Hi! I saw u haven't updated in a while and I just wanted to encourgae you to keep going! I love this story and I hope you don't abandon it! We are all still with you!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have been SO busy but I've finally gotten going on the new chap and am excited to get it up! I can't thank you enough for dealing with my slowness, the new one will be up within the week though :D Report Review
HIII. ok i started reading your story a couple of months ago. i know people have said it again and again but i have to say it again: IT'S AMAZING. voldemort/oc is now a favorite of mine and i've been telling my potthead friends about its amazingness. i check for updates like every single day. i think your portrayal of voldemort is just perfect. everything from his unwillingness to give into human desires and the cold evil intimidating air he gives off to the way he manipulates and uses people so easily without guilt. its flawless. i wish i could describe the core and heart of people's personalities so vividly like you do. i am a writer myself and i've been so inspired. apart from that, you have no idea how many nights i've lain awake wondering what the next chapter will bring and whether or not the ending will be what i desperately want it to be. ONE QUESTION: are you going to end it so it picks off with the original HP series? b/c we all know in the legit series voldemort doesnt have a wife called anna :P so does she like die, or something, actually don't tell me.
anyways, all that being said, YES i am pressuring to update soon. and fast. and like asap before i die from the suspense. i love you and you're amazing thanks for this beautiful piece of fanfic that never fails to bring a smile to my face when i see a chapter has been uploaded :)Author's Response: This made my week! It means so much to me when someone takes the time to write such a lovely review. I'm honored you like my story so much and I am so happy I've helped inspire your own writing. There's a lot to come, and no matter how much of a slowpoke I'm being, I will never give up on this story! Stick with me and the new chap will be here soon:) Report Review
Oh, please update! This chapter was so amazingand you can't just leave us hanging like that! I know RL is busy but please update asap!Author's Response: i''m sorry really :( College sucks...I am always thinking about the fic tho I'll be back as soon as I can. Hopefully son! Report Review
oh my god. I don't even know what to say. well first, this is actually the first Tom/OC I've read (as far as I remember) and I have completely fallen in love with this ship thanks to you! I'm so obsessed! I'm as obsessed with this story as Anne is with Tom :D it's actually so different from anything ive ever read.. it's almost like some Severus/OCs but it's so much better because it's so much more realistic having someone fall in love with the gorgeous amazing teenage Tom than greasy old snape :p I love your portrayal of him so much! It works so well, even though I often think its unrealistic that they're both that involved and intelligent at that age. I mean, he hasn't even killed his grandparents and he's developed a personal relationship with grindelwald himself and shot down various european ministries? nevertheless it's highly entertaining and I love him to bits. That last scene though OH MY LORD WHATS WRONG HIM SHSKSMBSKSJ. you know, besides the fact that he's Voldemort.. how could he? This makes no sense!! he would never even come close to risking 'emotional attachment' wit anna, no matter how much he wanted to persuade her! how does he even understand that she likes him?! and why the hell would he get angry halfway and then stop?!?! well okay fine it's all completely logical but that doesn't mean I have to like it! most frustrating moment ever! although not half as frustrating as realizing that you haven't updated since July (yeah I know it was less then a month ago. doesnt mean I endorse authors having a life and doing anything other than updating their amazing stories hahahaha only joking. but do update soon! rest assured I shall be checking up everyday like your other dedicated fans :P Author's Response: aw haha thanks so much for your long review! I love reading your reaction, and i know, theres a lot in my story that is frustrating/doesnt make sense for now but i hope the end is satisfying! and there WILL be an end, no matter how slow I may be. Sorry for the waits, but college life is busy hehe I'm doing my best on the next one, it shouldn't be long:) Report Review
Simply breathtaking.Astonishing.And finally they kissed.Im hoping for more Tom and Anne romance.
