{reviewid: 2451962, reviewer: 'Blue%20Biro'}
18th December 2010:
heheh, great chapter! it's so obvious they like eachother, even if they dont know it yet :)
you rock! :)
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{reviewid: 2451959, reviewer: 'Blue%20Biro'}
18th December 2010:
aw, what on earth is going on with Artemis and who's inside her head!?! loved the chapter! becky ;p
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{reviewid: 2451953, reviewer: 'Blue%20Biro'}
18th December 2010:
woo, Lilys going with James! yay! loved it! :)
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{reviewid: 2451952, reviewer: 'Blue%20Biro'}
18th December 2010:
fantastic chapter! (AGAIN!) can't wait to read on! you're amazing!
becky ;p 500/10! :)
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{reviewid: 2451951, reviewer: 'Blue%20Biro'}
18th December 2010:
aw, Sirius SO likes her! well, at least a little bit :) you rock!
becky ;p 100/10!
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{reviewid: 2451949, reviewer: 'Blue%20Biro'}
18th December 2010:
hmmm, is Sirius feeling more than a little bit guilty? great chapter! loving it! becky ;p
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{reviewid: 2451947, reviewer: 'Blue%20Biro'}
18th December 2010:
aw, once again poor ARtemis, she just can't catch a break :(
amazing chapter though! ;p
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{reviewid: 2451942, reviewer: 'Blue%20Biro'}
18th December 2010:
urgh, i really hate Sirius right now! why can't he leave Artemis alone!?! it's pretty obvious to see she's not okay :(
brilliantly written chapter, again!
you rock! :)
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{reviewid: 2451940, reviewer: 'Blue%20Biro'}
18th December 2010:
wow, i really like this story, Artemis should really tell her friends about the weird voice in her head though :(
loved it!
becky ;p 10/10! again!
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{reviewid: 2451938, reviewer: 'Blue%20Biro'}
18th December 2010:
aw, poor Artemis! Sirius is such a git somtimes, and so is Melanie! great chappie though ;p
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{reviewid: 2451937, reviewer: 'Blue%20Biro'}
18th December 2010:
great first chapter, can't wait to read more!
loved it! 10/10!
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{reviewid: 2415415, reviewer: 'RedRose202'}
23rd September 2010:
Ok I love your story so please post soon. I especially love the part about her rules and how he says their there to break ;)
RedRose202
Author's Response: I'm working hard on the next chapter... I've just been so busy! Hope to have it up within a week. THanks so much for the review!!!
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{reviewid: 2312821, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
12th March 2010:
it's so cute to see Sirius and Artemis like this, acting all shy. i was surprised at the end of this chapter with them finding Lily and James snogging each other. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2312230, reviewer: 'PUNXITOUT247'}
11th March 2010:
Good story.. Kudos to you.. :) About time for them to start snogging! lol
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{reviewid: 2311390, reviewer: 'Christi%20the%20Death%20Defying%20Genius%20with%20a%20dislocated%20toe'}
| Review #40, by Christi the Death Defying Genius with a dislocated toe | Paradise? |
10th March 2010:
Hey Girlie!
Loved this chapter! I can't wait for the next one! I do like how the kiss in itself wasn't that extraordinary but the surprise was, it's so real life. *cough cough* No comment. lol. Miss you lots and you better kick butt in your Navy courses! :D
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{reviewid: 2310241, reviewer: 'HPGurl123'}
7th March 2010:
Ah, there you are! I am so glad you could pull off this chapter so well. Often times after the main characters get together, the story can fall apart.
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{reviewid: 2307168, reviewer: 'HPGurl123'}
2nd March 2010:
Hey! Where'd you go? I'm excited to see where this ends up. I hope you get to writing this soon.
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{reviewid: 2279033, reviewer: 'Christi%20the%20Death%20Defying%20Genius'}
5th January 2010:
Hey Girlie. :)
LOVED the chapter. About time they got together. Now the question is how long and what is with all the voices? :D
Get over the writers block soon or else I'll throw small pudding pies at you when I see you next (hopefully this year) Lol.
Miss you lots!
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{reviewid: 2258045, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
24th November 2009:
amazing chapter this one. now that Artemis and Sirius are together, what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
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{reviewid: 2256999, reviewer: 'noname'}
22nd November 2009:
I'm so glad you're back! I've missed reading this story. Thank you for the update.
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{reviewid: 2221847, reviewer: 'emilysoxo'}
21st September 2009:
aw
this is so ridiculously cute
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{reviewid: 2213888, reviewer: 'Diego%20is%20better%20than%20any%20bird'}
9th September 2009:
Oh! You've left it at such a terrible place for a two month hiatus. I guess I will have to deal with it.
Have fun in the navy.
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{reviewid: 2212635, reviewer: 'SHHitsamonster'}
7th September 2009:
I really like this story! I just started reading it, but I really like it! Can't wait to see where it goes :)
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{reviewid: 2212461, reviewer: 'dracos_hotter'}
7th September 2009:
DECEMBER?!
Well, have fun in training.
xE
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{reviewid: 2212429, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
7th September 2009:
things between Sirius and Artemis are getting very interesting and i hope she will accept his offer of going with her to the funeral. it's also sad to know that u won't update this story 4 two months but i'll be waiting and looking 4ward to read more.^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
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