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Review #26, by rhi Prisoner

14th July 2014:
Yay! It makes me so happy that you haven't given up on this story. It is truly fantastic! Your development of Katarina is amazing, I love how she has become this reflection of anna's future, not sure who I feel more sorry for. Please keep it coming! :-)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for sticing with me even though I'm slow! There will always be more, promise. I'm glad you liked it, more soon :)

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Review #27, by Alyssa Prisoner

14th July 2014:
I loved this! The character development is seriously the best! I couldn't be happier with this chapter. I have been looking forward to a Katrina/Anna meeting for a long time. I saw the similarities between them as soon as you introduced Katrina (which is great writing/foreshadowing by the way). Anna is just so dedicated to Tom, which is terrible but also understandable. I can't wait for more! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!

Author's Response: Yay I'm glad you liked it and reviewed again! I'm working on the next one, it shouldn't be terribly long :) Thanks again.

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Review #28, by Alyssa Prisoner

14th July 2014:
I loved this! The character development is seriously the best! I couldn't be happier with this chapter. I have been looking forward to a Katrina/Anna meeting for a long time. I saw the similarities between them as soon as you introduced Katrina (which is great writing/foreshadowing by the way). Anna is just so dedicated to Tom, which is terrible but also understandable. I can't wait for more! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! PLEASE!

Author's Response: answered the other one :)

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Review #29, by Meleessuhh Prisoner

10th July 2014:
So I never read stories with tons of reviews because they get sloppy and take too long to read, but I have spend TWO (2!) days reading your fic because it has been absolutely intriguing from the start. I get tired of reading stories that Tom could have loved because it was literally impossible and you have nailed his character since the beginning. Your character development is amazing and your fluff/romance is done strategically (I have a hunch he knows Anne loves him so he's repulsed by it but kisses her to control her). I haven't even written these last two days because I couldn't stop reading! Haha. I also noticed that you started this in 2009 so I commend you for sticking to it and hope you don't take too long to update. I am super jealous at how phenomenal you are! You've been patient and have let the story flow effortlessly. I have one question though, how old is Anne now? I know she's telling the story from her memory so I'm guessing she's a lot older. At first I thought she could be dead since it started such a long time ago, but then Tom brought up the horcruxes I became pretty positive she made at least one--because death is one of the things she seems to fear. Anyways, amazing job!! Update soon :)

P.S. I think we might be the same age? I thought I saw you mention somewhere you graduated high school in 2011 haha.

Author's Response: Ahhh reviews like this seriously make me so happy! I'm thrilled you took the time to read my story (Don't worry, I took a HUGE break after the first chapter because I didn't think abyone would read the story. I'm slow, but not THAT slow!)
Anywhoo, thanks for noticing all the little things. Writing a character that can be as cruel as Tom is tough, but I think it's worth it to create an interesting story! Anne is indeed older, but I don't think I'm gonna share her ending just yet muwahahah
Thanks again for the review, I hope you keep giving me your feedback! More soon :) I'm 21 btw...too old for Harry Potter? I think not.

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Review #30, by shez Prisoner

9th July 2014:
It was kind of short but I loved this chapter. Katarina's conversation with Anne was both heartbreaking and insightful; I see her as the future version of Anne (and I think Anne is beginning to see that too). Even so, her infatuation with Tom is so strong that she'll do anything for him.

My last review was kind of lame and I didn't mention this but I love your Tom Riddle. He's exactly how envision a teenage Voldy to be. And I love your OC too, the slow and sneaky way you've developed her, as well as her 'descent into darkness' and the dark romance she sometimes shares with our favorite psychopath. I don't really review often, because I usually don't get hooked on stories, but I just wanted to tell you that your story (and imagination) is really vivid and just plain awesome.


Author's Response: ahh i know it was short sorry. I didn't wanna start another scene after that though haha. I'm really glad you took the effort to review my story so kindly, you have no idea how much it means! I'll do my best to get another one out soon, and I hope I can continue to entertain :)

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Review #31, by random person The Irish Exit

