I absolutely loved this story!!! It was amazing, especially with it being your first story! Kepp up with writing other stories, you're a really good author :) Report Review
please dont shoot me,
but i personally love zach.
/holds up shield
hm, nice chapter ;D
update soon? Report Review
it was good dont worry! :)
and ohhh, zach came back . . . :O
can't wait for the last chapter
:D 10/10 Report Review
very good chapter. i loved the sirius/sophia interaction! Report Review
OMG!! They are the cutest! I can't believe there's only one more!! I will deffo check out your new one when you post it!...if I remember lol. Can't wait for the last one :)Author's Response: haha neither can I! thanks, I'll probably write in the AN that it's me because I think many don't really look at the author's name.. I know I don't, lol ;p Report Review
I just started reading your story and it is GREAT! Please Please update soon! Report Review
first hp fan fiction i ever read, and it's still the best one.
amazing.Author's Response: wow thanks! I'm really flattered :) Report Review
Ah, love love love love love it. With an extra love. Took them long enough! More more more!
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Omg it was perfect! I wish you could see how big my smile is right now lol. Can't wait for more, is there more or are we at the end? :)Author's Response: thanks! there's a bit more, but not much. two or three chapters maybe :) Report Review
FINALLY! I was so excited when I read this chapter. I'm so glad Sirius and Sophia are together at last! I can't wait for the next update!!! Report Review
Oh wow, awesome chapter/story.
Update soon! Report Review
twas a bit cheesy at the end
but i still like it :D
what is going to happen now they're together?
10/10Author's Response: thank you! :) I'll try to update soon Report Review
Yes, a bit cheesy, but who cares? I don't, for one...
Very aww indeed. That's all there is to say.
~LAuthor's Response: haha thank you! I'm glad you don't care about the cheesy parts Report Review
Ew, I'm not regretting my previous review, upon seeing how sibling-ly Sirius and Sophia are in this chappie...Moving on...Author's Response: haha, I haven't actually thought about that but they are :P thanks for the reviews ^^ Report Review
heya, just a quick note, no the guitar thing wasn't silly, quite cute actually. Ooh, things are heating up between Sirius and Sophia, cant wait to find out more! Update soon! Report Review
Aah... Now all we need is Sofia to accept it!
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i loved this chapter. sirius is wonderful.Author's Response: thank you! he sure is :) Report Review
Goddamn it why does it have to end?? Please update soon! She needs to confront him, date him, snog, him, shag him, marry him and have his babies! :)Author's Response: haha yes it feels very weird that the end is near. I'll update as soon as possible but my computer is weirder than luna lovegood a the moment so my writing program isn't working. I'll try to fix it asap though :) Report Review
Aww! Sirius is siriusly in love. MEAN SOPHIA!
Yes it was better! Silly bludgers!
And yes, cheesy is true but it is better than super-fighty-thingy-whatever!
GET THEM TO TALK! AGAIN!
~LAuthor's Response: yeah I feel bad for him too :P thanks, yes I thought the cheesy part suited so I just had to put it in the chapter. and you're right, it IS better now that they're not fighting! Report Review
t'was a little cheesy, but everyone needs alittle cheese now and again :)
it was good
and i can't believe this is almost the end :O :(
tis good :)
10/10Author's Response: yes cheesy is good sometimes ^^ I know! it feels very weird. I think I've been working on this for over a year, so it definitely feels strange now that it's almost finished. It won't be the end of my writing, though :) Report Review
Hand raised, waving madly, yelling GET IT TOGETHER GIRL!
Ah, the obligatory scene. Whatever story it is, it's always there. I've only seen one that was different to the others; it's mainly an attack and/or a sighting, though.
xEAuthor's Response: yes I know. I didn't want to write that scene but she didn't know from the beginning of the story and I thought that she needed to find out. I hate the whole "are you going to hate me now?" part, but it was necessary. I just wanted to make it as small as possible Report Review
It wasn't the most interesting chapter, but I agree that it was necessary. She needs to talk to Sirius, I can't wait to see that conversation!!!Author's Response: No I don't like it very much either :P yes the conversation will be very interesting! I'll try to post the next chapter soon but I have so much to do right now so you'll have to wait a little.. hopefully not too long :) Report Review
Yay they know his secret!!! Not too anoyed that she didn't talk to sirius because my guess is he'll be there when she wakes up in the hospital wing...she will wake up wan't she? Ok now i seriously need the next chapter! :) Report Review
You. Are. EVIL!!!
You CANNOT have no private talking between Sirius and Sophia AND end on a Cliffy like THAT!!
That's just mean! :[
Aww poor Remus going all sad! I hate having sad marauders! It makes me sad! :[
A little bit of a boring chappy (sorry, but it is true! =S) But you BETTER Have a brilliant start on the next one, with a cliffy like that! :P
Anyway, over all... Mean, a little boring and evil! (Then again, it IS a filler...)
But I can almost garentee the next will be better!
~LAuthor's Response: haha I like being mean! ;) yes I know that it's boring so it's okay! The next one will be MUCH better! I promise you that. Report Review
Zach should have at least a broken rib... OR ELSE. I'm coming for him. Report Review
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