gee, i knew she could be a biatch!
great story though lol
luv Ava xoxoAuthor's Response: Yeah, she was a bit cruel...
By the way, I am planning to write a sequel later...
Thanx for reading and reviewing, you are really kind :)
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make them get together please! that's so sad.Author's Response: I am planning to write a sequel to make them get together :)
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Gosh! d ending was priceless, really 'ruthless Hermione' was too good. U know i really like Hermione/Fred pairing and there are very few stories people write on it, but, u did a good job. It was nice and humerous.
-AashnaAuthor's Response: Dear Aashna,
thank you very much for the kind words! It is always a great feeling to read reviews like this! By the way, I have just finished writing a Hermione/George one-shot, maybe you will like that, too :)
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanx again!:)
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funny chapter!!! i don't know why but i think u should do a sequel. what do u think?^_^
Harry and GinnyAuthor's Response: Well I'll think about it :)
Thank you for the motivating review!:)
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OMG!! It was so sweet.but i wish hermione wud hv stayed...!!Author's Response: Yeah, I can understand you... But she was too proud to stay...
I can see you have read my other stories, too, always leaving nice reviews! Thanx a bunch! xxx Report Review
That was such a huge twist.
It caught me off guard.
Very creative, I've got to say.
And awesome idea with Fred making her think it was love potion and it worked because she thought it was, but it actually wasn't.
I also understood that when she suddenly started feeling attracted to him, it was only after she was allowed to or could.
You have to make a sequel!
It'll be just as fun as the first one.Author's Response: Dear CleMonPink, I can see you have read my other works, too, it is really flattering!
I also appreciate your long, detailed review, it is very kind of you, thank you!:)
Maybe I will write a sequel later, I'll see!
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I like it. =D Awesome job on it. =DAuthor's Response: Thanx a bunch for the nice review!:)
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Ah.h.h.h.h.h.h! Awesome! What a thriller - that was great.Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!:) Thank you for the kind words!:) Report Review
hahaha poor fred. hermione why did u do this to him WHYYYAuthor's Response: Yeah, poor Fred was given a cruel lesson by the too proud Hermione... :) That's life.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!:) Report Review
OMG! I loved it! You are the queen of one-shots. I love how you torture the characters.Author's Response: I think/hope the characters like this torture... :)
I can see you read all my works, it means very very very much to me!:)
And for the kind words I am really grateful!:) Report Review
ROFLMAO!!! very clever!!! i cant believe u! that is priceless!Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment, my devoted reader!:) Report Review
Bahaha. I love it! Fred is so amazing! I luffles him. Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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uh, she just left him? and comon, hernione is smarter than that. right?Author's Response: Don't you like the ending? How would you have finished the story?
Anyway, thank you for reading and reviewing:) Report Review
Ouch! Different, boy fools girl, girl and boy snog, boy tells truth, girl leaves him high and dry. L love it.Author's Response: Perfect summary! Much better than mine :)
Thank you for reading and reviewing, Kitty Karma :) Report Review
OMG! That was so mean! He had it coming to him but still! That was devious and SO something Hermione would do. Great story! 10/10!Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed it! Thank you for the wonderful review!:) Report Review
Really, really mean there at the end--but just. But come to think of it, Hermione must've had a secret crush on him to give in so easily. A good tale my friend. Truly worthy of praise.Author's Response: Yeah, I agree with you on Hermione's secret crush on Fred :)
Thank you for your kind words, they mean a lot to me :) Report Review
hermiones so cruel! poor fred! well, i guess poor hermione... but she was even meaner to him! :( this was good. freds pretty clever, playing mental tricks on her! :) definately makes up for the cruelty! ;)Author's Response: Dear someone___1, thank you so much for reading and reviewing both of my Fremione stories! You are so kind! Thanks a lot!:) Report Review
It was okay, but I wanted to see them have a happy ending. They are a really cute couple! Good job though.Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm so glad you liked it :) Report Review
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