15th June 2014:
I confess that when I started reading this fic, I wasn't sure if I'd end up liking it - I was worried you'd end making Tom into some brooding bad boy that falls for the OC and is redeemed. I am, however, PLEASED and STUNNED at how impeccably you've managed to characterize him - he's creepy, violent, and yet there's something magnetic about him - like Anne I just can't get enough of him either haha. I really like your spin on the events happening that we already know (like how he got Nagini, killed his family, opened the chamber of secrets, etc). I seems to me that he's possessive of Anne, maybe not int he romantic sense, but in the she's-mine-back-away. Well there were a lot of pseudoromantic scenes - I think Tom's very well aware of her feelings him, in the context of manipulation, and then also, maybe a little curious himself. There was a really good scene a few chapters ago where he kisses her and then is surprised/horrified/angry at him for it, like he can't believe he was capable of doing such a thing, and I think he gets angry at himself (and her) a lot when he has these 'moments'. I commend you taking that sort liberty with such a (as we know) despicable character and making us - i dunno - root for him? pity him? fall for him? I know Rowling said Voldemort can't love, but it seems to me that he really has become attached to Anne ( again, maybe not in the romantic [though I want it to be haha] but because he knows that she simply would do anything for he trusts her? I hope I'm not misinterpretating.) Anyway, I can't wait to see what sort of end you have in store for us and what will become of Tom/Anne.

It's been a while since I've read and enjoyed fanfiction SO MUCH - and been so fascinated by a story and character. Most authors write fluff which is OK I guess but gets old fast. But I LOVE this sort of psychological horror stuff more and I'm so scared for Anne and what happens next. Sorry for the rambling. I hope you update really soon.

Author's Response: Omg you just made my day, possibly my week. Don't ever apologize for rambling hahah its reviews like this that make me so happy I write. Thanks so much for taking the time to write me, and I'm flattered. I hope you like the rest of the story, more soon! Be sure to let me know how I'm doing :)

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Review #32, by shez The Irish Exit

13th June 2014:
I'm not really sure what to say except that this is really good. I hope that you continue and I eagerly await an update :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the next one, shouldn't be too long now!

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Review #33, by Alyssa The Irish Exit

12th June 2014:
Hm.I don't know how I feel about the Malfoy situation. He seems like he genuinely likes Anna, but I have a prejudice against Malfoy's in general and just can't help but be wary of him. Malfoy would certainly be better for Anna, but I think she's in too deep with Tom for that (and tom is too possessive to share).I just don't think Anna will let herself get involved with Malfoy with Tom around. I think she has too much self preservation for that. Anyway-great chapter-I really can't wait for an update-please try and get the next chapter up as soon as you can!

Author's Response: thanks so much! It's true Malfoy is definitely an interesting and ambivalent situation, I wasn't even sure what his motives would be at first! More soon :) Thanks for reviewing, as always.

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Review #34, by Natasha The Irish Exit

9th June 2014:
fantastic chapter ! I loved every bit-- I will be sitting here faithfully waiting for the next ^^ xoxo

Author's Response: yayay thanks so much! More soon, promise :)

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Review #35, by Tanith The Irish Exit

1st June 2014:

I just wanted to let you know that I really, really like your story, I love how you portray the characters, the era, your plot and the great twists!
You are a great writer, there was no chapter I did not like so far (and you´ve written 36! wow!!)
Please keep on writing! :)


Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's knowing there are readers like you out there that keeps me writing :) More soon.

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Review #36, by Jen827 The Irish Exit

31st May 2014:
I don't mind waiting for updates as long as you keep 'em coming. 10/10

Author's Response: Hahah I will finish it, promise! I'll try not to take so long though. Thanks so much for reviewing, it keeps me motivated!

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Review #37, by FawkesFelicis The Irish Exit

26th May 2014:
I loved Anna's escape, your fight scenes are always very creative! It's also interesting to watch Tom start to notice Anna as more than a pawn...or does he? Great job as usual!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! More soon since it's summer and I have fewer distractions! haha thanks for sticking with me and always reviewing :)

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Review #38, by Rhi The Irish Exit

26th May 2014:
Oh my goodness you updated! Love it, Love it, Love it. Awesome chapter and I can't believe they have Katarina! Great twist that one, but how will they explain that if someone finds out? ;) Please don't take so long to update this time as I don't think I can stand the suspense!

Author's Response: Sorry to take so long, it means a lot that you've stuck with me so far! I'm glad you liked it, more sooner this time hopefully haha

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Review #39, by Savanna Hiding

16th May 2014:
Love this story. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Just submitted! Thanks for waiting :)

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Review #40, by Natasha Hiding

6th May 2014:
i love how your story really follows the original book series by JK. i was wondering what this mysterious potion was and through this chapter i've made the connection-- it's that potion that dumbledore drank in the cave when he and harry went to get the horcrux :o it makes so much sense now. the tom/anna dynamic is so well written. please please PLEASE update SOON-- i will be with you until the very end! ~your very admiring and devoted fan

Author's Response: Hahaha yes, it is indeed the same potion :p Thanks so much, and I'm working on the next chapter as we speak! Not long now, thanks so much for sticking with me :)

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Review #41, by Rictusempra Hiding

27th April 2014:
Please, please update soon! I'm dying to know what happens at the ball...will Anne's Grindelwald dreams come true?? I can't wait, I know you are busy...believe me I'm in my last year of study! But I couldn't create something as wonderful as you have...please update soon! :)

Author's Response: I suck. Once I'm out for the summer all I will do is write I promise!! Only a coupke more days and I will get hard at work. I love you for sticking by!

