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Review #26, by Aakii Unexpected

12th June 2015:
I don't want the story to end either, but I am so excited to see if Draco proposes and if so, how it happens! I feel bad for not writing more reviews, but I am REALLY enjoying this story. In fact, I am neglecting my housework today because I am enjoying it too much :)

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Review #27, by Aakii Agony

10th June 2015:
Well played. Your characters are very believable even though it is so out of character for them!

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Review #28, by Aakii Potions

10th June 2015:
So good! I am so happy I don't have to wait for the next chapter to come out!

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Review #29, by Aakii Forgiveness

10th June 2015:
That does sound like something Lucius would do. Great job!

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Review #30, by Aakii Friends

10th June 2015:
I really liked this chapter. This is my first time reading it, and it was great!

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Review #31, by Aakii Flying

10th June 2015:
Loving your story! I like the premise. Some Draco/Hermione plots are hard to buy into, but this one is working for me :)

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Review #32, by Zsaz Lovely

8th June 2015:
Love Blaise, he's an amazing character!

Author's Response: Thank you! He was a blast to write x

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Review #33, by B Truth

17th April 2015:
The only thing I didn't like about this chapter was Hermione spitting in Raven's face. I just think its very unclassy and doesn't fit in with her character.
Other than that, really enjoying your story so far.

Author's Response: Not much in this fic fits her character lbh, I wish I had the time and effort to rewrite this entire fic because it could be so much better, but I don't :( Thank you tho x

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Review #34, by Moonwillow Friends

17th March 2015:
HAHAHAHAHAHAH OMG The AWKWARD PART HAS ME IN LOLS like just imagining him saying it haha haha haha haha love this

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Review #35, by Bella Gentleman

4th February 2015:
I am really enjoying this story so far and I can't wait to see where it goes next :) Dramione is my favourite

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Review #36, by Alexandra New Years pt. 2

21st January 2015:
You make Blaise act so funny even in serious situations which really make me laugh, but I sure do hate Pansy. I loved the chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you x

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Review #37, by Luna Lovegood Leaving Hogwarts

1st January 2015:
Your fanfic was the best I have ever read!! Your an amazing author!! I am a emotional wreak from all of that ! I can't wait to read more !!!

Author's Response: Thank you x

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Review #38, by NightCharm29179 Denial

17th December 2014:
This is definitely off to a great start! :D

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Review #39, by Morgana Ravenclaw Rollercoaster

16th October 2014:
I can't help but not to trust this Eloise. Just because of Eloise Midgen that told Umbridge about Dumbledore's Army in the 5th book. You know Cho's friend? I think I spelled Eloise's last name from the book correctly. It could be wrong as it s quite late, and I don't feel like looking it up :)

All the best,


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Review #40, by Morgana Ravenclaw Lovely

16th October 2014:
I really thought Draco was going to propose at the dinner... what with Hermione wearing Cissy's dress and all. Great chapter, and I'm really just loving the story in general.

Thanks for writing, and giving me a way to get out of my own head. I can't tell you enough how much it is appreciated. I'm thinking of doing a fan fic myself. It would be based on my handle here on HPFC, Morgana Ravenclaw. But I don't really know where to go with it quite yet. I have some idea, just not one that has gotten me writing so far. Again thanks for the story. Also, I was wondering if you had thought of writing some of the articles that Lucius has mentioned about Draco and Hermione being together. I think those would be fun to read. Maybe something from Rita Skeeter? I've also been wondering where Hagrid is in this story.. He has always been one of my very favorites. I know this story is already finished, but I hadn't left a review in quite some time. I thought it was about time.
Have you written anything besides HP fan fic? If so I would like to read more of your work. I just wrote a story based on true events. I guess you could call it a ghost/haunting story. It was a blast for me to write as it was based on something I experienced. But enough about me.. I loved all of the interactions with little Teddy!
Keep up the great stories!!

