Please try to keep up with this stor as much as possible!!! Its amazing!Author's Response: I'm going to try as much as possible! Thanks :) Report Review
Oh, I just absolutely love this story. I love how no one else knows about Rose and Scorpius, and the drama is awesome. Please please please keep going!Author's Response: Thank you! I really appreciate it, and am going to try really hard! Report Review
OMG Scorose!!! Best idea ever! And an awesome chapter too! I hope your next quarter isn't that bad! Good luck!Author's Response: Isn't it though? Thank you so much! I'm going to need all the luck I can get :) Report Review
Weasleynumber8!!! How I have missed you, and the story! And i don't consider you spoiling us with this chapter, more like making up. Joking! But I do hope you write another one.
Dan is at the top of my hate list. And that list is pretty long... I mean he even tops Voldemort, Bryan's dad off of Nine Lives of Chloe King (amazing show btw), my Science eacher, and the much loved and hated chocalte syrup.. which i should not have eaten today. He shouldn't be pressurikng Rose to have sex. It probably wouldn't even be good. If it would be with Scorpius it would be filled with passion and the exciting element of fobidness. Not to mention it'd be with the man she actually LOVES!
And speaking of passion, my what a little sexay scene in the ROR. Looks like Scorpius couldn't handle it anymore... Is it bad i only feel .0001% of pity for Dan?
Loved it! Every teeny-weeny bit!
--Gin-ginAuthor's Response: Well hello! It's nice to see you again!
Wow that is a looot of hate! More than chocolate syrup? What madness! He is kind of pressuring her, it's true, but also remember that he's a guy! He's just being all pouty really.
And thank you! I was hoping that it would be sexay lol But it's really not bad that you feel pity for Dan. You have no idea what's going on in that kid's head anyways, trust me it's cool.
Hehe NOW you're intrigued.
Thanks so much for the review! It made me super happy :) Report Review
Well, well, well, WELL.
Look who's back!!! Hahaha, I thought you left completely!! But no! I'm glad your back though, I've missed this story! And it makes a big BANG with a new chapter full of SNOGGING. Lovely:) Completly understand the whole "GAHTOOBUSYFORLIFEGAHSCHOOLSUCKSGAHIDONTHAVEANYTIMEFORMYSELFGAH" yeah, it's a horrid exsistence I'd say. BUT this chapter DOES make up for it, a little bit;) I hope you whip out another chapter sonnn!! Totally made my day this did, another chapter will make ANOTHER day. If you catch my drift here. Dan sounds like a douche to me:/ I hope Rose ditches him and goes for the lovely-blonde-hottie-who-walks-through-metal-detectors-and-his-ABS-OF-STEEL-set-them-off-specimen. Hehehe. Update PLEASE STAT. So this FAN-BLOODY-TASTIC story to continue. Thammks:)Author's Response: Well, well, well, WELL.
Yeah, I'm back lol It's super exciting! I was so mad at myself last quarter :[ I'm glad you liked the chapter, it was about half finished for three months and I had begun to hate it a little bit if you must know lol
I plan on sending a new chapter to the queue very soon as a matter of fact! I just need to right about three more pages I think. Sooo excited!
To the last part of your review, maaaybe that would happen sometimes soon! Then again... I guess you'll see soon!
Thanks for the review! I smiled the whole way through reading it :) Report Review
THEY KISSED :D or rather snogged, but still :) loved this chapter :) Scorpius is soo adorable :) can't wait for the next chapter :)Author's Response: THEY DID! He is freaking adorable, I love that kid. Thank you for the review! I'm almost done with the next chapter :) Report Review
The best chapter ever ! arghh cant wait for the next chapterAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm almost done with the next one, it's going in the queue soon! Report Review
This chapter was umm really hot and heavy needless to say i loved it Author's Response: Yesss isn't it great? lol thanks! Report Review
OMG the kiss rocked i read that part at least 6 times before i thought to finish the chapter love your writing and this story keep up the awesome work :PAuthor's Response: Really? Awesome! Thanks so much, that's great praise! And I will try lol Report Review
SO GOOD! I loved this!!
Pleas keep writing! UPDATE!
:)Author's Response: YOU'RE SO GOOD! Hehehe That's what she said.
Well, that was embarrassing.
I will definitely keep writing! Thanks for the review :) Report Review
YES! *does excited dance about makeout session* MORE MORE MORE! Sorry, but this was really really good.Author's Response: Hahaha that was hilarious. Thank you verrryyy much! I will be sure to give you MORE MORE MORE! Report Review
ABSOLUTELY MAGNIFICENT! I love the story from the beginning and the anticipation is killing me! When's the next chapter going up?! I'm normally a very patient person but I'm about to go insane! :PAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I'm putting it up as soon as the queue reopens in January. I missed the boat by just two days! I hope that you enjoy the next chapter :) Report Review
*sobs* That was your most deep and heartwrenching chapter EVER! and, having said that, I LOVED IT! gawd, when Rose was saying to always come to her when he was upset, and she was all and now im goona hug you, eep, i was like DENIAL! ROSE YOU LOVE HIM JUST SAY IT! it's like Bri, and we all know they do ed up in a brrom closet snogging.
