Oh, this was so good!! It's definitely something that kids would think of. I love how this started off as James' mission to prove that Santa doesn't exist but turned into everybody elses mission to prove he does exist ^^
I'm guessing Santa and his wife were Harry & Ginny? I'll definitely be reading Mission II soon :D
-Sophia xAuthor's Response: Hi sophia!
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Yes, James was outnumbered here and the tides turned on him- poor kid. It makes me happy that he'll still believe though, and it makes him secretly happy that he was proven wrong- everyone wishes there really was a santa :)
Yes it was Harry & Ginny- poor Harry ;) Report Review
Ummm. I have a complaint. That was too cute! My roommate asked me what i was reading, i was saing "awww" really softly without realiseing it! Well done on the writing style, the humour (hugo smirking at his EPIC name. haha watermelon and fanta, ill never think of hugo the same way again!) was well placed, etc :)Author's Response: OMG! I love Hugo too! I think he's my favorite next generation character to write (along with young lily). Thank you so much for the review!
I'm glad you found it cute, as that was the original intent ;)
Don't scare your room mate too much lol! Report Review
I absolutely fell off my chair laughing when "santa" cursed and Lily was astonished! This story deserves a Dobby for "Most Funny"Author's Response: hi!
A Dobby? Aw! your so sweet!
The part when santa swears is my favorite part!
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That was one of the most adorable fics I've ever read! You did a great job of capturing how little kids act and speak. Mr. and Mrs. Claus were great. :) Awesome job!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. The kids were kind of hard to write dialogue for so I'm glad that worked out.
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aww this is so cute!! i think you got the parents roles pretty much perfect. your a good writer :) cant wait for the next one.Author's Response: thanks vee! you just made my morning ;) i'll be posting the next one soon. its already written up.
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This was cute! Great job. I loved it.Author's Response: hi. thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Report Review
Fluffily cute. I once did the same thing in first grade, but when I heard something in the middle of the night, it turned out to be my dad eating the cookies.
The next month, the tooth fairy was debunked as well.
Polyjuice. Smart idea. Poor Harry, bet Ginny was getting a kick out of that.Author's Response: poor you, it always sucks when you find out that your childhood fantasies are utter lies.
yeah, I've always imagined that Harry would be a henpecked husband.
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Hey now, why didn't you tell us which couple were the Claus'? I was thinking it was Ron because of the swearing, but you answered that question. Was it Harry and Ginny?Author's Response: yup! good guess, it was harry and ginny. i wanted ppl to guess for themselves but I tried to hint at it too.
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haha that's really cute. well written too :)Author's Response: thank you so much! I love reviews! you just made my day :) Report Review
I loved it!
It so cute and adorable! Definitely my favorite Xmas one-shot as of today.
I'm wondering who the Mrs and Mr Claus were.My guess, it was probably Harry and Ginny ^_~?
You did an awesome job! Thanks for posting it.
100/100Author's Response: yeah, it was harry and ginny- i kind of left it vague on purpose.
Thanx! I was definitely going for cute and adorable :)
and thanks for the lovely review. Report Review
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