All the best,

Morgana Ravenclaw

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the long review, I'm really happy that you took the time! :)

I haven't really thought about revisiting this story in years, and I don't really think I have the time for it either :( But writing those articles would be hilarious, especially from Rita! I've been writing original works lately, and I don't really feel like I have much time over for fanfiction other than one-shots, and I don't really post things anymore. Sorry! Also, you should really go for it and write some fanfics! It's great experience, if nothing else :)

Thank you again x

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Review #41, by Morgana Ravenclaw Flying

8th October 2014:
Siriusly great chapter ;) LOVED IT!


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Review #42, by hannah Flying

16th September 2014:

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Review #43, by LizMalfoy Valentine's Day

15th September 2014:
February would be their four month anniversary.

Author's Response: Math is clearly not my thing, lmao x

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Review #44, by Method ski Leaving Hogwarts

11th September 2014:
I loved reading this story. I have not been able to put it down since yesterday. I think my favorite thing is that you created the Hermione/ Draco relationship slowly. So many of the other stories rush it to the point of being silly. All the characters were written in a way that I felt like this all fitted into the Harry Potter world.

Author's Response: Thank you! x

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Review #45, by SilverDoe4Ever Lovely

6th September 2014:
OMG This is so good keep on writing Cathyyy

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Review #46, by Cynthia Names

5th September 2014:
OMG! It's super good so far I can't stop reading it.

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Review #47, by Caius Gentleman

16th August 2014:
Im sorry but I'm not sure you thought this story through at all. There's just to many sh*t wrong with it, and I'm only 2 chapters in. Firstly, how the hell is Draco even at school anymore? I suppose the trio re-did there 7th year because they missed it, but Draco didn't. Also, Hermione doesn't feel like Hermione at all. Another thing is that she completely dropped divination in year 3. Ofcourse Dramione is completely and utterly impossible in any logical way but this is ff so I'm nit gonna rant on that. Buf you could've made it a bit more of a mystery, more subtle how they developed feelings. Its just so obvious its boring. And last, I get that Hermione could have traumatic behavior bc the war. But she would be smart enough to not get mad at everyone for BLOODY GETTING OVER IT. This really annoys me. Hermione is bright enough to know to not live in the past. Ofcourss everybody is trying to just continue their lives as it was. In short, though completely illogical, that aside a decent concept. But imho the rest just isn't well thought out/ well written. I advice you to keep writing and think your stories through alot more from now on.

Author's Response: Hi, first of all - you do realize that this fanfic is over 5 years old, right? And that this was my first fanfic ever (meaning there was no way this was going to end up a masterpiece)? Also, why would you read a Dramione fanfiction if you think it's something so illogical that you need to mention that twice?

Those things aside, I totally agree with you. Looking back on this fic, I cringe a lot. I didn't have it planned out, I didn't even try to keep the characters in character (I kind of wrote them however I needed them to be to fit the story). I didn't do as much research as I should've before I sat down and wrote it and because of that, I got a lot of things wrong because I couldn't remember everything correctly. Let's not even talk about the grammar because it is just horrible. Thankfully, I've grown a lot as a writer since I wrote this fanfiction and I must say, I'm a lot better at writing these days (it's been over 5 years, it'd be really bad if I'd gotten worse).

Thank you for taking the time to review tho, I appreciate it :) x

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Review #48, by Frank Denial

20th July 2014:
I'm enjoying this so far. What country are you from originally? What is your native language? Are you using voice recognition software?

Author's Response: I'm Swedish, which is why my grammar used to be SO awful. I wasn't really used to writing in English and this was the first novel length thing I ever wrote in English, so it's full of typos and weird grammar. Sorry about that, but I learned so much from writing fics and I'm a LOT better at writing these days. Thanks for reading x

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Review #49, by guest Home

20th July 2014:
You've called his eyes gray orbs about 15 times. It's weird. Only the iris is gray, and enough with the orbs already!

Author's Response: Hahaha, I remember "grey orbs" being THE THING to call Draco's eyes back in the day. I was just kind of copying other people because I thought it sounded really pretty. Sorry I kept repeating myself. Thanks for reading x

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Review #50, by guest Truth

19th July 2014:
All the way through the Harry Potter books I was surprised that people were constantly allowed to go Scott free after attempted murder. You have at least given Matthew Raven a bit of punishment, but it still makes me wonder why the original author was so lenient.

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