Please:)Amazing story.Author's Response: thanks sooo much for reviewing and being so awesome haha there will definitely be more soon, and who knows what kinds of romance will pop up! Stay tuned! Report Review
Love the Story.More chapters please please please.Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you took the time to review, I'm doing my best to get the next one ready to go:) Report Review
I love this story.Its breathtaking,nerve-racking,brilliant and Real.The way you capture Tom or Azkabans (I hope I wrote that right) most wanted is astonishing.This is exactly how Lord Voldemort was supposed to be in His younger years.Anna is my all time favorite character from all the fanfictions I have read.I love that She is ambitious and that She is ambitious.Did I mention that I love that She is ambitious.And I love the fact that She is in Slytherin.She has so much determination.She seems real.And sometimes She can be horrible and jealous but I could never hate Her ever.I can see why She is attracted to Tom.Tom is brilliant and charming and good looking.Well to other people he seems like that.Because Realy He is just a bully and a hypocrite.But I love Tom too because of You.And I hope He and Anna stay close ;) if You know what I mean...well as Close as Tom can because in His mind love is for fools like Albus Dumbeldore.I love that Tom is so dark and I can imagine the way He speaks and the way he manipulates with people.They are perfect for each other.I love again the way you describe Malfoy.Malfoy is great but Im keeping My finger grossed for Anne and Tom.I hope you continue this story and I hope you conclude some thing like When they graduate Hogwarts and when Tom goes to work for Borgin and Burkes.And when he goes to Albania and oh I forgot after he graduates he asks Dippet for a change to teach The defense against the dark arts but he says no.Okei now Im just being enoying.What ever you do I know It will be brilliant.And for last I love for the thousand time the...I dont know what to call them ...quotes..maybe at every chapter..Anyway I wanted to ask abot one saying:The wolfs teeth are always hidden in the sheeps wool.So Its a Estonian saying and Im assuming You know Estonia.How?Im just curious cus alot of people have no idea that Estonia even exists.Im obsessed as You can see.I check everyday if you have posted.Creepy?:)I think You are a brilliant writer and keep up the good work.Author's Response: hahahahah omg you have no idea how happy you make me. Its the best feeling in the world to know some story i wrote affects another person so much:) I'm honored and i hope i can do your high expectations justice. I may be slow sometimes and I apologize, but i promise to finish this story and do my best to give you guys all the drama and romance and epic-ness I've been planning in my head! Thanks SO much again, and trust me a long review like this could never be annoying haha you da best! Report Review
This is amazing.Im addicted.You have serious talent.Author's Response: Ee thanks!! Ha i'm so happy you like it, I'll try to get the next one out soon and keep you addicted;) Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot! Report Review
I love your fanfiction.The best I have read.Keep it up!Author's Response: That is such a nice compliment to read after spending such a long time on the fic. Thanks!! More soon, I hope you like it:) Report Review
Ah! They kissed! I can't wait for more!Author's Response: hehehe finalyyy right? More is on the way, i'm wrapping up the next chapter soon:) Report Review
Hey! Great chapter. I think you've written it really well, very in-canon for Tom. One request - please write more chapters soon!!! :D loving it!Author's Response: Heyy thanks sooo much for taking the time to review! It helps motivate me a lot. I'm glad you liked how I wrote Tom, i'm doing my best to get the next chap out soon:) Report Review
wowow, I adored this chapter and not only because of the kiss (which was BREATHTAKING) but I loved your description of the chamber and that moment they shared in there. You can see Tom's inner-voldermort in this chapter quite prominently, especially when he wouldn't let anne into the chamber. I'm getting the feeling that he started out kissing her in order to persuade her but then he kind of went a bit far without meaning to and now he's angry with himself for being human? haha Idk but it's like that in my head. 'm guessing that Tom knows that anne's attractive and that he's been curiously attracted to her at times (he IS a hot-blooded teenager after all lol) but he just doesn't experience human feelings of 'love' or something.
