? I wished for it too, but...oh well. Keep reading! I'm glad you like Godric and Rowena, so many people say they don't!

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I found the story very good, for a founders story- i think they are the most diffcult to write, and read. I did eenjoy this story

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This chapter was really great, like a first showdown. And finally all the characters are at one place and met each other.
My favourite part was when Adrian and Helga met again. This was a really nice scene.
Well I look foreward to the rest of the story, I will defenetly read it, but now i have to sleep. I can´t believe I forgott about the story so long and I´m glad I "met" with it again so I can finish reading it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reviews! It was all carefully plotted to get them all in the same place, but its going to take some time for them to get there act together! I hope you keep reading!

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I´m glad you showed more of Helga. I love Hogwarts the House elf. I hope there will be more of him. And Helgas vision at the end was an interesting ending for the chapter.

Author's Response: I felt Helga got really neglected for Godric and Rowena, so I thought she had to get involved! I also find her the hardest character to write as she can sometimes be a bit of a "Mary Sue" but I hope she becomes more than that. 100th review!! Thank you so much!

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sad sad chapter. I loved Bess and Salazars love story. Having everything in one moment and loosing it in the next.
I think it was a great idea to include the locket as beeing a symbol of love and nothing like the thing it willl become later.

Author's Response: Thank you for this review! I wanted the locket to start out as something meaning love before becoming distorted beyond all recognition. This is not the end of Bess and Salazar, and I hope you keep reading!

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Heart breaking, beautiful, powerfully tragic. Very well written. It made me cry and that's not an easy thing to do.

I LOVE IT

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This chapter was all about conveying the pain that was felt, by all involved, about this situation. Please keep reading!

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wowww... this story had me hooked. its is AMAZING. i love the ending :)

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This was a really lovely chapter. This story feels really contemporary despite the setting, which I really like, because it makes it fun to read, and easier to connect to. 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: I wanted to give a flavour of the old setting, but keep it modern and relatable at the same time! Thank you so much for your wonderful reviews, I hope you keep reading!

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This story is incredible. The way you show their emotions, we get a sense of the characters' personalities that is so strong, it's hard to believe that this is only the first chapter. Your descriptions are wonderful, and flow really nicely with the rest of your story. I got sucked in right away, and am excited to see what happens as we are introduced to other characters. 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you keep reading, one of my main aims of this story was strong character development! Thanks again!

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“Look what we did Edward,” she gushed as she moved her hand gently towards him at which Edward took it with zeal, trying to give some of his life and energy to her in that simple intimate movement.

beautiful!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I wanted this chapter to convey the love they felt for each other!

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But, in those times especially, the father wouldn't be present at the birth.

Author's Response: True, but he would have waited patiently and acknowledged when his legitimate heir was born. Instead he followed his heart! I hope you keep reading!

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I was so looking forward to this. You have ended the whole thing so beautifully. All wrapped up so very neatly. Shame life doesn't work that way, isn't it!

A truly wonderful and inspirational story from beginning to end. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind reviews! I thought tha Salazar would be good in the end, and regret what monster he had unleashed, both the Basilisk and Marvolo. I was considering giving Guillaume and Helena redemption, but they both did not move on. Thank you so much for your review and I hope you read my other stories!

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You surprised me again.

A very sad, but oddly happy ending. They were both at peace when they died - even if it was only in their last moments.

I find myself feeling very sad for Marvolo... The madness is in him and it seems unlikely to let go - it will continue down through the generations... Anger, resentment and bitterness are very poor bedfellows.

This has been an amazing story. Well done and thanks so much for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! There is one more chapter coming when the founders truly "move on". Thank you very much, and I hope you stick around for the last chapter where all loose endings are tied up!

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in the last week i read this story from beginning to now and i can honestly say its brilliant. it ties together so brilliantly and i feel as if i know the founders as you described them from birth to now. Your writing is so brilliant i feel so attached to the characters. cant wait for the next two chapters im sure they'll be amazing. best founders story by far! when are the next chapters coming? i hope i wont have to wait very long...

Author's Response: I am nearly finished on the next chapter, I hope to upload it tonight! It's a Salazar and Helga chapter, and then the last chapter which is kind of an epilogue, is in the works and shouldn't be too long! Thank you for reading and I hope you finish it to the end!

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this story is brilliant!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Godric for not trusting Helga! And Bonne for stealing the letter.

Author's Response: Thank you! Please keep reading!

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I don't think it right or fair that Adrian was killed. Worse yet that you had Salazar kill him Awful of you!! Shame. Helga deserved better of you and Adrian too.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. My thoughts on Adrian was that something HUGE had to happen for Godric for not trusting Salazar anymore, and Salazar's love for Rowena has been building so much that he wants to impress her. And don't forget, something has happened to Helga that made this inevitable if you read carefully...I hope you keep reading!

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