Speaking of, please write that, please! Their my second favorite pair in this fic, and that would make my day!
Lol, i knew they were gonna tie! I love their code names too, Candy and Cherry. Sometimes i wonder what would happen if the Malfoy's would go in the Muggle world, so funny.
--Gin-ginAuthor's Response: Thanks! I really wasn't sure about this chapter, but I think that it turned out pretty well, and people seemed to like it a lot, which is great! And I know, Rose needs to open her freaking eyes for goodness' sake...
And I will definitely consider writing the broom cupboard scene, most definitely indeed :)
Thanks so much! I really appreciate the feedback! Report Review
Sorry, sorry, sorry! School has been so getting in the way, its like, like how harry always wins the snicth, but i'm Malfoy! Sucks!
Scorpius isn't being very nice to the other girls! Gawd, Rose nneds to teach him a lesson!
Aw, this line made my heart break. It made me forgive him for being a manwhore!: He wished he was in denial too. :(
Bri and Freddy were snogging? In a broom closet? Finnally!!!
oh my gosh, there's this kid, and he looks exactly like Harry potter! Except mexican! I call him Mexican Harry Potter, i don't think he likes it though. He says hp is gay.
Off to the next chap,
--Gin-ginAuthor's Response: Well! I'm glad that Malfoy finally caught the snitch! Lol I know... Scorpius can't be perfect all the time, he'd be boring if I did that! But I'm glad that he redeemed himself in your eyes.
Yes! Bri and Fred in the closet! Winnage, if I do say so myself :)
Well, this kid sucks. Mexican's make me laugh, and HP makes me happy, so I would take it as a compliment if I were him lol Thanks for reading! Report Review
I just read the chapter again because I don't want to do homework, and I remembered why I Report Review
AMAZING STORY. Can't wait for the next chapter :)Author's Response: I'm making you wait so long! But the next chapter is ALMOST done! Report Review
i really liked this chapter and i hope you update soon
:) i want to say this is one of your better chapters but then again that's just my opinion :) keep up the good work :) it should be Fri . that sounds alot better than Bred :)Author's Response: Well thank you! I'm actually really excited that you think that it's one of my better chapters, not going to lie! That means I didn't fail in my attempts at being cute! Win! And thanks for your vote lol I'm pretty sure that Fri is winning! Report Review
Haha, Rose and Scorpius in the Muggle World was entertaining. :DDD I can't wait for your updates with the rest. I'm also pretty interested in the Bri and Fred story... (:
~KhanhAuthor's Response: Thanks! I hoped that they were entertaining and am glad that I succeeded! Oh, and by the way, I really appreciate that you reviewed almost every chapter. I love it when people do that! Report Review
Haha, I loved this chapter. Sometimes you just gotta take a break from romance to witness a (highly amusing) round of pranks. :D
~KhanhAuthor's Response: Furreal! I love me a good prank war! Also, it's way easier to write than romance so I speed wrote this entire chapter. It was a huge accomplishment! Thanks for the review! Report Review
Oooh, I really liked this chapter, but I did notice some mistakes. For example: "Denial" is misspelled as "denile" and "idle" as "idol".
But other thatn that, pretty good so far. (:
~KhanhAuthor's Response: Uuuugggh typos are my enemy! I swear, I DO know how to spell... Most of the time at least lol Thanks for the honest review! Report Review
Awww, yeah! They kissed! Sqeee! >.<
Okay, okay, now I'm really excited to see what will happen at their meeting. :D
~KhanhAuthor's Response: Thanks! I'm excited that you are excited :D Report Review
Aw, yeah! We have now stepped into a time warp from second to fifth year, and I'm sure things are going to get much more interestng. :DDD
~KhanhAuthor's Response: Time warp! Yes, I was quite excited when I finally emerged out of second year :) Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
A midnight duel with a Potter and Malfoy during first year that never really happened... now when has that happened before? (:
I liked this chapter much better than the rest so far... I guess it's just because of the Rose/Scorpius bonding. :DDD
~KhanhAuthor's Response: Wait. That happened before? WHEN?! Haha yeah, in the epilogue Harry tells Albus not to get into any midnight duels. Me, being the rebellious person that I am, took that as a personal challenge lol Report Review
I haven't read this chapter before you fixed it, but it doesn't seem half as bad as you made it out to be so I think you succeeded. (:
I can't wait to read the rest, especially the more recent ones! ^-^;
~KhanhAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! Yes, it's MUCH better, I assure you lol I wrote that chapter when I was like 16... I wasn't the best writer in the world at that point in time it would appear :P I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Report Review
That was great! I actually liked your sorting hat song! All of the other Authors just skipped that part, and yours is more REAL, at least to me.Thank you for the awesome story!Author's Response: Well thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it :) Report Review
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