hiyas, This story was GREAt. ANd i really like your support at the end, shows the work of a true IB student. lol. Report Review
This was pretty interresting, but I would
really like some more evidence that
Snape was at the Potter\'s house the night.
I mean, not everything that was in the movie
was in the book. Will you please r/r
my fics? Report Review
That was good!!! Report Review
It\'s overall pretty good. I think that James\'s death could have been a bit better elaborated, though. I\'m sure that if Voldemort was so bent on killing him that he would have put up a valiant fight with a DEATH EATER. Second, wouldn\'t Harry recognize the voice as Snape\'s? Third, in GoF, Voldemort tells Harry how his father put up a brave fight. Seeing how Snape was one of his Death Eaters, wouldn\'t he have known that it was Severus Snape and not James Potter he was fighting? Besides, James had defied him thrice, remember in OotP? You\'d think he would know who he was dueling with...But, your proof is pretty good, though...
Overall Rating: 7/10
:) Report Review
Hey Mrs. Severus Snape,
great fan fic! never really thought about it this way...
keep up the good work Report Review
I may not agree with you at all, but
I must give you points for noticing such subtle clues. Report Review
Thanks for reviewing...and I didn\'t elaborate James\' death because I wasn\'t focusing on that part...i just wanted to show the encounter with Lily...also about Harry not recognising Snape\'s voice, remember, he didn\'t recognise Dumbledore\'s voice on the Howler in OotP. But like i said, I just wrote down what I thought happened. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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