Okay, now I'm just rambling but thanks for the lovely chapter, can't wait for more! :)Author's Response: Hahaha I loveee reading your rambling no worries! I like all your thoughts, you seem to understand my Tom as well as anyone could...i'll just say he's always full of surprises, both good and bad. I'm glad you liked it, it's one of my favorite parts of the story:) More son I'll do my best to be speedy Report Review
The wait...was worth it. It was a splendid chapter, the way you describe the intimate events is...intense. Your boyfriend must be quite the charmer, darling. And if all those feelings you wrap in words are just a work of fiction, then I'd like to borrow your mind! :D
Regards - V.Author's Response: Hahah aww I'm glad you thought the wait was worth it. I hate taking forever but I want the chaps to be the way I want them before I post. And ha good one...I think we all have ideas about how intimate events should be played out..and no real boy can compete with Tom Riddle for charm ;) More son! Report Review
Finally a kiss yay! This story's great. I know it wasn't in this chapter but I just remembered it - the bit where Anne hates the woman who loves Grindelwald even though he's evil was really well done. Really looking forward to the next chapter!Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! And yes Grindelwald and his Katarina are nowhere near gone from the story ;) More soon I hope! Report Review
Oh my goodness this was just soo cute and aaw I feel he is disappointed for him showing some sort of weakness towards her or was he just using her pulling her deeper into his malicious world. 0:Author's Response: Hahaha thanks for reviewing and hmmm both of your suggestions are good ones...Tom is never going to be fulyyy explained but we will dive deeper into his motives and emotions! More son Report Review
Once again, you amazed us all (or me at least). The kiss scene was wonderfully done. I liked how you showed how manipulative Tom is getting through him attacking Anne as well as the Vow scene. I'm so glad you're using your skills to write this fanfiction.Author's Response: Youre so sweet! You dont know how much your time and appreciation mean to me...I sure wouldn't be still writing if it weren't for your guys' reviews! I'm glad you liked it, more son (hopefully haha) stay tuned:) Report Review
This was like so amazing, I was reading it and my mind was fnrurigrnegna, cos it was so epic! Annie and Tom!! Finally! But I kind of want Malfoy to come back instead of Tom! More malfoy please!Author's Response: Yayy glad you liked it! It took long enough for them to get together haha...and nooo worries malfoy isn't going anywhere:) Report Review
Hey, I'm still loving the story! Just to be clear, is Abraxas in the same year as Anne?Author's Response: Thanksss I'm glad you took the time to review! And yes he is Report Review
Wow. This chapter was absolutely amazing. I take back anything negative I have said about your story.Author's Response: lmao well thanks! i appreciate that you liked it so much, reviews like these are what keep me writing:) More sooon Report Review
Getting better and better!! I bow to you, Riddle Queen! XD 100/10! (I also like how you've got those quotes for the chapters. How did you find them? :) And may I ask how old you are?)Author's Response: Aww thanks a lot I like reading your reviews! I got the quotes just either over time after seeing/hearing ones I like or searching keywords on quote sites. And I'm nineteen! Hope I can keep ya entertained:) Report Review
Hey - I'm in the process of reading this and it is so good! You've clearly done a load of research with dates and stuff, and I think it flows really well. You're a brilliant writer and I can't wait to read on! You've got Tom just right, I think! :) xxAuthor's Response: Hiii thanks so much for leaving a review, it means a lot! I'm glad I was able to interest you enough to start reading, and I hope you continue to enjoy the fic:) Report Review
amazing chapter like always! so glad i checked up on this fic and was surprised and excited to see two chapters i hadn't read yet! can't wait for more :)Author's Response: yayyy glad you're back! Next ones getting submitted real soon check back:) Thanks! Report Review
I must admit it wasn't my favorite chap, however I really liked the solution with her parents. But please update soon, I enjoy this story all too much :DAuthor's Response: Thanks for taking the time to review! I agree...not my favorite chap either haha but i'll say this...the next one is definitely up there ;) Stay tuned and I hope to keep you entertained! Report Review
Your fic is...amazing. That's all I have to say. Keep up with the good work and update soon.
Regards - V.Author's Response: thanks sooo much! You brightened my day with your compliment:) More soon, the next chap is very nearly finished. Report Review
Please update! This story is just plain AMAZING!Author's Response: Heyy you thanks! I'm almost done with the next chappy, hold on:) Report Review
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