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Review #42, by rez Hiding

27th April 2014:
I'm still here and I still love you and Anna and of course Tom! He scared the crap out of me after Rachel's murder though omg :P So keen for this ball! I don't mind if it takes time for the next few chapters cause I already know they'll be damn amazing :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much for dealing with my slowness. It means the world and I WILL keep going. I'm planning on writing like a madwoman when I'm out for summer, promise!

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Review #43, by sirius_li potter Hiding

27th April 2014:
I've been reading your story since its nascent stages in 2012 and I have to say it's remarkable how much your writing has grown over the past two years! You're amazing and I especially liked the little POV of Anna's ex in the previous chapter. It's interesting seeing her described through someone else's eyes, especially someone who doesn't know all the drama she's been through. Keep it up and please please update sooner! Much love xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for staying with me, I know how frustrating it is to wait. I won't give up though, and I will binge write as soon as I'm done with all my dumb finals. Lots of love!

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Review #44, by Rhi Hiding

30th March 2014:
Yay! You updated! You are amazing! This chapter was great and I loved how you worked the scene between Anne and Tom in the aftermath of Rachel's death, I was actually really nervous for her. I can't wait to see what happens at the Ball! Again you are amazing! :)

Author's Response: You're a doll, I can't wait to update so hopefully it doesn't take a horribly long time again. It means so much that you waited for me and reviewed :)

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Review #45, by FawkesFelicis Hiding

29th March 2014:
Interesting aftermath of Rachel's death...I like that Anne just felt sort of deflated, it seemed realistic because of the tension dispelled when Rachel died. Of course Tom just punished her, he's so abusive! He makes Malfoy look like a nice guy, that's how messed up Anne's perception of the world is. This was a good chapter and I'm sure the next one will be thrilling! I know how it is trying to keep up with your story, and even though this update was slow I'm still a faithful reader!

Author's Response: You're a doll, I'm the worst for being slow and I'm sure I would have given up if it weren't for readers like you :) I'm really excited about the next chapter though, so it won't take as long! Hope to keep you!

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Review #46, by Evie Scarlett's Gift

21st March 2014:
Another captivating read!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll try to have more out soon :)

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Review #47, by Alyssa Scarlett's Gift

20th March 2014:
Please update! I know that you are busy and all, but I seriously check this site every day! I can't wait to find out what happens!

Author's Response: I suck I know :( I really won't abandon but I know sometimes it seems like the neverending story. ALMOST done with the next chap I mean it haha

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Review #48, by pirateriddle89 Scarlett's Gift

8th March 2014:
This entire story has been amazing please update as soon as possible :)

Author's Response: Thanks! More soon i PROMISE:)

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Review #49, by Alyssa Scarlett's Gift

5th March 2014:
Please, Please, Please update :(

Author's Response: Ahhh Spring Break happened I had to take a week off, but it should be posted by the end of the week :)

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Review #50, by FawkesFelicis Scarlett's Gift

24th February 2014:
I was totally not expecting Rachel to die, but I had a feeling that Anne would start killing people soon, and I'm kinda glad that Rachel is out of the picture, even if she didn't deserve that at all! I am curious what Tom is planning for this ball, and I'd like to know more about the Tom/Malfoy/Anne triangle that you had going for a while. Now that I'm caught up I guess I'll just have to sweat it out!
I know I always have positive things to say about this story, because it really is the best fan fic I have ever read, but I have one piece of constructive criticism that I hope you will not mind my sharing. Some of your sentences are structured a little awkwardly, and could be refined. You have sections that are elegant that I can tell you put a lot of thought into, such as Anne's retrospective moments, but then there are plot segments that aren't as polished.
I really love your imagination, and this is a beautiful story. I am really moved and inspired by your writing. If you have the time and interest I would be deeply honored if you would read my story, although I don't update often enough because I'm really busy too!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for keeping up with my story, it means a whole lot. Thank you for caring enough to help me get better also, I agree with you that writing Anne's thinking parts comes much more easily to me than some others. Always room to get better! I will definitely check out your story, and I have the next chap almost polished off and ready to go now :)

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